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Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development. Prior to this course I wasn’t used to having my writing extremely critiqued. Composition … Continue reading

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Effortless Destruction of the Human Body The human pursuit to make life as effortless as possible, has deemed the human body as the equivalent of a utilitarian piece of junk. What once was building railroads and large ocean liners to … Continue reading

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Rebuttal Rewrite (Updated)-Minutemen

Body Health or Body Image With this need for the gym and the overwhelming growth in popularity of the fitness industry, you could make a case there are underlying motivators other than just health.  While going to the gym offers … Continue reading

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Woessner, Mary N., et al. “The Evolution of Technology and Physical Inactivity: The Good, the Bad, and the Way Forward.” Frontiers, Frontiers, 1 Jan. 1AD,  Background: This article discusses the evolution of the relationship between man and labor.  New … Continue reading

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Enough About You-Minutemen

Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when we don’t see it physically. In today’s society we must … Continue reading

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Body Health or Body Image With this push toward more time in the gym, you could make a case there are underlying motivators other than just health.  While going to the gym offers many health benefits, we see that there … Continue reading

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Grammar Exercise-Minutemen

If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward his/her child it increases the risk that his/her child will grow up hostile towards others. It’s not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large amount of children … Continue reading

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Not Because-Minutemen

1. Coats wasn’t fired because he was using a legal drug, marijuana, for a legitimate purpose for which he had a prescription. He was fired for violating workplace policy. Coats was fired, but not for using a legal drug, marijuana … Continue reading

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Robust Verbs-Minutemen

Original There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large … Continue reading

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Causal Rewrite-Minutemen

Convenience Over Conditioning Humans are completely consumed with the technological advances of today.  Whether it comes to communication, news outlets, agriculture, transportation, and so on; we are surrounded by it from the moment we wake up.  As humans we often … Continue reading

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