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Visual Rewrite—jcirrs

0:01 A girl with red hair appears to be in the bathroom facing a mirror. The faucet is running and it seems she is putting water on her face to wash her face or clean off the tears. 0:02 The … Continue reading

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Visual ReWrite – thirdlady226

Part of the Family You’re the Best Thing to Happen 0:01 – We see an orange cat sitting on a couch. Judging by the couch, the nice pillows, the hardwood floors and the glass doors behind the cat, it seems to … Continue reading

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Visual Rhetoric Rewrite – fromcasablanca

0:04 – You witness a bunch of Caucasian kids on a school bus. The sun is out so the children could be on their way to school or on their way home from school. All of the children are wearing casual … Continue reading

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Visual Rewrite–Douglasadams525

The following is a visual review of a one-minute long anti-texting-and-driving PSA by the Ad Council, titled “Put it Down.”  The video in question can be found here. At the very beginning of the video, at 0:01, we see the scene … Continue reading

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Visual Rewrite- sixfortyfive645

Girls Are Bullied Too 0:01 In the first shot, the camera whirs around kids walking and standing in a school hallway. The kids look young, their ages presumably ranging from thirteen to fifteen years old. They could be in eighth … Continue reading

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Visual Rewrite- Palal24

0.01: In the opening scene, there is a young girl, about 15 years old, walking alone down a high school hallway. She appears to be walking quickly, and her pink backpack is swinging in time with her stride. Her back … Continue reading

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Visual Rewrite – marinebio18

0:02 A not too old, black car drives down what it looks to be a quiet and well off neighborhood.  The car seems to be going speed limit down the street.The driver is not shown in the shot as the … Continue reading

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Visual Rewrite- HaveAnElephantasticDay

.https://youtu.be/-jFAvIuAev0 0:01 There are two hands along the outskirts of the screen. I am not able to tell if they are male or female hands but they are both are holding wine glasses. They are very full of what appears … Continue reading

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E02 Purposeful summaries-Dancingueen

http://www.examiner.com/article/doctors-who-see-poorer-patients-get-poorer-performance-ratings?cid=rss It seems counterintuitive that Doctors who see poorer patients get poorer performance ratings.Doctors and health policy analysts at the Massachusetts general  hospital recently found performance measures for physicians.Doctors who take care of the lower income  patients receive lower performance … Continue reading

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Stone money rewrite- ifurreadingthisits2l8

The idea that money is fiction is a concept that challenges our society and our carefully formed, complex government. In the United States our country runs on the belief that money is real even though in most cases the money … Continue reading

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