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krackintheneck
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Category Archives: PTSD Claims
Claims – Fulcrum66
“She also helps thousands of other people” – This is a numerical claim because the statement uses a number and claims she helps that certain number of people. “To help find your way, find the information you need and find … Continue reading
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PTSD Claims Task-TristanB50
The amount of progress in Caleb’s six years of therapy has been frustrating for everyone. But ultimately, says Alain Brunet, vice president of the International Society for Traumatic Stress Studies and director of the Traumatic Stress Laboratory at McGill University … Continue reading
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PTSD Claims-Saycheese
“ Today she’s fielding phone calls from a woman whose veteran son was committed to a non-VA psychiatric facility, but he doesn’t want to be at the facility because he, a severe-PTSD sufferer, was already paranoid before one of the … Continue reading
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Claims-venom2929
22 With a half million disability cases stuck in a VA backlog, and an estimated 25 percent of Iraq/Afghanistan troops with PTSD not seeking treatment The author uses a factual claim. It is a factual claim because it talks about … Continue reading
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Claims- calamariii
“Brannan sent Katie to the school therapist, once.” This is a factual claim about Brannan’s past related to her previous employment “She hasn’t seen any other therapist, or a therapist trained to deal with PTSD – Brannan knows what a … Continue reading
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Claims-Frogs02
C1 The amount of progress in Caleb’s six years of therapy has been frustrating for everyone. This is an evaluative claim because it is a judgement that every single person has been frustrated by Caleb’s six years of therapy. This … Continue reading
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PTSD Claims – chickendinner
Section 14 “Meanwhile people like James Peterson, husband of Kateri of the Olive Garden breakdown,” This is a categorical claim, putting James in a category with other veterans whose PTSD has not only damaged their own mental health, but also … Continue reading
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Claims-Minutmen14
Brannan Vines has never been to war. But she’s got a warrior’s skills: hyperawareness, hypervigilance, adrenaline-sharp quick-scanning for danger, for triggers. (Analogy Claim) The author is comparing Brannan’s experiences to the awareness of soldiers in war. Her nose starts running … Continue reading
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PTSD Claims-zzbrd2822
Section 12 “By this point, you might be wondering, and possibly feeling guilty about wondering, why Brannan doesn’t just get divorced.” -This quote can be categorized as an Ethical/Moral claim and a Recommendation/Proposal claim. The phrase, “possibly feeling guilty” could … Continue reading
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Claims-zipemup1
“Granted, diagnosing PTSD is a tricky thing. The result of a malfunctioning nervous system that fails to normalize after trauma and instead perpetrates memories and misfires life-or-death stress for no practical reason, it comes in a couple of varieties, various complexities, has … Continue reading
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