Bibliography-Goodmusician440

My hypothesis:

Listening to music is really healthy for you, and not listening to music can be dangerous.

Source one:

BetterSleep. (2021, October 11). How classical and instrumental music affect mental health. BetterSleep. Retrieved April 27, 2023, from https://www.bettersleep.com/blog/how-classical-and-instrumental-music-affect-mental-health/ 

This article really talks a lot about music and it’s affect on mental health. It particularly puts a lot of emphasis on instrumental music and how it can actually affect mental health (particularly classical music). The article mentions that there was a patient that when he leaned more towards classical music, his anxiety went down significantly, and as a result, he actually had improved mood as well. It also talks about other benefits such as improved sleep, lower blood sugar, and even building relationships. It not only covers classical music but all kinds of music, and these benefits of music show that music really does help improve your overall health. I used this article to mainly show some positives as far as mental health, anxiety, and depression so that way, I showed that listening to music benefits your overall health.

Source 2:

Newswire, N. (2019, October 12). The science behind why classical music is good for mental health. my/maSCENA. Retrieved April 27, 2023, from https://myscena.org/newswire/the-science-behind-why-classical-music-is-good-for-mental-health/ 

We already knew that music can definitely help with anxiety and depression. However, with this article, you were able to see the science behind why music is so good as far as helping with anxiety and depression. It showed that anxiety levels are lowered because music can lower heart and blood rates to calm them down. It showed that the music can also help you build relationships with other people as well as “connect with your emotions.” I used this to explain the science behind why music helps with mental health it is important to know the explanation for how music helps with mental health and health in general.

Source 3:How music therapy helps ease clinical depression: The arts file. WQXR. (n.d.). Retrieved April 27, 2023, from https://www.wqxr.org/story/15998-how-music-therapy-helps-ease-clinical-depression/ 

This audio really dived into music therapy, but it still talked a lot about classical music use in music therapy. This stuff really helps with easing depression. This is especially useful when patients get strokes, which really affects mental health and depression. It also talked about what goes on in the brain when listening to music.

Source 4: 8 health benefits of classical music. Flexispot. (n.d.). Retrieved April 27, 2023, from https://www.flexispot.com/spine-care-center/8-health-benefits-that-will-make-you-listen-to-classical-music-more 

This source is similar to the first article in the sense that it also talks about benefits of music. However, this one is leaned more towards classical music. It also touched a lot on mental health. I used this to see a lot of the mental health side effects to music.

Source 5: Embark Behavioral Health. (2021, March 12). Can you hear the music? Embark Behavioral Health. Retrieved April 27, 2023, from https://www.embarkbh.com/qa/negative-and-positive-effects-of-music/#:~:text=There%20are%20studies%20that%20show,outside%20stressors%20and%20environmental%20factors. 

This source generally talked about how music can affect our overall mood and mental health. Unlike the other sources, it talked about both positive AND negative sides of music and mental/physical health. I used this source to help me in my rebuttal argument and explained why music can decrease your overall health.

Source 6:

U.S. Department of Health and Human Services. (n.d.). Music and health: What you need to know. National Center for Complementary and Integrative Health. Retrieved April 27, 2023, from https://www.nccih.nih.gov/health/music-and-health-what-you-need-to-know#:~:text=Yes%2C%20according%20to%20a%20growing,sensation%2C%20movement%2C%20and%20emotion. 

Just like the other source, this source showed how music can affect your overall health, both positively and negatively. It also shows how music affects those with specific conditions like depression, dementia, autism, and many other conditions. I used this to show how music can cause your overall health to both improve and digress, and I used them in both my rebuttal and causal arguments.

Source 7:

Sussex Publishers. (n.d.). 5 problems music can create. Psychology Today. Retrieved April 27, 2023, from https://www.psychologytoday.com/us/blog/your-musical-self/201408/5-problems-music-can-create 

This source went over a couple of problems that music can cause for people. It went over the effects that it can have on the brain and your physical, emotional, and mental health. It really dove deep into anxiety as well as the fact that music can overstimulate you as well as other problems. This source was mainly used for my rebuttal argument.

Source 8:

Music and health. Harvard Health. (2021, September 11). Retrieved April 27, 2023, from https://www.health.harvard.edu/newsletter_article/music-and-health 

This is mainly about music affecting the mind. Here, Harvard used a lot of studies to see how Music affects the mind, especially when it comes to stress. I used this in my causal argument to show how music can cause significant change in the mind.

Source 9:Stanborough, R. J. (2020, April 1). Benefits of music on body, mind, relationships & more. Healthline. Retrieved April 27, 2023, from https://www.healthline.com/health/benefits-of-music#mood-boost 

This source just provided a lot more detail into how music affects the mind and our physical health. This is also one of the first sources here that actually dove deeper into social health, or how our relationships with other people is affected. I used this in my causal and definition arguments to provide a little more insight in the mental and physical and emotional aspects, but I am mainly used this to also dive deep into the social aspect of things.

Source 10:

Novotney, A. (2013, November). Music as medicine. Monitor on Psychology. Retrieved April 27, 2023, from https://www.apa.org/monitor/2013/11/music 

This showed a little more insight in how music can improve overall health. It showed how music can reduce stress as well as treat pain. It also showed correlation with music and brain activity. I mainly used this to provide detail on how music can treat mental and physical health conditions and how brain activity works when music is used.

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Bibliography – Giants

Source 1: Khouzam, R. (April 2014) Next-Generation Airbags and the Possibility of Negative Outcomes Due to Thoracic Injury Retrieved February 10th 2023

 https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0828282X14000051

Background: This article talks about how seatbelts are noted to cause complications and brings up the fact that when used in conjunction with airbags can become more dangerous.

How I intend to use it: Highlight the fact that many people do not realize that when used at the same time as other safety precaution features and one of them is used incorrectly bad things happen.

Source 2: Najari, F (2015 Autumn) An Immediate Death by Seatbelt Compression Retrieved February 10th 2023

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4608342/

Background: This article details an instance of a man with no underlying medical conditions who died very suddenly when a three-point seatbelt was compressed on his neck in an accident. 

How I intend to use it: I intend to use this article by highlighting that it may be a lot easier than people expect to end up dead from a seatbelt injury.

Source 3: Syarah Adibah, J and Mohd Najib, Y (October 2nd 2021.) Contributing Factors Towards Human Errors on Road Transport Safety Among Commercial Vehicle Drivers Retrieved February 10th 2023

https://link.springer.com/chapter/10.1007/978-981-16-4115-2_19

Background: This article highlights the recent increase in accidents that are involved with human error and how this increase makes seatbelts more dangerous.

How I intend to use it: I will use this article to emphasize that a lot of car accidents are the result of human error.

Source 4: Raphael, E; Pizali, R; Le, H; et al (January 2007) Physical Evidence Associated with Seatbelt Entanglement During a Collision Retrieved February 10th 2023

https://http://www.jstor.org/stable/44687904

Background: This source mainly talks about how seatbelts can sometimes fail to protect their users and are at times counter-intuitive.

How I plan to use it : I plan on using this article to further enforce to the reader the underlying danger of a seatbelt,

Source 5: Klinich, K., Ebert, S., Malik, L., Manary, M. et al., Seatbelt Entanglement: Field Analysis, Countermeasure Development, and Subject Evaluation of Devices Intended to Reduce Risk, (January 2019) Retrieved February 10th 2023.

https://www.sae.org/publications/technical-papers/content/2019-01-0619/

Background: This source delves further into the phenomenon of seatbelts becoming tangled and trapping the occupant. 

How I intend on using it: I will use this source to emphasize the danger that seatbelts can become if worn improperly and somebody gets into a bad enough crash.

Source 6: Cummings, P (December 2002) Association of seat belt use with death: a comparison of estimates based on data from police and estimates based on data from trained crash investigators Retrieved March 1st 2023

https://injuryprevention.bmj.com/content/8/4/338

Background- This source brings up the instances of people that have been in an accident lying about wearing their belt, resulting in a false sense of security and bloated inaccurate numbers based on how safe they are.

How I intend to use it: I intend to use this article to diminish any worthy opponents to my arguments chances of using the statistics, which are very much against my argument, by making them seem misleading and untrue.

Source 7: Ardis, W (January 2023) Defective Seatbelts Retrieved March 1st 2023

https://www.wolffardis.com/defective-seat-belts/

Background- This source mainly talks about how seatbelts can quickly become significantly more dangerous than they are safe when they fail.

How I intend to use it: Drive home the point of how useless seatbelts are if not worn correctly

Source 8: Byard, R (October 5th 2004) Child Booster Seats and Lethal Seatbelt Injuries Retrieved on April 3rd 2023

Background: This article recounts an instance of a perfectly healthy 7 year old boy involved in an accident who was wearing his seatbelt and ended up dying from cardiac arrest.

How I intend to use it: I plan on using this as a shock factor effect in order to startle people into realizing how dangerous seatbelts can be.

Source 9: Bunai, Y; et al (September 2000) Fetal Death From Abruptio Placentae Associated With Incorrect Use of a Seatbelt Retrieved April 5th 2023

Background: This is yet another case of a life being taken away from the result of improper seatbelt use.

How I plan to use it: Again, I plan to use this to really put it in the readers mind how dangerous seatbelts can be

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Bibliography–SinatraMan17

1. Roose, K. (2023). The Brilliance and Weirdness of ChatGPT. The New York Times.

Background: This is a December 2022 NY Times article that defines key terms essential to understanding how AI generators work. It discusses specifically Chat-GPT, which is a prime example of the type of technology I reference throughout the paper.

How I Used It: I used this source as an introduction to some of the basic ideas behind AI generators. To a person who isn’t familiar with Chat-GPT or other AIs, the following research paper could be thoroughly confusing without the following knowledge.

2. What is Machine Learning? | IBM. (2016). 

Background: This article contains a scientific definition of Machine Learning. Comes from the IBM Company, a trusted leader itself in the AI field.

How I Used It: I used this source to define a key term referenced frequently in my paper: “Machine Learning”.

3. Zhu C, Zeng M, Huang X. SDNet: Contextualized Attention-based Deep Network for Conversational Question Answering. arXiv.org. Published online 2019.

Background: This source is a scientific journal that focuses on the scientific and technological mechanisms that allow for Deep Learning, and in turn: AI.

How I Used It: I used this to offer a closer look into the idea of CNNs or “Convolutional Neural Networks.” This again is a key term in understanding HOW AI does what it does. Is it true creation or compilation?

4. Milne. (2020). What is creativity? British Journal of Nursing (Mark Allen Publishing), 29(12), S4–S4.

Background: This comes from a Journal of Nursing of all places and is an exploration of the possible definitions for Creativity, notably in the medical context but all the while useful.

How I Used It: I used this source to introduce my claims that Creativity is an extremely complex idea that is hard to define, however, I quoted this journal to highlight how there are certain accepted criteria for what creativity looks like.

5. Barwell, I. (1986). How does art express emotion?. The Journal of Aesthetics and Art Criticism, 45(2), 175-181.

Background: This is an article from 1986 that provides a detailed exploration of how art, in general, is perceived and how art AFFECTS human emotions.

How I Used It: I used this article as a foundation for my claims on arts’ connectivity to emotions. Barwell’s rhetoric can prove to be confusing, but the quote I pulled I believe communicates the idea well.

6. Denner, M. A. (2003). Accidental art: Tolstoy’s poetics of unintentionality. Philosophy and Literature, 27(2), 284-303.

Background: This is an academic analysis of the book cited below, it summarizes key takeaways regarding Tolstoy’s take on the concept of Art Intentionality.

How I Used It: While I never quoted this directly, I used it as a guide map when exploring the vast original Tolstoy book What is Art?.

7. Tolstoy, L. (1899). What is Art?. United Kingdom: Crowell. Pg 50.

Background: Written by renowned author L.N. Tolstoy, this is his book about the counterintuitivity experienced when faced with defining Art. He explores numerous concepts, notably the idea of Art Intentionality.

How I Used It: I specifically used Tolstoy’s comments on whether or not the emotion of the artIST matters. I claim that it always does to a certain degree, and so did Tolstoy– a distinguished artist himself.

8. Mframa, K. (2022, October 27). Separating art from the artist is impossible The Commonwealth Times. The Commonwealth Times.

Background: This admittedly does come from a college independent Journal, so I’m hesitant to include it. However, it conveys strong messages about CURRENT real-world examples of Artist-Bias.

How I Used It: I quoted the journalist’s claims regarding Kanye West’s run-in with artist-bias, and how our current society is handling the issue. While seemingly unrelated to AI, it demonstrates how especially today it is hard for us to separate the artist from the art, and that connects to my claim that we would react (positively or negatively) if we learned work was made by AI.

9. Shahriar, S. (2022). GAN computers generate arts? a survey on visual arts, music, and literary text generation using generative adversarial network. Displays, 102237.

Background: Published in ScienceDirect, this article is about GANs, another technology behind the AIs we know today.

How I Used It: I used a description of this technology as a rebuttal to my claims because the author writes that GANs can indeed create “new” data, or in my context “new art”.

10. Getty Images Statement. (2023, January 17). Getty Images Statement. Getty Images Press Site – Newsroom – Getty Images. https://newsroom.gettyimages.com/en/getty-images/getty-images-statement

Background: A press release from Getty Images HQ regarding their legal battle with Stability AI– on the grounds that the AI company used their unlicensed images to train their algorithms.

How I Used It: I used this as an example of how AI algorithms rely heavily on the compilation of existing images, so much so that the largest image database in the country is forced into legal action against it.

11. Yang, R. Are the Artists no Longer Needed in the AI Age?. International Journal of Education and Management, 274.

Background: In a bold article from the Journal of Education and Management, the author explores the implications of AI and its role as an Artist.

How I Used It: I used this as a basic rebuttal to my claims. The author believes AI exhibits the potential to replace artists. I used him as an example of the group in society that relates to his thinking.

12. Ana Santos Rutschman. (2018, March 15). Stephen Hawking warned about the perils of artificial intelligence – yet AI gave him a voice. The Conversation.

Background: Coming from The Conversation, Stephen Hawking’s relationship and opinion with AI are discussed.

How I Used It: I quoted Hawking directly, a quote which appeared in this article, regarding how he feared AI could “spell the end of the human race.”

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Bibliography- GoBirds115

My Sources

6 Benefits of Testosterone Replacement Therapy

Background: This article discusses the benefits of TRT (Testosterone Replacement Therapy). Not only does it discuss the physical benefits that it provides but it also improves brain functions like memory and mood.

How I Intend to use it: I intend to use this source as an introduction to performance enhancements in my paper. I believe that TRT is a useful alternative to steroids because it’s something that already is in the players. I believe that monitoring Testosterone levels of the players, setting a league wide level for testosterone and using TRT to level players could be a way to increase muscle function and improve player health.

Epidemiology and Impact of Abdominal Oblique Injuries in Major and Minor League Baseball

Background: This article is full of research and statistics on oblique/abdominal injuries in professional baseball. The article goes in depth on different types of injuries, different methods of treatments, recovery times, and lots of useful information on the obliques/abdominal functions.

How I Intend to use it: The statistics in this article show that oblique/intercostal/abdominal injuries are the leading injuries for missed time. They also show that in the some methods of rehab/recovery, injections are used but the effectiveness isn’t very prominent. However, they stress that core and trunk strengthening works in prevention of these injuries. So using this information I’d position the argument that regulated and proper use of PED’s/steroids would serve as a tool to help strengthen the core/trunk at a higher rate and also serve as a rehab tool to speed up recovery.**I will find another source that on effective PED’s for core/trunks to buddy with this one, just haven’t gotten there yet**

Recurrent hamstring muscle injury: applying the limited evidence in the professional football setting with a seven-point programme

Background: This article discusses different types of hamstring injuries suffered particularly in football. The emphasis of the article is on the different methods of rehab and treatments for hamstring injuries. Some methods they mention are physical therapy/strengthening, biomechanics assessment, injections, etc.

How I Intend to use it: There is a small part in this article that mentions the effectiveness of epidural steroids for Hamstring injuries and lumbar spinal injuries. This part of the article mentions the almost immediate effectiveness of the epidural steroid following the injection. This would be worth mentioning in my paper, maybe not a huge source to focus on but definitely something worth touching on because it supports my argument of a steroid being used for healing.

Androgenic anabolic steroid-induced liver injury: two case reports assessed for causality by the updated Roussel Uclaf Causality Assessment Method (RUCAM) score and a comprehensive review of the literature

Background: This article examines multiple different people who have or reportedly used Androgenic Anabolic Steroids (AAS) and their current health status. They mainly focus on the effects of AAS on the liver. They claim that mis management of AAS can lead to drug induced liver injury (DILI). There is plenty of research and statistics within their article to back this up.

How I Intend to use it: I intend to use this article as a counter argument to what I’m proposing. I have to address the possible threats that certain types of PED’s like AAS can pose and show awareness. In doing this, it allows my proposal to be more justified due to the fact that I’m addressing potential concern while still conveying my argument.

**BELOW ARE THE NEW SOURCES I USED/WILL USE IN THE DEFINITION/CATEGORICAL PAPER AND CAUSAL PAPER**

“MLB steroid suspensions (2005-2022).”

Background: This source has a list of every player suspended from PED’s since the year 2005.

How I used it: I used the statistics given in this source to give insight to my readers on how many suspensions occur because of PED’s and how many games are missed. I also used them as for facts to help create a claim and reasoning.

What is Clostebol? the steroid Fernando Tatis Jr. took by accident and got him suspended

Background: This article was written after Padres star Fernando Tatis Jr. tested positive for clostebol. Tatis claims he took the drug because his physician prescribed it to him to treat ringworm and that he had no intention of using it to enhance his performance. Tatis served an 80 game suspension as a result of his test.

How I used it: I used Tatis’ case as an example as to why the rules should change regarding banned substances and built an argument around it which included a solution to the problem of banned substance abuse/misuse.

Major League Baseball’s Minor League Drug Prevention And Treatment Program.

Background: This is just a list of every banned substance in MLB and each category of banned substances.

How I used it: I used this in my definition paper to set the parameters and define what I would be arguing. For instance I declared the substances that I believe should stay on the list and the ones that I believe don’t need to be on the list.

Bilirubin blood test

Background: This article goes through the details of how bilirubin is tested for in the blood. Things like the process, preparation, and results are all covered within this article

How I used it: I used this article to provide a baseline number for standard bilirubin levels to compare to the bilirubin levels in the young man in the article about AAS induced liver injury.

Alanine transaminase (ALT) blood test

Background: This article details how ALT is tested for in the blood. It covers the process of testing, preparation for the test, and the results to expect.

How I used it: I used this article as an example of what normal ALT numbers should look like compared to the young man in the article about AAS induced liver injury.

Major League Baseball rosters by average player age in 2022

Background: This article provides statistics of player ages around the league

How I used it: I used this article to compare the age of the average player to the young men in the article about AAS induced liver injury.

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Rebuttal Rewrite – PhilsFan1133

Manipulation in Sports Betting Being Handled?

Sports betting has been a popular pastime for centuries, with people placing wagers on the outcomes of sporting events since ancient times. The rise of online sports betting has made it easier than ever for people to place bets on their favorite teams and athletes. However, with the increase in popularity of sports betting comes a darker side: the potential for referees and players to manipulate the outcomes of games for their own financial gain.

The issue of game manipulation in sports is not a new one, and it has been a concern for many years. As far back as the early 1900s, there were reports of games being fixed or manipulated for financial gain. In the 1950s, the infamous CCNY point-shaving scandal rocked college basketball, with several players and gamblers being arrested for conspiring to fix games. Since then, there have been numerous other instances of match-fixing and game manipulation in both college and professional sports.

One of the most common forms of game manipulation in sports is point shaving. Point shaving occurs when a player intentionally misses shots or commits turnovers in order to keep the score of the game closer than it would be otherwise. This allows bettors who have placed bets on the underdog to win their wagers, even if the underdog does not actually win the game. Referees can also engage in point-shaving by making calls that favor one team over the other, thus affecting the outcome of the game.

The potential for game manipulation in sports has only increased with the rise of online sports betting. The ability to place bets from anywhere in the world has made it easier for individuals to place large wagers on games and manipulate outcomes for their own financial gain. The anonymity of online betting also makes it more difficult to detect instances of game manipulation, as individuals can hide their identities and locations.

While game manipulation is a serious issue, it is important to note that the majority of athletes, coaches, and officials are ethical and do not engage in these practices. However, even a few instances of game manipulation can have serious consequences for the integrity of the sport and can lead to a loss of trust from fans.

The legality of sports betting in the United States has been a contentious issue for many years. In 1992, the Professional and Amateur Sports Protection Act (PASPA) was passed, which prohibited sports betting in all states except for Nevada, Oregon, Delaware, and Montana. This law remained in effect until 2018, when the Supreme Court struck down PASPA, ruling that it violated the Tenth Amendment.

Since the Supreme Court’s decision, several states have legalized sports betting, including New Jersey, Pennsylvania, and Mississippi, with many more states expected to follow suit. The legalization of sports betting has led to increased scrutiny of the industry, particularly with regard to potential match-fixing and corruption.

One organization that is working to combat game manipulation in sports is the International Olympic Committee (IOC). The IOC has a number of measures in place to prevent match-fixing and game manipulation in Olympic events. These measures include a code of conduct for athletes, coaches, and officials, education programs for athletes and officials, and the establishment of an integrity hotline for reporting suspicious activity.

The National Basketball Association (NBA) is one of the major professional sports leagues in the United States and has taken significant steps to prevent game manipulation. The NBA’s program to prevent game manipulation involves educating players, coaches, and officials about the dangers of these practices, and implementing a system for reporting suspicious activity and investigating potential instances of game manipulation. The NBA also works closely with law enforcement agencies to investigate allegations of game manipulation.

The NBA’s program to prevent game manipulation includes a set of rules and policies that outline the prohibited activities, including intentionally losing games, tampering with equipment, and participating in illegal gambling activities. The league also has a code of conduct for players, coaches, and officials, which outlines the expected behavior and the consequences for violating the rules.

Moreover, the NBA has an independent agency called “NBA Security” responsible for investigating allegations of game manipulation. NBA Security comprises a team of former law enforcement officials and intelligence analysts who work closely with local and federal law enforcement agencies to investigate suspicious activity. This agency has a hotline where individuals can report any concerns or suspicions they have about game manipulation. NBA Security also reviews the betting patterns of all games and keeps a close eye on the behavior of players, coaches, and officials.

To further prevent game manipulation, the NBA has partnered with organizations such as the National Council on Problem Gambling and the International Center for Sport Security. These partnerships allow the NBA to access additional resources and expertise to address the issue of game manipulation.

Similarly, Major League Baseball (MLB) has implemented measures to prevent game manipulation, including background checks on all employees and a hotline for reporting suspicious behavior. The MLB also works closely with law enforcement agencies to investigate potential instances of game manipulation.

The National Football League (NFL) has also taken steps to prevent game manipulation, including implementing a strict code of conduct for players, coaches, and officials, and working with law enforcement agencies to detect and prevent any attempts at game-fixing or betting-related corruption.

In addition to these measures, the NFL has also established partnerships with organizations such as the International Center for Sport Security and the United States Anti-Doping Agency to help monitor and prevent any potential threats to the integrity of the sport.

Overall, while there is always the potential for corruption and manipulation in any industry, the sports industry, and in particular professional sports leagues, have taken significant steps to prevent such activity and maintain the integrity of their games. Through a combination of education, technology, and partnerships with law enforcement and other organizations, these leagues are working to ensure that their competitions remain fair and honest for all participants and fans.

Sources

Major League Baseball. (n.d.). MLB’s Policy on Gambling. Retrieved April 24, 2023, from https://www.mlb.com/gambling-policy

National Basketball Association. (n.d.). NBA Anti-Gambling Policy. Retrieved April 24, 2023, from https://www.nba.com/news/nba-anti-gambling-policy

Transparency International UK. (2013). Sports Betting and Corruption: The Threat to the Integrity of Sport.

National Football League. (2021). NFL’s Commitment to Integrity of the Game.

The National Law Review. (2019). What Professional Sports Leagues are Doing to Prevent Game-Fixing and Betting-Related Corruption.

United Nations Office on Drugs and Crime. (2014). Preventing Corruption in Sport: Enhancing the Role of Governments.

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Rebuttal – PhilsFan1133

Manipulation in Sports Betting Being Handled?

Sports betting has been a popular pastime for centuries, with people placing wagers on the outcomes of sporting events since ancient times. The rise of online sports betting has made it easier than ever for people to place bets on their favorite teams and athletes. However, with the increase in popularity of sports betting comes a darker side: the potential for referees and players to manipulate the outcomes of games for their own financial gain.

The issue of game manipulation in sports is not a new one, and it has been a concern for many years. As far back as the early 1900s, there were reports of games being fixed or manipulated for financial gain. In the 1950s, the infamous CCNY point-shaving scandal rocked college basketball, with several players and gamblers being arrested for conspiring to fix games. Since then, there have been numerous other instances of match-fixing and game manipulation in both college and professional sports.

One of the most common forms of game manipulation in sports is point shaving. Point shaving occurs when a player intentionally misses shots or commits turnovers in order to keep the score of the game closer than it would be otherwise. This allows bettors who have placed bets on the underdog to win their wagers, even if the underdog does not actually win the game. Referees can also engage in point-shaving by making calls that favor one team over the other, thus affecting the outcome of the game.

The potential for game manipulation in sports has only increased with the rise of online sports betting. The ability to place bets from anywhere in the world has made it easier for individuals to place large wagers on games and manipulate outcomes for their own financial gain. The anonymity of online betting also makes it more difficult to detect instances of game manipulation, as individuals can hide their identities and locations.

While game manipulation is a serious issue, it is important to note that the majority of athletes, coaches, and officials are ethical and do not engage in these practices. However, even a few instances of game manipulation can have serious consequences for the integrity of the sport and can lead to a loss of trust from fans.

The legality of sports betting in the United States has been a contentious issue for many years. In 1992, the Professional and Amateur Sports Protection Act (PASPA) was passed, which prohibited sports betting in all states except for Nevada, Oregon, Delaware, and Montana. This law remained in effect until 2018, when the Supreme Court struck down PASPA, ruling that it violated the Tenth Amendment.

Since the Supreme Court’s decision, several states have legalized sports betting, including New Jersey, Pennsylvania, and Mississippi, with many more states expected to follow suit. The legalization of sports betting has led to increased scrutiny of the industry, particularly with regard to potential match-fixing and corruption.

One organization that is working to combat game manipulation in sports is the International Olympic Committee (IOC). The IOC has a number of measures in place to prevent match-fixing and game manipulation in Olympic events. These measures include a code of conduct for athletes, coaches, and officials, education programs for athletes and officials, and the establishment of an integrity hotline for reporting suspicious activity.

The National Basketball Association (NBA) is one of the major professional sports leagues in the United States and has taken significant steps to prevent game manipulation. The NBA’s program to prevent game manipulation involves educating players, coaches, and officials about the dangers of these practices, and implementing a system for reporting suspicious activity and investigating potential instances of game manipulation. The NBA also works closely with law enforcement agencies to investigate allegations of game manipulation.

The NBA’s program to prevent game manipulation includes a set of rules and policies that outline the prohibited activities, including intentionally losing games, tampering with equipment, and participating in illegal gambling activities. The league also has a code of conduct for players, coaches, and officials, which outlines the expected behavior and the consequences for violating the rules.

Moreover, the NBA has an independent agency called “NBA Security” responsible for investigating allegations of game manipulation. NBA Security comprises a team of former law enforcement officials and intelligence analysts who work closely with local and federal law enforcement agencies to investigate suspicious activity. This agency has a hotline where individuals can report any concerns or suspicions they have about game manipulation. NBA Security also reviews the betting patterns of all games and keeps a close eye on the behavior of players, coaches, and officials.

To further prevent game manipulation, the NBA has partnered with organizations such as the National Council on Problem Gambling and the International Center for Sport Security. These partnerships allow the NBA to access additional resources and expertise to address the issue of game manipulation.

Similarly, Major League Baseball (MLB) has implemented measures to prevent game manipulation, including background checks on all employees and a hotline for reporting suspicious behavior. The MLB also works closely with law enforcement agencies to investigate potential instances of game manipulation.

The National Football League (NFL) has also taken steps to prevent game manipulation, including implementing a strict code of conduct for players, coaches, and officials, and working with law enforcement agencies to detect and prevent any attempts at game-fixing or betting-related corruption.

In addition to these measures, the NFL has also established partnerships with organizations such as the International Center for Sport Security and the United States Anti-Doping Agency to help monitor and prevent any potential threats to the integrity of the sport.

Overall, while there is always the potential for corruption and manipulation in any industry, the sports industry, and in particular professional sports leagues, have taken significant steps to prevent such activity and maintain the integrity of their games. Through a combination of education, technology, and partnerships with law enforcement and other organizations, these leagues are working to ensure that their competitions remain fair and honest for all participants and fans.

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Transparency International UK. (2013). Sports Betting and Corruption: The Threat to the Integrity of Sport.

National Football League. (2021). NFL’s Commitment to Integrity of the Game.

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United Nations Office on Drugs and Crime. (2014). Preventing Corruption in Sport: Enhancing the Role of Governments.

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Rethinking “Machiavellian” Morality

Niccoló Machiavelli, Secretary of War for the Florentine Republic (1494-1512) learned a great deal about the harsh world of politics during his time on the inside of the European “great game”. Machiavelli served the republic until its defeat in 1512 by Giovanni de’ Medici (Pope Leo X). Following the Medici reconquest of the city, Machiavelli, like many of his comrades, was exiled from the city to the hinterlands. From exile and reflecting on his decade and half on the inside of European politics, Machiavelli wrote The Prince, a rather short work. Despite its small size, the work has proved foundational for European political theory and the European “Enlightenment”.

Despite, or perhaps because of, its influence, Machiavelli has earned a rather dark reputation from his little book. His unrestrained advice, which often condones the use of violence and incredibly underhanded tactics, has been reviled by both the “Godly” men of yore and the squeamish philosophers of modernity. This reputation is exemplified by the english word, “Machiavellian”, which is a pejorative to describe a deceitful, underhanded person. Recognizing The Prince as the primary battleground of Machiavelli historiography, this paper will focus itself almost entirely on scholarship related to it. After all, in determining the definition of a “Machiavellian” person, it is always The Prince which is scrutinized for answers. Additionally, when criticizing Machiavelli, his critics rely most heavily on arguments made within The Prince. In the argument to follow, the word “Machiavellian” will be revealed as an overly-simplistic caricature of the man who most famously held the name. Fundamentally, the critical pejorative, “Machiavellian”, unfairly equates Machiavelli’s unobscured political analysis with a preference for immoral behavior. In a straightforward manner, this paper aims to

1) define what “Machiavellian” actually means.

2) determine how Machiavelli’s name became a pejorative.

3) refute the argument which motivated the name’s transformation.

However, it first bears asking, who was Niccoló Machiavelli?

Niccoló Machiavelli: A Brief Biography

Born in 15th century Florence the third son of an attorney, Machiavelli was neither born of great status or total obscurity. As the son of a man of letters, Machiavelli was afforded an education, an incredible privilege even in the relatively literate world of the Italian city states. For Machiavelli’s early life, the nominally republican Florence was dominated by the Medici family, who had de facto dynastic control over the city. In 1494, according to scholar Marcia Colish, the citizenry of Florence, lead by the firebrand Dominican Girolamo Savonarola, overthrew the Medici family and restored the Florentine republic. Savonarola, an intense critic of excesses in the catholic church, was responsible for the burning of the vanities in which books and art were destroyed. Such religious fanaticism would see him driven from power and executed sometime around 1498. Following Savonarola’s execution and the religious moderation of the republic’s government, Machiavelli received his first posting in the government. Eventually, he would rise to become of the Secretary of War, where he would oversee a successful campaign in Pisa.

During his public career, Machiavelli worked with and among the prominent political actors in Florence and in the broader Italian Wars. It was here where he made his entrance into the great game of power politics. On the inside of this often brutal machine, Machiavelli would learn his infamous cynicism by observation. Interacting with foreign diplomats, working and fighting against mercenaries, and politicking inside Florence itself, Machiavelli decade and a half of public service gave him the wealth of experience that his later, more famous, career would rest upon. That career which he is know best for today, as an author and political philosopher, would not begin in earnest until his exile at the hands of the victorious Medici family in 1512, following the defeat and destruction of the nascent Florentine Republic. Writing from the countryside, estranged from his beloved Florence, Machiavelli would write several books such as The Art of War and The Discourses. While fascinating, Machiavelli’s most important book was his seminal and most controversial text of political science, The Prince.

Section 1: What is a Machiavellian?

An unscrupulous character, wheeling and dealing in the halls of power with no concern for feeble-minded “morality”. The acquisition and wielding of power his only concern. Perhaps, such a character is dressed in dark colors and a sharp, evil-looking suit. This swamp creature is the archetypical “Machiavellian” figure: unscrupulous, immoral, and single-minded in pursuit of power. Whether named as such or not, this scheming, contemptible creature is present in plenty of modern media. One such creature who populated many home television sets in recent memory was Frank Underwood on Netflix’s House of Cards, a clever but immoral politician played too convincingly by the now-disgraced Kevin Spacey. Looking further back into the literary tradition, the scheming character Iago in Shakespeare’s Othello serves as one of the first introductions of an explicitly Machiavellian character in the English literary cannon. For those in the know about “Machiavellian” characters, Frank, Iago and other scheming politicians form an Anglophone cultural memory of what these disciples of Machiavelli’s book of dark rituals, The Prince, look and behave like.

Machiavelli, then, should be the archetypal example of these immoral men. The progenitor from whom all these evil-hearted politicians take their cues. It is what one of his primary (nearly) contemporary opponents, Innocent Gentillet, described him as. For Gentillet, Machiavelli was “both wicked and ignorant”, preaching a doctrine of godless opportunism. Unfortunately for overwrought dramatists, both dead and alive, Machiavelli himself is a far-cry from the politicians, both real and fictional, who critics often describe as “Machiavellian”. As is often the case, reality is less flashy and provocative than fiction.

What exactly is a “Machiavellian”? At its most simple reading, a Machiavellian is simply a person who behaves in the manner of Machiavelli. This, of course, is insufficient to understand the label. It would be akin to defining a modern Christian using only the idea that they are followers of Jesus Christ. While true, it is not enough to unpack all the meaning in the word for a contemporary reader. All the other nuances and intricacies that had been read into that word over the last two-thousand years are critically important. The same is true of the concept of a “Machiavellian”.

Expanding further upon the shocking acts advised within the Prince, it is not sufficient to read Machiavelli counceling a prince to execute political opposition as an endorsement of such behavior. Detractors of Machiavelli are quick to determine that his diagnosis of what is politically necessary is, in fact, his own satanic political morality. Nothing could be further from the truth. Yes, it is not unreasonable to consider Machiavelli to be a cynic. While his apologists, like the author of this paper, would prefer the term “realist”, Machiavelli does indeed have a distinctly dismal view of the nature of politics. For instance, in chapter VIII of The Prince, Machiavelli reflects on the ancient king of Syracuse, Agathocles. He achieved his control over the city through “wickedness”, which is to say by force and treachery. Despite this, because he appropriately employed cruelty, he lived a long life within his city. Not indulging in senseless violence but also perpetrating as much as necessary to secure his rule meant the usurper lived long.

Using this example from The Prince, it can be seen how a Machiavellian is a cynic (or a realist), but they are not “immoral”. Machiavelli does not praise Agathocles: far from it, he recognizes that Agathocles is quite the villain. However, he concludes from his study of wickedness that

“injuries ought to be done all at one time, so that, being tasted less, they offend less; benefits ought to be given little by little, so that the flavour of them may last longer”

A Machiavellian is pragmatic: while not liking the behaviors of Agathocles, one can still study them and consider their efficacy. Therefore, when the time comes that an immoral action is politically necessary, it can be employed effectively by a Prince. Ultimately, this is the application of the techniques of the wicked to serve the own interests of a (presumably) more moral end. For instance, the citizens of Florence rose up against their social betters, the Medici’s, and strived to rule themselves. Along the way, they had to “break a few eggs”, but a Machiavellian would argue that they simply were playing the game of politics. The infantile political philosopher will wring their hands about abrogations of justice and the misdeeds that an upstart regime like the Florentine republic undoubtedly perpetrated. Yet, what goes unremarked upon is the cost of the status quo, of permitting an ancien regime to persist. It is not as if the Medici’s themselves did not perpetrate countless injustices to attain and maintain their de facto hereditary control over Florence. Therefore, it is unreasonable to profess horror that the Machiavellian political actor is willing to do what is politically necessary instead of simply rolling over. A critic can object to Machiavelli’s proposal that “the ends justify the means”, but cannot deny that the same ruthlessness is perpetrated by an ancien regime against their opposition. Power politics is a zero-sum game, and the Machiavellian plays to win, content that their crimes will be justified by the good outcomes they ensure. Whether the ends truly did justify the means is for history to decide. A Machiavelli, ultimately, is one who recognizes all tools available to them and makes no apologies for using them. Naivety, for the Machiavellian, is a terribly crippling character flaw

Section 2: How does a name become a pejorative?

The exiled Florentine Secretary was hardly such a well-known figure in his own day. His name, certainly, was not yet used as an insult, or at least not widely. If not for the posthumous publication of his enduringly influential and infamous text, The Prince, Machiavelli would likely have remained a historical footnote, remembered only for his time within a short-lived government. Rising over the last half-millenia from an obscure trivia-night answer to the infamous founder of amoral politicking, the name of the once-obscure Florentine has warped into a pejorative adjective to describe immoral and unethical political operators.

Exemplifying his rather unimportant status, his magnum opus, The Prince, was only circulated among his friends during his life, sometime shortly after his exile from Florence. During his lifetime, a later work of his, The Art of War, was published in 1521 to some positive reception. However, following his death, The Prince would be published posthumously by friends and associates in 1532. While not a smash hit among the urban burghers of Europe like the works of reformation celebrity Martin Luther, it did find its way into the courts of Europe. In the ensuing decades and centuries, the name of the obscure Florentine secretary would become synonymous with immoral and unscrupulous political actors, developing into the slur “Machiavel” (as made famous by Shakespeare) and later culminating in the modern adjective “Machiavellian.” As religious tensions and violence escalated in Western Europe, the Florentine’s transgressive political writing developed into a convenient slur to describe and explain one’s political opposition. While hyperbolic, the analysis is understandable: Machiavelli does advise sovereigns to behave in ways which are frequently contrary to traditional European Christian morality.

Following his death and the publication of The Prince, the work became both increasingly influential and controversial. It was rumored, both then and now, that King Henry VIII of England was inspired to break with the Catholic Church, in part, by Machiavelli. As tensions heightened and the fires of reformation broke out across Europe, influential figures on both the Catholic and Protestant sides came to associate their opposition with that teacher of evil, Machiavelli. According to Andrew Curry of The Washington Post, zealous counter-reformer Pope Paul IV added the works of Machiavelli to the Index Librorum Prohibitorum in 1557. The index was an official list of banned books begun by Paul IV in 1555 to combat protestantism, but broadened in scope to include any works he felt offensive or immoral. Despite the addition of his books to the Index Machiavelli was, decidedly, a Catholic. He did have his issues with Christianity, but he was no crypto-Lutheran. Machiavelli wrote of how he felt Christian morals limited princes; he did not write of specifically breaking with the Catholic church or of forming some new Christian sect.

After all, the Prince itself was written before there even were “Lutherans”. At the time of The Prince’s initial writing in 1512 or 1513, Luther was still an unimaginably obscure figure in Northern Germany. It would not be until 1517 that he would dramatically nail his 95 theses to the Wittenberg Cathedral. In spite of these basic, simple-to-observe refutations of any protestant sentiments in Machiavelli’s writing, the Pope still saw his works (or, specifically, The Prince) as threatening enough to the Catholic social order to warrant their banning. A work which advocates prudence over piety was intolerable for the zealous Pope. Therefore, this offensive political philosophy made Machiavelli an enemy of pious Catholics all the same as heretics and heathens.

On the other side of the religious conflict, important protestant commentators of the day identified in their Catholic opponents a dark “Machiavel” influence. One such protestant was Innocent Gentillet, a French Huguenot, Lawyer, and courtier of Henry II. In 1576, as it is argued by scholar C. Edward Rathe, Gentillet first circulated his Anti-Machiavel. This, importantly, places the work four years after the great betrayal of the French protestants during the St. Bartholomew’s Day Massacre.

On the 18th of August, 1572, much of the French Huguenot nobility had gathered in Paris for the marriage of Margaret of Valois, King Charles IX’s sister, and King Henry III of Navarre (later King Henry IV of France). A few days after the marriage, on the eve of the feast of Saint Bartholomew, King Charles IX ordered the killing of a group of these Huguenot leaders which would spiral into a massacre that would claim between 5,000 and 30,000 Huguenots throughout France. The massacre, it came to be believed, was instigated by the Queen Mother, Catherine de’ Medici, an ardent Catholic. It was one of the worst atrocities in the age of the European reformation and would instigate the French wars of religion between the Catholic children of Catherine de’ Medici and the protestant Henry III of Navarre.

Raging against this atrocity and Machiavelli, Gentillet’s 600-page Anti-Machiavel decries the Florentine Secretary of War as a profoundly immoral influence on the politics of Europe. After all, Machiavelli’s political analysis in The Prince does create a justification of sorts for a heinous act like the Saint Bartholomew’s Day Massacre. Other apologists of Machiavelli have identified Gentillet as one of the first in a long line of Anti-Machiavellian writers who unfairly slandered the name of the Florentine writer. While Gentillet is certainly part of this tradition, his objections to Machiavelli are understandable and not unreasonable. He may tread into the territory of a zealous religious partisan and French nationalist, but he does correctly identify that Machiavelli’s writing can justify extreme political violence. Where he misunderstands Machiavelli is in interpreting Machivelli’s special political maxims as general moral maxims, according again to scholar C. Edward Rathe. Gentillet’s traditional christian view of politics and ethics as inseparable led him to, rather expectedly, contribute greatly to the transformation of Machiavelli’s name into a slur. Additionally, according to Jacob Soll, Gentillet’s fierce attacks on Machiavelli helped create a legacy for his poltical writing, but mostly as a “diabolical author defending the methods of tyranny.”

Essentially, the campaign to transform the name of Niccolo Machiavelli into a political slur began in earnest rather quickly in the decades following his death, with both major Catholic figures like Pope Paul IV and protestant writers like Innocent Gentillet levying major attacks against the name of the Florentine political philosopher. In both cases, Machiavelli became associated with the immoral actions of the other side of the European religious conflict, and his name became a descriptor for one’s political and religious enemies. Regardless of Machiavelli’s writings, the nature of European politics was already shifting violently towards a more recognizably modern orientation during the 16th century. He did not will modernity into existence, he was simply one of the first recognize the inflection point in European history. Therefore, the argument posited by both prominent Catholic and Protestant partisans that his influence was to blame for the atrocities of the other side is unfair. Machiavelli’s Il Principe does offer advice to rulers, but it is most critically a text which observes the reality of 16th century European politics. Machiavelli’s diagnosis of what actions are political necessity has been misread, deliberately or otherwise, to twist his name into the political slur, “Machiavellian.”

Section Three: Refuting Gentillet’s Anti-Machiavel

The transformation of Machiavelli’s name into the slur, “Machiavellian”, developed from a deliberate association between the Florentine writer in the context of an increasingly violent European political landscape. Machiavelli is, to his critics, an immoral and wicked man who was unquestionably evil. He did not practice or understand political science, he was simply a proponent of tyranny. This is categorically false. Machiavelli is a teacher of evil, yes, but is not himself an immoral person who loves evil.

One of his earliest published critics, Innocent Gentillet, had this to say of Machiavelli:

“Nicholas Machiavelli… understood little or nothing [of political science]… he has taken maxims and rules altogether wicked, and has built upon them not a political, but a tyrannical science.”

This “tyrannical” science is the most uncharitable description of unobscured political analysis. A sovereign rules because they maintain a preponderance of force over their realm, and Machiavelli’s great crime is recognizing this as such. It is not by God’s grace that Prince’s rule, but by force and fortune. One must, however, recognize Gentillet’s perspective and the context in which he wrote the Anti-Machiavel.

Incensed by the Saint Bartholomew’s day Massacre and balking at the influence of the Italian Queen Mother of France, Catherine d’Medici, Gentillet wrote a nearly six-hundred page screed in the 1570s against Machiavelli (who had already been in the ground some fifty years). This anti-machiavellian manifesto, fitting titled Anti-Machiavel: A Discourse Upon the Means of Well Governing, covers in detail Gentillet’s point-by-point refutation of the core arguments presented by Machiavelli in The Prince as well as Discourses on Livy.

Gentillet’s menacing tome serves as a useful origin for the argument which outlines Machiavelli as a black-hearted “Teacher of Evil”, in the words of Leo Strauss. Within the English literary tradition, the propagation of this conception of Machiavelli the Evil was perhaps done most famously by English playwright William Shakespeare. According to the modern translator of the Anti-Machiavel, Simon Patericke, echoes of the Anti-Machiavel can be found in at least eighteen of Shakespeare’s plays as well as The Rape of Lucrece. The terms “Machiavel” is used to describe characters who are duplicitous, deceitful, and generally immoral. Shakespeare’s plays’ enduring influence on the English language has unfairly laundered Gentillet’s criticisms of Machiavelli into two functionally identical slurs: “Machiavel” for an archaic audience and “Machiavellian” for the modern.

For Gentillet, Machiavelli represented everything he despised in French politics. A man too pragmatic to be sufficiently pious for his high protestant standards, Machiavelli’s criticisms of Christianity incensed him. Furthermore, Gentillet, rather hilariously, saw Machiavelli as representative of a pervasive and treacherous influence of Italians in France. To quote one of his more racists denunciations directly, he declared that “Machiavelli shows himself a man of very good grace when he says that the Italians are a people of nimble and light bodies; for he cannot more properly note them of inconstancy and infidelity”. The irony in such a declaration is that Gentillet’s most hated Italian, Catherine d’Medici, was a scion of the very family which drove Machiavelli into exile from Florence. There was no great love between Machiavelli and the Medici’s, though a narrow-minded 16th century French nobleman can hardly be expected to understand such nuances. Returning to the main argument as to whether Machiavelli is a teacher of evil, one must concede that he is, in fact, guilty of one the primary “crime” his critics levy against him.

Put plainly, Machiavelli does, in fact, counsel evil. He does so without relying on characters like the philosophers of old; he does it in his own name. The critics of Machiavelli are correct: he is an unrepentant teacher of evil. Where they fatally misstep is determining that the “Teacher of Evil” revels in these actions he councils. Gentillet cries that Machiavelli is a man “full of all wickedness, impiety, and ignorance”. This hyperbolic denunciation scratches at the truth, but only does just that: claw feebly towards an actually nuanced understanding of Machiavelli. Rather than a caricature of evil and immorality, Machiavelli is man who would, in the words scholar Narasingha Prosad Sil, “like to live under the reign of virtue”. However, he is unable to find it among people. Therefore, “his cynicism cannot be the the testament of a heartless misanthrope”. Machiavelli is concerned for ideas like “justice”, but he will not allow empty platitudes to interfere with sound political advice.

For Machiavelli, the reign of virtue, ultimately determined to be unattainable, must be instead replaced by the rule of necessity. The chivalrous Prince will find himself deposed by a “Machiavellian” figure, ruthless and scheming. Machiavelli’s advice is as follows: fight fire with fire. The prince who wisely and pragmatically utilizes the teachings of Machiavelli’s transgressive pamphlet has the requisite tools to fight off the most evil-hearted and opportunistic of men. Concerns of morality and virtue are a luxury for a successful prince to consider: the upstart prince, however, must first wrest control of their polity by any means necessary. Machiavelli argues, through this, that the ends justify the means. Irregardless of if one agrees with his analysis, he can not be, in good faith, written off as some immoral monster. A tolerance for immoral actions as a means to an end is not a preference for immorality: it is the recognition of political necessity above all.

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Background: With the risk of engaging in escapism, Animal Crossing: New Horizons offers players a dreamworld where they may momentarily escape the harsh realities. In contrast, the New Horizons environment develops into the ideal social platform for maintaining social engagement with people in order to combat loneliness. The article distinguishes whether the game is a “dreamland” or just a temporary form of escapism.

How I Used It: I used this article to explain that there are more ways for social interaction than just communicating with players online. There are in-game villagers waiting to become friends with the player. Zhu also explains how playing online with other players has its benefits. Zhu explained how many meaningful events that were canceled because of the pandemic were celebrated in the world of Animal Crossing. It brought people a sense of normalcy when we lived in an era when everything wasn’t.

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Background: Research suggests that playing video games contributes to positive emotions. Some of these benefits may be attributed to the stress-relieving abilities that video games have. In order for players to be able to shift their focus away from stress they are experiencing in their everyday, offline life, they need to immerse themselves in a fictional world.

How I Used It: The article displays the social benefits of Animal Crossing: New Horizons. Many people can join their friends on their islands to play games, celebrate meaningful events, trade items, or to just have fun with their friends, new or old.

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How I Used It: I discussed more in detail (while citing Fishman) with discussing individuals communicating with friends through video games towards the game Animal Crossing: New Horizons. Animal Crossing: New Horizons is, in fact, a safe space for players. Not only can it provide a relaxing experience playing the game, but it is also safe in general with easy ways to opt out from communicating with people online.

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Background: Offline social relationships are more valuable. However, online relationships can be less valuable. As a matter of fact, their net benefit is consistent with whether they help or replace offline social relationships. The article has surveys have stated that online social interaction is the most important use of the Internet.

How I Used It: During the pandemic, I can assume that these survey results probably changed with more people becoming more dependent on online social interaction. I used this article to bring attention to the how social interaction

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Background: The article discusses the online features in Animal Crossing: New Horizons and how they are used within the game. Many events, that were cancelled because of the pandemic. The article goes into explaining how the online mechanics are used and how to visit other players’ islands (through DoDo codes, as an example).

How I Used It: I used the article to address that Animal Crossing: New Horizons is simply another form of social media. You can add or remove friends, you can send messages whenever you’d like to friends, and the added feature (that most social media platforms do not have) to play games together. Animal Crossing: New Horizons is technically another form of social media, but many won’t consider that because it isn’t like Instagram or Snapchat

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Background: The article discusses what Animal Crossing is as a whole and how people have turned to it when the pandemic struck because it was what everyone was doing as a form to cope with the harsh realities of what we were experiencing in the world.

How I Used It: While the article did not make my final research paper, I used the article to express the point that people have connected socially through this game. Animal Crossing: New Horizons’ joy is going to other players’ islands (wherever they may be in real life) and having fun together. Since the pandemic disabled us from seeing people on a daily basis, New Horizons filled this void.

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How I Used It: This article was not used into my final research paper. However, this article not only discusses the games ways of reducing the feeling of having a lack of social interaction, but also anxiety and depression, which can be possible outcomes of certain people who experienced a lack of social interaction. I want to use the outcomes of this study to compare the different people’s responses to the game and how it affected their mental state during the pandemic.

8: Comerford, C. (2020). COCONUTS, CUSTOM-PLAY, & COVID-19: SOCIAL ISOLATION, SERIOUS LEISURE,AND PERSONAS IN ANIMAL CROSSING: NEW HORIZONS. Persona Studies, 06(02). https://doi.org/https://search.informit.org/doi/epdf/10.3316/informit.963753190548669

Background: This paper discusses Animal Crossing: New Horizons’ (ACNH) release during the COVID-19 pandemic. It draws upon responses from nearly 2000 players to frame how the game acts as a platform for routine substitution and social connectivity in a disconnected physical world. A combination of the game’s elements, including its comforting aesthetic, participatory community, financial mechanics, and goal-setting, promotes the player’s construction of their sense of self.

How I Used It: While this source did not make it into my final paper, I want to dive deeper into each feature of the game and see what features helped users with their mental state. I feel there are far more features than just the social aspect of this game that can create a calming atmosphere for players to delve into.

9: Yee, A. Z. H., & Sng, J. R. H. (2022, April 1). Animal Crossing and COVID-19: A Qualitative Study Examining How Video Games Satisfy Basic Psychological Needs During the Pandemic. Frontiers. Retrieved February 5, 2023, from https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fpsyg.2022.800683/full

Background: The COVID-19 pandemic has affected the way many people live their lives. The increasing amount of time spent indoors and isolated has been accompanied by an increase in the time people spend playing video games. One such game which soared in popularity during the early stages of the pandemic was Animal Crossing: New Horizons. Findings suggest that playing the game helped satisfy various psychological needs.

How I Used It: I want myself and my readers to understand each intricate aspect of the game and how it may satisfy feelings of loneliness, anxiety, and depression. Animal Crossing: New Horizons main mechanic is its social features. Whether the player chooses to interact with the villagers that reside on their island or they can find players online (via Nookazon) or the online feature that allows players to visit other islands. The game play of Animal Crossing: New Horizons is set up very simply in making new friends online.

10: Zhang, R. (2020, April 13). Socially Connected with “Animal Crossing” During Social Distancing. The Bottom Line. Retrieved February 20, 2023, from https://thebottomline.as.ucsb.edu/2020/04/socially-connected-with-animal-crossing-during-social-distancing

Background: This article discusses the main features of Animal Crossing: New Horizons. The game features synchronous time so players can play with each other 24 hours a day, villagers who gift the player items from the game, and designing their own clothes (to name a few).

How I Used It: While this article did not make my final research paper, this article explaining how the time is synced with our real world makes the game more convenient for players. With this feature, players can make an arrangement to play Animal Crossing together online. This is also convenient for players who utilize Nookazon to make transactions with others and to have those newfound faces from the Internet join their islands online.

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Bibliography – Rowanluver29

  1. Arnold, Sam H. “The Tragic Story of a Boy who was Abused and Became a Monster ” Medium. Medium, 21 December 2022

Background: This website gives insight about Carl Panzram, his childhood, and his murders. It describes in detail a lot of darker sides of his childhood that let him to become who he was today, and how different experiences ruined any hopes for him of becoming a decent human being.

How I used it: I used this murderer and his childhood and proof of no drug use to respectfully, take out my opponents’ knees when it comes to proving that in order for childhood abuse to have an effect on a serial killer, there does not have to be neurological damage done by drugs or lead exposure. But mainly I also used this article to expand on the kind of childhood Carl Panzram had.

2. “Carl Panzram” Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, 13 April 2023.

Background: This website gives insight about Carl Panzram, his childhood, and his murders.

How I used it: I used this murderer and his childhood and proof of no drug use to respectfully, take out my opponents’ knees when it comes to proving that in order for childhood abuse to have an effect on a serial killer, there does not have to be neurological damage done by drugs or lead exposure.

3. Ferrarin, Elena. “Did an Abusive Childhood Turn Albert DeSalvo Into the ‘Boston Strangler’ Serial Killer?” AETV. AETV, 02 June 2021  

Background: This article discusses murderer Albert DeSalvo and his story as a murderer and about his childhood. It discusses if an abusive childhood turned him into the person who is known to be the Boston Strangler.

How I used it: In the article it says that child abuse cannot be the only thing that drives one to become a serial killer, the article states there has to be neurological damage done by injury or drugs to lead allow a murderer to stem from an abusive childhood, which I believe I can prove wrong in my rebuttal.

4.   Mitra, Shraman. “Did Jeffrey Dahmer Have Seizures? Did Jeffrey Dahmer Have AIDS?” The Cinemaholic. The Cinemaholic, 24 September. 2022

Background: I am focusing mainly on one paragraph in this article that focuses on his behavior in school and why he acted the way he did. It also focus’s a little bit on his experiences with being bullied.


How I used it:
I used this to elaborate on the trouble in Dahmer’s childhood to expand on the topic that I discussed in this part of my research paper, that dove more deeply into the backgrounds of some famous serial killers.

5. Hagan, Ekua. “Serial Homicide for Power and Control.” Psychology Today. Psychology Today, 9 April 2018.

Background: This type of killer, murders for a sense of control over their victim or greed/thrill seeking needs. This is the most common type of serial killer, and an example of this would be John Wayne Gacy, one of the other murderers (who will be mentioned in the essay) also committed murders because it made him feel like a “God.”


How I used it:
I intend used this article to describe in simple yet detailed terms kind of murderer this is and to give examples of how they fall under that category, what childhood circumstances caused them to end up there and an example of a murderer as well as their actions.

6. Hagan, Ekua. “Visionary Serial Killers Are Driven by Inner Demons.” Psychology Today. Psychology Today, 26 January 2015.

Background: This article goes a little bit more into depth about what goes on in the mind of a visionary serial killer, and what drove them mentally to become this kind of serial killer. One sentence caught my attention when first skimming the article over: Such individuals are often suffering from either psychoses or some other form of mental illness.” and it reminded me to make sure to include to research what kind of mental illness can lead one to become a visionary murderer.

How I used it: One sentence caught my attention when first skimming the article over: Such individuals are often suffering from either psychoses or some other form of mental illness.” and it reminded me to make sure to include to research what kind of mental illness can lead one to become a visionary murderer. I used this for one of my paragraphs that goes more in depth about visionary murderers and their past. I also found another example of a visionary killer to compare it to, just to show the readers an example.

7. Hagan, Ekua. “Understanding Pragmatic Mission Killers.”   Psychology Today. Psychology Today, 17 September 2018.

Background: Again, this article delves deeper into pragmatic killers, also known as murderers with a mission. These murderers often believe that when they murder a specific group of people, they will make the world a better place.

How I used it: I used this article to help describe 1 out of the 4 different types of murderers. Among these four paragraphs I include how these specific murderers were raised and to see if different murderers that fall under the same category have the same underlying mental illnesses, often caused by an abusive childhood.

8. Holden, Luke. “These Are The 4 Types Of Serial Killers.” Grunge. Grunge, 10 February 2022  

Background: This article describes the basics of the four different types of serial killers, and what drives them to murder other human beings. This article also gives examples of murderers and what drove them to commit the murders they did. This article is short but it is a good jump start to the base of what I want my definition argument to be about, I intent to find more articles that go into more depth about the different types.

How I used it: I will use this when re-writing my definition argument to describe “the perfect childhood on raising a serial killer.”I will start off with describing the different types of serial killers with examples, then follow up with what could have caused them to fall into one of the four categories of murderer.

9. Hagan, Ekua. “Hedonist Lust Killers Must Feed Their Insatiable Hunger.”  Psychology Today. Psychology Today, 1 December 2014.

Background: This article is the same author as the one above discussing visionary serial killers, I like this website because it gets to the point and tells me the perfect amount of information I need to know to give the audience of my paper a good idea of what to know about the four different types of murders. This article again goes more in depth about the hedonist type of murderer and tells us what drives the murderers to do what they do when they fall under the category of the hedonist lust murderer.

How I used it: This article discusses a lot about fantasy kills and how a lot of the murders were driven by the want for sexual impulse or desire for the perfect lover. They give a lot of detail about how the murderer Jeffery Dahmer was strongly known for this type of murder, and they also give background about specific actions Dahmer and other murders did that got them addicted to this type of murder. This type of murderer is very disturbing. I used it to describe one of the four killers and relate it specifically to Jeffery Dahmer.

10. “David Berkowitz.”  Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, 23 April 2023

    Background: This article talks a lot about Berkowitz and his family life, how he was adopted and how he found out the reasoning of why he was put up for adoption and what it did to him mentally that causes people to think that is the start of why he started to commit murders.
    How I used it:
    I used this just to add on to the examples used in other articles for more backup information and to add in some more facts and details about Berkowitz and his history as a child.

    11. Guy, Fiona. “Serial Killers And Childhood Abuse: Is There A Link?” Crime Traveller. Crime Traveller, 11 April 2023.

    Background: This article discusses how serial killers and childhood abuse correlate heavily with one another. In most cases, they go hand in hand. This article discusses different types of trauma, statistics with trauma and murders, and even some information about books written and how the authors got the information needed to write the books through interviews with murderers or heavy research.

    How I used it: I used this article to back up my hypothesis and how that a lot of serial killers become serial killers because of their childhood trauma. Although this is not always the only reason or a reason at all, a lot of the time it is a factor that does heavily influence their actions. I used the statistics to help show the audience that there is a difference between the general population and the serial killer population when it comes to psychological abuse. The normal population shows 2% and the serial killer population shows 50%.

    12. Howell-Relojo, Dennis. “The Dark Psychology of Serial Killers: Unpacking the Factors Behind their Brutal Behaviour.” Psychreg. Psychreg, 05 February 2023.

    Background: This article touches on child abuse but also the other things that go hand in hand with child abuse that are other influences for murderers to do what they do. This can include something psychologically wrong with them like stated above, social and environmental factors, and also some health studies.

    How I used it: I used this article to help break up all of the child abuse talk and also include some other factors that can enhance the PTSD from the child abuse, so I am steering off track just enough to talk about something else, but it still all ties back to abuse in the home. Reading further into the article I discovered that it also contains mental disorders that can be caused by abuse encountered at a young age, I went into detail about the different mental disorders, how they affect an individual and how it will higher the probability of one becoming a serial killer.

    13. Davies, Nicola. “From Abused Child to Serial Killer: Investigating Nature vs Nurture in Methods of Murder.” Psychiatry Advisor. Psychiatry Advisor, 26 June 2018.

    Background: This article shows that not all abused children become serial killers, and not all serial killers are victims of childhood abuse. However, the connection between the two cannot be dismissed as just coincidence. It also decodes the criminal mind and gives little statistics.

    How I used it: I used this article to describe how nature vs nurture can influence how a child grows up, even if they become a murderer or not. I used it to to help me explain how nature and nurture can influence a child to commit this horrible crime, but I also show that not ALL children of abuse grow up to be murderers.

    14. Mitchell, Heather & Aamodt, Michael G. “The incidence of child abuse in serial killers.” Springer Link. Springer Link, March 2005

    Background: This article talks a little but about a murderer named Albert DeSalvo and how his past proves that child abuse cannot be the only factor that goes into creating a murderer, there has to be some sort of body or drug complication.

    How I used it: There are a few quotes in this article that go against what my hypothesis is stating, so I used this in my rebuttal argument and prove their statements wrong with evidence.

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    Research – Senpai Pio

    What is the point of Research Paper’s?

    The purpose of a research paper is for the student to take time to research the ins and outs of a specific topic. Then, using the findings, put together a well-written paper explaining what they found to either explain or persuade their audience. On the outside, that does not seem too bad. The student is able to learn about something new, and it can show the teacher how much they have learned throughout the course of the class. However, that overlooks a large majority of truly what gets put into a research paper. Not only are countless hours put into a singular assignment, the amount of stress for the student and the teacher, and the negative impact it could have on a student’s future school work could ultimately contradict the entire purpose of the research paper.


    One of the most important parts of the research paper is the number of hours that goes into the paper. Between planning, researching, organizing, and actually writing, the amount of hours spent on the paper is astronomical. The amount of hours spent on school work in general has a negative impact on all aspects of a student’s life. Nadya M. Kouzma and Gerald A. Kennedy of Victoria University worked on a study to see how the number of hours spent on homework impacted the students’ mental health, “Table 2 shows that the number of hours spent on homework was positively related to scores for stress, Depression-Dejection, Tension-Anxiety, Fatigue-Jnertia, Confusion-Bedderment, Anger-Hostility, Vigor-Activity, and Mood Disturbance. Also, stress was positively correlated with rated Depression-Dejection, Tension-Anxiety, Fatigue-Inertia, Confusion-Bewilderment, Anger-Hostility, Vigor-Activity, and Mood Disturbance.” The long hours of working on a research paper can be extremely detrimental to their mental health. As stated in the article, there is a correlation between working long hours on schoolwork and stress which would make sense in the paper done by Human Psychiatry Human Dev, “Toero et al. [7] argued that there is a strong link between the pressure to excel in school and suicidal behaviors among children and adolescents. In their study, Toero et al. [7] showed that the number of suicide cases in a year usually peaked during examination periods where children and adolescents experienced a high level of stress in school.” Using the fact that there was a correlation between school work and stress, it seems there is a correlation between school work and suicide rates. This is often overlooked while dealing with research papers. Since that is not the purpose of the paper, people do not think about the side effects. Although research papers are not meant to do that, it seems they can lead to an increase in suicide rates.


    While the student is extremely important, the teacher’s mental health cannot be ignored. Similar to how an overload of work impacts a student’s mental health, it can detriment a teacher. According to an article going over teach burnout, written by Willy Lens and Saul Neves De Jesus, “Teachers have consistently cited work overload as a major stressor in their job; important factors include excessive paperwork, oversize classes comprising students of heterogeneous academic abilities, imposed time constraints, and the need to teach courses that are outside their particular skill area.” Often overlooked, the amount of schoolwork given can affect the teacher’s stress levels. Someone has to grade the assignments, give feedback, and help out the students in any way. Teachers arguably have a significantly larger workload than students. As previously said, there is a link between stress levels and suicide rates that cannot be ignored.


    An issue currently going through many high schools and colleges is dealing with burnout. Burnout can happen for many reasons, but it ultimately prevents the student from having the ability to do any of their work. From an article by the International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health, “A chronic exposure to academic stress can result in school burnout, defined as an emotional state of exhaustion, cynicism, and depersonalization.” As seen before, stress can greatly negatively impact the student. This time, it is burning out the student from being able to complete their school work. The large workload provided by a research paper can lead to stress which will burn out the student.

    While burnout does mean an increase in stress, it also can explain the dropping of grades in the student’s future. Written by Daniel J. Madigan and Thomas Curran, explain, “ Aligned with our hypotheses, burnout did indeed emerge as a significant negative predictor of achievement (exams, grades, GPA). In this regard, total burnout and all three burnout symptoms predicted worse academic achievement. There was also evidence that the instrument used to measure burnout (MBI, SBI) moderated the relationship between the reduced efficacy dimension of burnout and academic achievement.” Caused by burnout, in their study there was a drop in GPA, grades, and exams. This not only explains why burnout can be detrimental to a student, but it also explains the impact it may have on the student’s career. From the workload presented by a research paper, the future of the student can be impacted due to burnout as result of the paper.


    While research papers are generally thought to help out a student, the majority of people truly do not know what is involved when writing a research paper. Since research papers have an extremely large workload, it often negatively impacts the students. Working on a research paper almost always ends up becoming an increase of stress, anxiety, depression, and many other negative emotions. These emotions lead to impacting the student in many easy such as burnout, a decrease in happiness, and possibly even suicide. Not only does this impact the student, but the same emotions can also be felt from the teacher’s perspective. With the increase in work for them, the same effects of a research paper can be seen. Maybe research papers should not be seen as helpful as they are. It seems the negatives extremely outweigh the pros that can come from one.


    The whole purpose of a research paper is to explain the results found in different studies. In order to help people have easy access to finding different studies, google created a website called google scholar. On the surface, google scholar seems like it would be extremely helpful for students especially when dealing with a research paper. There are millions of studies that already have the work cited written out, results stated clearly, and links to hundreds of other related sources in order to help the student find whatever they are looking for. However, google scholar fails to truly succeed in achieving the overall goal of helping demonstrate research.


    While trying to find the first couple of sources for this research paper, I came to your attention. I quickly had to change my topic fast. I was originally going to write about how the Phillies would weaken their defense prior to the 2022 MLB season which ultimately strengthened their overall team. This was due to the added players like Kyle Shwarber who is historically terrible on defense but was a key addition to the offensive production. When I typed “Phillies” into google scholar just to see what would pop up, I was shown an article talking about chemistry as the first search. This is because the article was written by Kiril Streletzky and George D. J. Phillies. If you go past that singular article, you are left with hundreds all written by George D. J. Phillies. There may be students ecstatic over finding his chemist work, but personally, I was limited in what I could research. If I was limited in what I could research, imagine how many other kids also had the same issues that I had. Unfortunately, I had a topic I would have been extremely passionate about, but I was forced to switch topics due to google scholar’s limiting coverage.


    Regardless of the limited content, the language barrier on google scholar is often overlooked. While using Google, in order to switch between different languages one just has to change one setting. This then changes every word to whatever language one changed it to. Since Google Scholar is a specialized search engine from Google, it is thought to work relatively the same way. When changing the language in Google Scholar, the settings are changed to that language, but none of the articles are changed. If they are able to change the contents of Google’s articles, it is shocking that Google Scholar does not also just translate them. Of the few articles already on Google Scholar, the language barrier drastically lowers that number. A search engine made strictly for research is limiting how much research one may do strictly based on the language one speak.


    In addition to the language barrier, the accessibility of each article can limit the amount one’s ability to research. The few times that there is an article that one can use, it is often shut down behind the paywall that blocks researchers from the work. Most schools like Rowan do allow their students to access these websites for no additional cost, but that does not include all of them. While testing out google scholar, the first article on “solar system” was written in 1966. It is blocked by a paywall of $35.95 for 48-hour access for thirteen pages. With an extremely large amount of information learned about the solar system in the past couple of decades, the information in that article most likely has no revelation or truth anymore. For this essay alone with upwards of ten sources, it could cost over $400. With most of the articles not even being used, a researcher without a university will have to break the bank just to support their claim.


    One of the key features of Google Scholar is that it presents you with the citation for the article, and the articles show the researcher their works cited page. On paper, this sounds amazing, but there is a huge flaw. According to Penn State University, they made an article talking about the pros and cons of using Google Scholar, “No wonder that authors, journals and the numerical-chronological designations (publication year, volume, issue and starting page numbers) are misidentified for millions of documents. As a consequence, the citation-matching algorithm of GS is equally unreliable, often yielding excessive and obviously absurd numbers of false positives and false negatives.” Although one may cite a website, by citing it incorrectly, it is still considered plagiarism. Many researchers most likely used those citations listed by Google Scholar without even realizing they are plagiarizing. Also according to the Penn State article on the pros and cons of Google Scholar, they followed the number of citations written for one of their other articles. It was reported that the article was cited a total of 57 times. When entering the article, Google Scholar says that that number is actually 55 times cited, but they can only show 53 times. With every number being different, it shows how Google Scholar gives a rough estimate number. The Google Scholar algorithm used to find these numbers are obviously flawed. If the algorithm cannot correctly get the number of citations, the algorithm most likely messes up the other numbers used in the citations.


    Although Google Scholar in theory is a great idea to help researchers, it is extremely counterintuitive to the extreme flaws it has. The limited number of articles affects the variety that one can research and how in-depth one want to get. That number can exponentially decrease when implementing the language barrier which Google does not have. If the language barrier does not affect a researcher, they may be limited by the paywall that blocks a majority of the websites on Google Scholar. Since most schools do pay for a generous amount of websites, the small chance that one can find a website they could use, the citation listed by Google Scholar could be wrong. By dealing with all the issues with Google Scholar, they can give someone a big thank you by causing a researcher to plagiarize their entire paper.
    Intuition is the gut feeling one gets in a certain situation. Like when playing a horror video game, and one knows any second a character is going to pop out. Counterintuition is the opposite. In the video game, the developer knows a character should pop out and scare the gamer, but they choose not to do it. It is counterintuitive that the character did not pop out at that moment. Professor David Hodges, an English Composition, from Rowan University focuses on the idea of counterintuitive. With the focus on counterintuitively, some students may be held back from the opinion of the word, the trap of focusing on the white paper, and the unreliability that the reader is truly going to listen that all make research papers an insignificant way of judging whether or not a student has obtained knowledge presented in English Composition Two.


    Counterintuitiveness can be seen as subjective. Something may make sense to one person that goes right over the head of someone else. For example, when talking about purposeful summaries, Professor Hodges was going over quick examples, “It seems counterintuitive that human life, which everyone knows gets DNA from two parents when male sperm fertilizes a female egg, could ever require, or even make use of, the DNA of three parents. But that’s exactly what is happening.” To some people like Professor Hodges, that may make complete sense. To others, it may not seem that way. At one point, that most certainly sounds counterintuitive, but with recent discoveries and new technology, it may not seem that way. Who is to say that reproducing with three, four, or five is not possible? To those scientists or patients that have seen this firsthand, the statement above may seem very intuitive.

    Throughout the entire spring semester, the students are supposed to keep writing on the same article called the white paper. This is just a rough sketch of everything. The students are supposed to keep quotes, ideas, important summaries, articles, and much more in this document. The whole purpose is to stay organized throughout the year in order to help the student write their research paper. This may work for some students, but it may also cause failure in others. According to Anu Haapala, writer for Central and Eastern European Online Library, states, “According to many recent studies the effect of learning style on academic performance has been found to be significant and mismatch between teaching and learning styles causes learning failure and frustration.” It is known that students learn differently, but students also write differently. Some students may need to write everything out, have two to three attempts at writing an introduction paragraph, and plan everything including the paragraph structure, or some students can just naturally write. There is no right or wrong way to get to a destination as long as they get there.

    The research paper that the students have been working on the entirety of the year according to Professor Hodges, “is to persuade readers of the rightness of your opinion based on the evidence you’ve compiled and synthesized.” This is supposed to be achieved with hours beyond hours of research, but it can all be for nothing. In an example presented by Professor Hodges, there is a bridge that is not wide enough for people to fish and walk by it. Dogs were accidentally getting caught on or eating fish hooks. So, they put up a sign explaining that no one is allowed to fish there anymore. According to Professor Hodges in the Invention by Naming article, “Now that the signs are up, dog walkers can demand the right of way, and the kids with their tackle might grumble, but they leave when they’re told to leave.” The kids do leave after they are told, but they wait until they are told. Before someone walks their dog there, the sign is completely ignored. The same goes for research papers. Hours are spent obtaining facts and evidence, and like the kids, they can just be completely ignored. How is the student supposed to persuade someone who does not want to be pursued?

    Likewise, when going over the Stanford Prison experiment, many students explained how it was due to white men that they acted out as they did. Very few students explained how instead it was due to the fact that it was human nature to act out that way. When debating about the topic, very few students were outnumbered, and their opinions ultimately were ignored. According to Thibault Le Texier who quoted professor Philip Zombardo, “I had been conducting research for some years on deindividuation, vandalism, and dehumanization that illustrated the ease with which ordinary people could be led to engage in antisocial acts by putting them in situations where they felt anonymous, or they could perceive of others in ways that made them less than human, as enemies or objects [. . .] [I wondered] what would happen if we aggregated all of these processes, making some subjects feel deindividuated, others dehumanized within an anonymous environment in the same experimental setting, and where we could carefully document the process over time. (Stanford University News Service, 1997, p. 8)” The ultimate goal was to dehumanize the prisoners. Since everyone is human, regardless of race or gender, the same things would have happened. When explaining this to the other students in the class, a few students were completely ignored. This shows how easy it is to ignore a claim, just because one does not want to believe the opposing side.

    Since the topic of the research paper, counterintuition, trapping one into planning and writing a certain way, and the possibility of certain claims being ignored, the research paper to show what knowledge a student has obtained becomes absurd. Counterintuition can be different things depending on the person. Words or phrases mean different things to everyone. Likewise, so do claims. After figuring out a claim, the ability to write the research paper in a certain format may not work depending on what kind of student the writer is. The possibility of their claims being ignored, like the sign on the bridge, may invalidate a writer’s paper strictly due to the reader and their previous viewpoints. While research papers may seem like a good way to see a student’s knowledge, they have many flaws. Providing different ways of allowing a student to show what they have learned, is a gateway to the best chance of success for every student.

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