Category Archives: Author

Visual Rewrite – SortableElms

Posted on April 3, 2023 by sortableelms

No Extra Life 0:01-0:05In the first second, it is a first-person view of a kitchen. The kitchen is in the middle of the screen with white walls on the left and right sides. On the right side of the kitchen … Continue reading →

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Visual Rewrite—Pinkmonkey32

Posted on April 3, 2023 by pinkmonkey32

0:01- in this opening scene you get a young woman of asian descent. We know she is Asian by her facial features. She has long black straight hair on the corded landline phone and walks parallel to the counter, across … Continue reading →

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Definition Rewrite- Queen Random

Posted on April 2, 2023 by queenrandom04

Needs a Title The justification for the existence of police is that they exist to keep us, the citizens, safe. Ancient and modern history has shown time and time again that this is not the case. But, by definition, they … Continue reading →

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Definition Essay- Queen Random

Posted on April 2, 2023 by queenrandom04

The justification for the existence of police is that they exist to keep us, the citizens, safe. Ancient and modern history has shown time and time again that this is not the case. But, by definition, they are employees of … Continue reading →

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Visual Rewrite-G00dSoup

Posted on April 2, 2023 by g00dsoup

0:01-0:05Four people leave a building that appears to be a house. The weather appears to be a seemingly decent day out. The people appear to be in light, almost summer-y clothing. They walk out of what appears to be a … Continue reading →

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Visual-G00dSoup

Posted on April 2, 2023 by g00dsoup

0:01-0:05A family of four leaves their house. The two parents have a lot of stuff in their hands…many bags, a stroller (that appears to double as a “backpack”), snacks for their children, thermoses (could they contain coffee? Water?), stuffed animals. … Continue reading →

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Visual Rewrite – TristanB50

Posted on April 2, 2023 by tristanb50

End Family Fire: Gun Safety 0:00-0:02 We open with an American children’s cartoon on a very grainy, old-seeming TV. Despite this being a recent ad, it seems like the old TV is used to tell us these people aren’t particularly … Continue reading →

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Causal – TristanB50

Posted on April 1, 2023 by tristanb50

After the first highways were built, the idea of being able to walk to place to place became forgotten. Infrastructure matched the new roads, building superstores with large parking lots bigger than football fields. American families reflect the need for … Continue reading →

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Visual- Rowanluver29

Posted on April 1, 2023 by rowanluver29

Need a Link to your Video, Please 0:00-0:05 This ad starts off showing the back of a little girl or youngest daughter with two braided pig tails walking into what seems to be the master bedroom of the house. This … Continue reading →

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Visual Rewrite – Rowanluver29

Posted on April 1, 2023 by rowanluver29

0:00-0:05 This ad starts off showing the back of a little girl or youngest daughter with two braided pig tails walking into what seems to be the master bedroom of the house. This clip was very short before the camera … Continue reading →

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