Should Corporations Bankroll National Parks?
https://www.motherjones.com/environment/2012/03/corporations-national-parks-coca-cola/
It seems counterintuitive that private companies playing a role in the National Park Service would be a topic of discussion. National parks are a place to escape from everyday life, and many people are worried about corporations playing a role in these natural spaces. However, the National Park Service is in need of funding, and corporate donations could provide the necessary resources for better trails, facilities, and ranger programs. The debate about corporate funding for national parks has been ongoing for years and recently heightened after concerns that Coca-Cola influenced a plan to stop selling disposable plastic water bottles in parks.
The National Park Foundation, a nonprofit that channels support from companies and donors to parks, faced criticism from the watchdog group PEER over plans to fundraise for an endowment for the Park Service’s centennial anniversary from corporate and philanthropic partners. While the amount of money from these partners is low, it still raises concerns about corporate influence in the parks. The National Park Service has strict guidelines for corporate partners, including Director’s Order #21, a 1998 guidance document that outlines how to deal with corporate partners and does not accept money from companies with significant conflicts of interest or alcohol or tobacco companies.
Avoiding the Curse of the Oil-Rich Nations
It seems counterintuitive that finding a hole in the ground that spouts money can be one of the worst things that can happen to a country, yet oil-dependent countries are often economically troubled, authoritarian, and conflict-ridden. This phenomenon is called the resource curse. Oil is capital-intensive and eliminates jobs across the economy, causing corruption and conflict. Taxes create accountability, but oil revenues decouple the government from citizens.
The big exception is Norway, but the majority of the world’s untapped oil reserves are in the developing world. Todd Moss of the Center for Global Development believes that countries can look to Alaska as inspiration. Alaska has the Alaska Permanent Fund, which puts a quarter of its oil revenues into an invested fund that pays each resident a yearly dividend. This stimulates the economy and reduces poverty, but has also created a disconnection between the government and residents. Some countries, like Mongolia and Bolivia, have started similar programs aimed at improving citizens’ social welfare, but more must be done to address the resource curse.
Disarming Iran Using South Africa Strategy
https://www.huffpost.com/entry/iran-sanctions-south-africa_b_1379355
It seems counterintuitive that sanctions have a limited place in international diplomacy or pressure. F.W. de Klerk, the former President of South Africa, believes that in the case of South Africa, sanctions had a negative impact and did not bring about the desired results. Sanctions, according to de Klerk, halted economic growth, harmed the black population more than the white population, and did not help those it was intended to help. De Klerk argues that economic growth and development, not sanctions, were the biggest change agents in ending apartheid in South Africa.
Economist Mats Lundahl also supports this idea, arguing that sanctions depressed the industrial sector and perpetuated the dominance of a skilled labor force led by whites. Similarly, some analysts believe that sanctions against Iran have weakened civil society and strengthened the state, increased poverty, and marginalized the process of transition to democracy. De Klerk warns that unless sanctions can throttle a country, nations will find ways to circumvent them and if sanctions fail within two to three years, a re-think should be considered.
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Should Corporations Bankroll National Parks?
This one just gets off on the wrong foot:
It doesn’t actually. It’s perfectly intuitive that if private companies want to fund the National Park Service we should very much have to discuss the conflicts of interest there.
You still haven’t poked the problem, it seems. There’s lots of talk in these 2 paragraphs “about” influence, but no indication why objectors object. When you have a chance to be specific, you don’t make clear whether Coca-Cola wanted to STOP or wanted to SELL disposable bottles. We can guess, but we shouldn’t have to.
Avoiding the Curse of the Oil-Rich Nations
You come so close to being really clear in sentences that sound completely logical and reasonable, but, for example, this sentence identifies countries as “oil-dependent,” which ordinarily would mean “dependent on others for oil” whereas what you mean, is “dependent on their own oil for the source of their wealth.” Then we wonder “Which came first? The oil? or the conflict and authoritarianism?” You see how it can be misunderstood?
We’re mystified how oil eliminates jobs. Corruption we understand; anytime multinational corporations extract natural resources from resource-rich countries, they make a few people very rich to look the other way instead of at how they’re raping the land, for example. But “conflict” is vague, and “eliminates jobs” needs a word of explanation.
I have other questions, too, but the one that I don’t think anyone will “get” without help is how paying “royalties” to Alaskans for extracting their oil “disconnects” residents from their government. I can guess, but, again, we shouldn’t have to.
You might wonder HOW LONG will these end up being if I have to explain every claim? and the answer is: you don’t have to RAISE every claim. You’re in charge of what you summarize and therefore obligate yourself to make plain.
Does that help?
Already regraded out of respect for your clear voice and careful tone. Now, if you wish, do a better job of clarifying your arguments.
And always Reply to Feedback, please, PhilsFan. It’s the primary value of the course, and I love the conversations, but I tire of them when they become one-sided. Thanks!
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