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Research position- peachesxo

Errors can kill   Surprisingly, even the most brilliant doctors are more human than we think they are. Medical professionals study extensive hours to become who they are today (Doctors, surgeons, nurses, etc.). These people specialize in the study of the … Continue reading

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Reflective- peachesxo

Core Value I. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development. Throughout Comp II, I realized there is not just one draft. There’s more than … Continue reading

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Bibliography- peachesxo

1.) http://www.propublica.org/getinvolved/item/medical-errors-chat Background: This article talks about  me statistics of how many people were injured because of medical error. The article gives the reader rhetorical questions to keep in mind. This also led me to another article from the Institute of Medicine. … Continue reading

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Rebuttle Rewrite- peachesxo

Doctors make mistakes too Doctors are human. They are trained for several years to make the right diagnosis and treat patients. It takes a very long amount of time for people to become doctors and with that comes stress. Years … Continue reading

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Causal Rewrite-peachesxo

Doctors are not accountable for their murders and mistakes Doctors go through a lot of schooling and train to become who they are today. They are experts in medicine and health practices. We would think they mistakes are very rare … Continue reading

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Open Strong- peachesxo

Surprisingly, even the most brilliant doctors are more human than we think they are. Medical professionals study extensive hours to become who they are today (Doctors, surgeons, nurses, etc.). These people specialize in the study of the human body and other medical … Continue reading

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A10: Definition rewrite-peachesxo

Health insurance is an insurance that everyone wants. This is an insurance that pays for medical expenses such as surgeries and regular checkups. Even though a person might have health insurance, this will not prevent medical mistakes. The big issue with health … Continue reading

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A09: Rebuttal Argument-peachesxo

Doctors make mistakes too Doctors are people who help treat other people in need. They are trained for several years to make the right diagnosis and treat patients. It takes a very long amount of time for people to become … Continue reading

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E11: Rebuttal Exercise-peachesxo

Supportive of Ag-gag laws Article 2- http://www.hcn.org/blogs/goat/conservationists-join-animal-rights-groups-to-challenge-idaho-ag-gag-law “The dairy farmer who fell victim to the activist group is well-known for his unquestioned compassion for his animals,” VanderHulst added. If this dairy farmer really “loved” is animals, they wouldn’t be abused. He … Continue reading

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Causal Argument- peachesxo

Doctors are not accountable for their murders and mistakes When we  go to the hospital or the doctors office, we as patients think that we are getting the best medical treatment there is; however,  that is not the case. Doctors … Continue reading

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