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Rebuttal Rewrite – Oatmealvibes

The Final Showdown: Violent Video Games Are Not The Problem As time goes by and more violent video games continue to be made, the research on how these violent video games affect the behavior and emotions of children is never-ending. … Continue reading

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Grammer Exercise – Oatmealvibes

If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward their child, it increases the risk that their child will grow up hostile towards others. And it’s not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse, a large number of … Continue reading

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Rebuttal – Oatmealvibes

The Final Showdown: Violent Video Games Are Not The Problem As time goes by and more violent video games continue to be made, the research on how these violent video games affect the behavior and emotions of children is never-ending. … Continue reading

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Visual Rewrite – Oatmealvibes

0:00 – A black woman with bantu knots is sitting on her bed. The bed has a notebook on top of the covers. Perhaps it’s her diary. The room is dark, no lights are on and it illuminates a dark … Continue reading

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Visual – Oatmealvibes

0:00 – A black woman with bantu knots is sitting on her bed. The bed has a notebook on top of the covers. Perhaps it’s her diary. The room is dark, no lights are on and it illuminates a dark … Continue reading

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Causal Rewrite – Oatmealvibes

Violent Video Games Do Not Equal Aggression and Violence It’s a common misconception that violent video games such as Call of Duty or Grand Theft Auto cause aggressive, sociopathic, or violent kids based on misleading and poorly done studies. There … Continue reading

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Causal Claim – Oatmealvibes

Violent Video Games Do Not Equal Aggression and Violence It’s a common misconception that violent video games such as Call of Duty or Grand Theft Auto cause aggressive, sociopathic, or violent kids based on misleading and poorly done studies. There … Continue reading

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Definition Rewrite – Oatmealvibes

Violent Video Games Do Not Equal Aggression and Violence The negative effects on a child’s behavior due to violent video games have been an ongoing topic since video games have become more popular in the 20th and 21st centuries. Games … Continue reading

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Definition – Oatmealvibes

The negative effects on a child’s behavior due to violent video games have been an ongoing topic since video games have become more popular in the 20th and 21st centuries. Games such as Call of Duty, God of War, Grand … Continue reading

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Claims – Oatmealvibes

BEGIN THE ONE-HOUR EXERCISE: Section 7 This first part of the sentence is a numerical claim because the author states how long the study has been going on and how many families were involved in the study. The second part … Continue reading

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