Author Archives: Lily4Pres

Robust Verbs – Lily4Pres

Vancouver has quite the issue with heroin addicts committing a large rate of crimes. Addicts will go through nearly any length to reach their high, directly leading to a higher rate in crime. In response to this problem, Vancouver has … Continue reading

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Causal Rewrite – Lily4Pres

Performance After Stress and Anxiety Stress and anxiety are prevalent in every human beings daily life. Since terms like stress and anxiety can be used varied on the metrics they are given. The definition of stress we are going to … Continue reading

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Open Strong – Lily4Pres

Working Hypothesis: The psychological aspect in sports is just as prevalent as physical; stress and anxiety can tear down an athlete’s psyche and destroy their performance. Being an athlete does not pertain to just physical capabilities. Athletes at the highest … Continue reading

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Visual Rewrite – Lily4Pres

Hoop | Child Car Safety | Ad Council 0:01 : The first frame of the advertisement depicts two young children of dark complexion. The camera is at the children’s eye level, a couple feet in front of them. In the … Continue reading

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Visual – Lily4Pres

Hoop | Child Car Safety | Ad Council 0:01 : The first frame of the advertisement depicts two young children of dark complexion. The camera seems to be at the children’s eye level, a couple feet in front of them. … Continue reading

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Safer Saws – Lily4Pres

Customer Safety Advocates “Roughly 10 people lose their finger per day due to table saws. 3000 a year.” This is a claim that customer safety advocates would jump on instantaneously. Safety advocates would jump on this statement ASAP, less people … Continue reading

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Definition Rewrite – Lily4Pres

Emotional Intelligence Everyone experiences the constant weight on their shoulders known as stress. Everyone experiences the fear and worry in the back of their minds known as anxiety. However, according to recent studies, only 18.1% of the US suffers from … Continue reading

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Definition – Lily4Pres

Emotional Intelligence Everyone experiences the constant weight on their shoulders known as stress. Everyone experiences the fear and worry in the back of their minds known as anxiety. However, according to recent studies, only 18.1% of the US suffers from … Continue reading

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White Paper – Lily4Pres

Working Hypothesis: The psychological aspect in sports is just as prevalent as physical; stress and anxiety can tear down an athlete’s psyche and destroy their performance. Purposeful Summary 1: Psychological Factors in Sport Performance The stress that comes along with … Continue reading

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Claims – Lily4Pres

Section 15 There are trials where patients take MDMA (ecstasy’s active ingredient) while talking about trauma to promote more positive and less scary associations with the events. -The author uses a casual claim here as there is an assertion that … Continue reading

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