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Reflective- strawberryfields4

Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development. Throughout the semester I actively engaged in the feedback process with my professor. I … Continue reading

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Bibliography- strawberryfields4

 Abbott, A. (2014). Sugar substitutes linked to obesity. Nature (London), 513(7518), 290–290.  Background: Zero calorie sugar substitutes are a prime example of low calorie not directly equating to good health. This study examines the unnatural changes that occur in the … Continue reading

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Research- strawberryfields4

Watch Out for the Food Police The multi-billion dollar diet industry shows no mercy while hunting its prey—impressionable consumers of all ages. Major corporations responsible for the manufacturing of diet foods and weight loss products viscously capitalize on the glorified … Continue reading

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Enough About You- strawberryfields4

Money seems to have a big role in our society; one can’t do much or get far without it. It is valuable in different ways, whether it is physically visible or not. In today’s society, it is a necessity to … Continue reading

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Grammar Exercise- strawberryfields4

If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward his child, it increases the risk that his child will grow up hostile toward others. And it’s not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large number of … Continue reading

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Rebuttal Rewrite- strawberryfields4

Not A Simple Fix In recent years teenage eating disorders have emerged as a mental health issue of epidemic proportions. The harsh reality is that anorexia accounts for the highest mortality rate among all mental health issues. While public schools … Continue reading

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Rebuttal- strawberryfields4

Not A Simple Fix In recent years teenage eating disorders have emerged as a health issue of epidemic proportions. The harsh reality is that anorexia accounts for the highest mortality rate among all mental health issues. While public schools have … Continue reading

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Not Because- strawberryfields4

1. Coats wasn’t fired because he was using a legal drug, marijuana, for a legitimate purpose for which he had a prescription. He was fired for violating workplace policy. Revised: While Coats’ employer found his legal use of prescription marijuana … Continue reading

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Robust Verbs- strawberryfields4

Vancouver is plagued with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. There are no boundaries to the extent in which addicts will go to obtain their drug, resulting in crimes such as breaking and entering and stealing. The “free … Continue reading

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Causal Rewrite- strawberryfields4

The Science Behind Teenage Stupidity Adolescents are notorious for their poor judgement and inability to make sound decisions. In other words, teenagers lack common sense. This often reckless and impulsive behavior cannot merely be attributed to angsty teenage rebellion, as … Continue reading

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