Visual Rewrite – littlecow24

0:00

The scene opens with a front shot of 3 people in a car, with one person in the back seat, one in the passenger and one in the driver seat. The person in the driver’s seat is painting her nails on top of the wheel, the person in the passenger seat is curling her hair with heatless curlers, and the person in the backseat is putting lotion on his face. The dashboard has nail polish bottles, towels and curlers on it creating a messy and cluttered environment. 

0:02

A close up on the driver painting her nails as she dips the nail brush into the bottle. Her eyes are on her nails and not on the road in front of her. From the reflection of the window we can tell that the car is moving, but it is not moving very fast. The words “Don’t Spa and Drive” come up at the bottom of the screen. This refers to the well known phrase: “Don’t Text and Drive.”

0:04

A close up on the passenger in the front putting curlers in her hair. Her eyes are on the rear-view mirror above her as she continues using the curlers. The passenger in the back seat is putting on face lotion, looking up towards the top of the car, again not looking at the road in front. The car is still moving, and the “Don’t Spa and Drive” are still on the screen.

0:06

A new scene starts with a side view of a man in the driver’s seat using some sort of pulley weight lifting method in the car. From the side view, we see the trees going past to show that the car is moving at a decent speed. Neither of his hands are on the wheel and his focus is down.

0:07

A front view of the same man lifting a weight, his face is concentrated and has some sweat dripping. There are boxing gloves on the dashboard, and the back seat is very crowded with other workout equipment. The man continues lifting the weight and the words “Don’t Lift and Drive” come up on the bottom of the screen.

0:09

A closer front view of the driver as he continues to lift the weight. His focus is completely off the road, and is looking down. His face shows lots of concentration, but it is for weight lifting. “Don’t Lift and Drive” is still displayed on the bottom of the screen.

0:11

A new scene starts with a front view of the car, a man is in the driver’s seat and a woman is in the passenger seat. Both are wearing baking hats and white coats. There is a wooden spoon and flour all over the dashboard with a display of cupcakes in the backseat. The driver has frosting smeared on his face and is carefully frosting a cupcake, his full focus on the cupcake with no hands on the wheel. The woman has a giant bowl with batter in her hands and is mixing it with a whisk. The trees are going by in the background behind the car, showing the car in motion. 

0:13

A close up of the driver who is putting red sprinkles onto the cupcake now. His full attention is on the cupcake. The reflection of the trees in the windshield are still moving at a decent pace, showing the car is still moving. The words “Don’t Bake and Drive” appear on the bottom of the screen. The frosting on the cupcake starts to fall off, causing the driver to become very surprised and even more focused on the frosting that is falling, but he keeps shaking sprinkles onto the cupcake.

0:15

A new scene starts with the front view of the car, with a woman just barely getting into the car as we see the door just close. She takes the seat belt and buckles it. The background of trees and a brick building is seen still, showing the car is parked. 

0:17

A close up of the driver pulling up her phone, with her full attention on the phone. The words “Don’t Text and Drive” come up at the bottom of the screen. After looking at her phone for a few seconds, she shakes her head and puts the phone down and both of her hands on the steering wheel. She moves around in her seat and puts both of her eyes on the road in front of her, showing that she is not going to text and drive but keep both her eyes and hands on the wheel.

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