Annotated Bibliography-Levixvice

  1. Myrick, A.J., Baker, T.C. Analysis of Anemotactic Flight Tendencies of the Spotted Lanternfly (Lycorma delicatula) during the 2017 Mass Dispersal Flights in Pennsylvania. J Insect Behav 32, 11–23 (2019). https://doi-org.ezproxy.rowan.edu/10.1007/s10905-019-09708-x Background: This article was used for the Spotted Lanternflies of their flight pattern and velocity during their breach in America when getting their food from fruit trees, vines, and normal trees for their bark. In order gather food to fuel up and a nest to lay their eggs during the winter months. How I used It: The ground speed used as a running mark before taking flight upwards to their destination as create a mental map of their flight capability that also helps them to spread from place to place within a short distance.

2. Houping Liu, Oviposition Substrate Selection, Egg Mass Characteristics, Host Preference, and Life History of the Spotted Lanternfly (Hemiptera: Fulgoridae) in North America, Environmental Entomology, Volume 48, Issue 6, December 2019, Pages 1452–1468, https://doi.org/10.1093/ee/nvz123

Background: This article contains the essential nutrients and egg nests for Spotted Lanternflies which are in fact plant trees and trees from the forest. It also includes how the female of the species would reproduce before the winter season arrives with measurements.

How I used It: The egg masses were all measured by their height, width, and depth as well as the density being how much eggs that female laid on each preferred tree they would used for the right amount. It also knows about the days on which the eggs will hatch to their growth over time becomes different.

3. “Spotted Lanternfly.” About the Spotted Lanternfly, Department of Agriculture, https://www.nj.gov/agriculture/divisions/pi/prog/pests-diseases/spotted-lanternfly/about/.

Background: This article describe what each life stage of a spotted Lanternfly would turn out to be with their abilities and coloration from nymphs to adult forms.

How I used It: This was used as a continuation from the previous article to explain more of their cycle in description revealing more info about the egg masses would look like mud in September into harden dirt in June.

4. Dechaine, Andrew Chase. “Phenology, Impact, and Rearing of Lycorma Delicatula (White) (Spotted Lanternfly) in Virginia .” VTechWorks Home, Virginia Tech, 2 Apr. 2021, https://vtechworks.lib.vt.edu/handle/10919/102930. https://vtechworks.lib.vt.edu/handle/10919/102930

Background: Phenology for the Spotted Lanternfly has progressed within America impacting farming and the environment for the worse through sampling and evidence to counteract these pest.

How I Used It: The counteractions were created in order to cull the Spotted Lanternfly through the methods of insecticides on trees to be protected from those flies and eventually kill them including using the insecticide on their favorite plant, the Tree of Heaven (A. altissima).

5. Liu, Houping, and Jason Mottern. Academic.oup.com, Oxford Academic, 27 Jan. 2017, https://academic.oup.com/jinsectscience/article/17/1/18/2875340.

Background: This article contains information about the existence of the Gypsy Moth’s encyrtid egg parasitoid called the Ooencyrtus kuvanae that used to control the Gypsy Moth population in America from the 1900s.

How I Used It: This parasitoid can be used effectively against the Spotted Lanternflies through implanting the host the eggs into a biological sense to protected and then be eaten off in any life stage the Lanternfly would be in, whether inside the egg masses during winter.

6. Leach, Heather, et al. “Evaluation of Insecticides for Control of the Spotted Lanternfly, Lycorma Delicatula, (Hemiptera: Fulgoridae), a New Pest of Fruit in the Northeastern U.S.” Crop Protection, Elsevier, 30 May 2019, https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0261219419301735?casa_token=HS980H8VqHgAAAAA%3APjvS6LajEnAFNPSA3w7969WkMkbulGC1Sce3EXLJQn4uFPLcL9LqPUeh_AplpbBD5Umt8a0LDw.

Background: The insecticide used on agriculture from the northeast to protect shrubs and fruit trees before the harvest starts during the fall season.

How I used It: This would be connected to number four for protection from the Spotted Lanternflies, that even stopping the egg masses from being planted.

7. Francese, Joseph A, et al. “Developing Traps for the Spotted Lanternfly, Lycorma Delicatula (Hemiptera: Fulgoridae).” Academic.oup.com, 28 Jan. 2020, https://academic.oup.com/ee/article/49/2/269/5716627?login=true.

Background: Methods on capturing Spotted Lanternflies from where they live and before winter time comes around.

How I used It: Such capturing methods include the weaknesses of each Lanternfly of their preferred tree, the stage they are in, and how effective trap can be to cull the insects fully.

8. Wang, Rong-Rong, et al. “Relating antennal sensilla diversity and possible species behaviour in the planthopper pest Lycorma delicatula (Hemiptera: Fulgoromorpha: Fulgoridae).” PLoS ONE, vol. 13, no. 3, 27 Mar. 2018, p. e0194995. Gale Academic OneFile, link.gale.com/apps/doc/A532485920/AONE?u=rowan&sid=bookmark-AONE&xid=9a13d451. Accessed 6 Dec. 2021.

Background: This details the differences the male and female Spotted Lanternfly through biological process as well as behavioral senses that extends from their sensory structures.

How I used It: I connect it to number 4 and 3 of their species being planthopper to learn their weaknesses and exploiting them without the need of insecticides that would harm other creatures as well.

9. Lawrence Barringer, Claire M Ciafré, Worldwide Feeding Host Plants of Spotted Lanternfly, With Significant Additions From North America, Environmental Entomology, Volume 49, Issue 5, October 2020, Pages 999–1011, https://doi.org/10.1093/ee/nvaa093

Background: Spotted Lanternflies depend on tree nutrients; such as the bark and tree sap that contains the sugar to refuel to survive and reproduce.

How I use it: I’ll use it to connect it with number two and seven to use this knowledge to plant traps around the tree.

10. Liu, Houping. “Occurrence, Seasonal Abundance, and Superparasitism of Ooencyrtus Kuvanae (Hymenoptera: Encyrtidae) as an Egg Parasitoid of the Spotted Lanternfly (Lycorma Delicatula) in North America.” MDPI, Multidisciplinary Digital Publishing Institute, 22 Jan. 2019, https://www.mdpi.com/1999-4907/10/2/79#cite.

Background: contains the functionality of superparasitism of how the Ooencyrtus Kuvanae wasp uses upon its prey of choice.

How I use it: connect it with number 5 with how the wasp would plant parasites inside the Spotted Lanternflies’ eggs and it effect on the offspring when it hatches.

11. Mohn, Aprille Noelle. “Anxiety: Environmental and Otherwise – Jayscholar.etown.edu.” JayScholar, Elizabethtown College, Mar. 2021, https://jayscholar.etown.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1009&context=englstu.

Background: This contains the environmental anxiety around the world and it includes the invasive species hazard that would harm natural balance.

How I use it: To associate it with Spotted Lanternflies as a invasive species that would decrease the tree population and make worse for the other species.

12. Liu, Houping. “Seasonal Development, Cumulative Growing Degree-Days, and Population Density of Spotted Lanternfly (Hemiptera: Fulgoridae) on Selected Hosts and Substrates.” Academic.oup.com, Oxford Academic, 1 Aug. 2020, https://academic.oup.com/ee/article/49/5/1171/5879580?login=true.

Background: The population density for Spotted Lanternfly from their sites, substrates, and sampling to know how many are these insects are in during the research in each tree.

How I use it: researching on the trees they use for their egg masses and how will they grow in size.

13. Urban, Julie M, and Dennis Calvin. “Early Response (2018–2020) to the Threat of Spotted Lanternfly, Lycorma Delicatula (Hemiptera: Fulgoridae) in Pennsylvania.” Academic.oup.com, Oxford Academic, 26 Aug. 2021, https://academic.oup.com/aesa/article-abstract/114/6/709/6358080.

Background: The history of how the Spotted Lanternflies came to America and its efforts to infest the northeast.

How I use it: becoming aware of their emergence and damage they’ve done on the landscape and since 2014.

14. Nixon, Laura J, et al. “Development of Behaviorally Based Monitoring and Biosurveillance Tools for the Invasive Spotted Lanternfly (Hemiptera: Fulgoridae) .” Academic.oup.com, Oxford Academic, 21 Aug. 2020, https://academic.oup.com/ee/article/49/5/1117/5895233?login=true.

Background: monitoring the Spotted Lanternflies through the traps which the researchers can learn more about the population.

How I use it: to connect it to number 9 and 12

15. Urban, Julie M. “Perspective: Shedding Light on Spotted Lanternfly Impacts in the USA.” Wiley Online Library, John Wiley & Sons, Ltd, 10 Oct. 2019, https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1002/ps.5619.

Background: More information about the consequences of how Spotted Lanternflies will corrupt the environment as pestilence.

How I use it: to connect it with number 11 and 9 in a way the environment is becoming imbalance; due to the invasive species’ presence.

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Not Because – chickendinner

1. Coats’ firing was not for using marijuana. After all, he had a prescription to use it and was entirely within his legal right. Coats was fired becase he violated workplace policy.

2. An employee taking medicine to mitigate their anxiety is not a legitimate reason to fire them.

3. Since alcohol is not illegal, employees can responsibly enjoy it on their own time without fear for their job. Since marijuana is not illegal in Colorado, the same standard should apply.

4. It is unjust that Coats was fired simply for trying to mitigate his pain.

5. An employee eaing the pain from their muscle spams using marijuana should not be grounds to discriminate against them.

6. Coats was smoking marijuana on his own time and property and hence was not harming anyone.

7. Omar Gonzalez failed to penetrate deep into the White House because of the swift actions of Secret Service agents.

8. The way the Secret Service responded to the breach of the White House is not a matter of investigation, but how the breach occurred is under question.

9. Secret Service chief Julia Pierson’s testimony before Congress yesterday will not cost her her job, but her own incompetence might.

10. Secret Service agents refrained from using deadly force against the intruder because he was carrying a knife with a 4-inch blade.

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definition-Eagles21

The customs of the National Football League (NFL) allegations against any foul play over the years has been very well improved. The scientific research into types of injuries and properly curing these injuries is extremely important. Tables and problematic research has made it more successful for being able to feel more comfortable with the sport. Even though many people feel as if the sport has become more weak, Its also believed the sport has become a lot more safe and fun.

Many fine detail has been proven through the field of exercise science and other related fields. Also many astronomy and physiological studies have helped concussions be more prevented for individuals safety. The symptoms of these individuals at times can become chronic or more acute. Ranging from short term to long-term effects. The ability to be able to get back on the football field requires proper clearance. Nevertheless the importance of being able to be well suited on the football field has been more well understood through how football explains America book, and the book is fairly cheap on Amazon.

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Self-reflective statements -Eagles21

Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development.

Throughout the semester I did like four writings and the ones that I did complete were very intriguing and nicely put together. Most of my writings on wordpress were about Football and my best understanding of the sport. I learned a lot that the information I was looking for had a lot of detail and statistics for my research. The kind of understanding some of my writings went towards were prevention of injuries. Which sometimes takes a while to memorize and was a difficult task but I did find helpful research to understand how the NFL could improve to help the league accomplish more goals that they will likely accomplish. In regards to all these stages of done exceptionally well compared to the knowledge able to obtain and relaying that information to my professor.

Core Value 2. My work demonstrates that I read critically, and that I placed texts into conversation with one another to create meaning by synthesizing ideas from various discourse communities. 

Everything that was written from the meaning of the universe to my writing which was my biography was well put together critically to make sure nothing was plagiarized and written in my own words. Anything that had to be stated to show the detailed meaning of how important the NFL is was annotated in text and shown what websites helped my work be put together. I had a great idea of football and why I chose it at first because the impact of helmets and concussions always concerned me. So when I looked into more research it was more understood the detail meaning of cases and type of cases that the injuries were set apart from each other. And the impact of the material through the 1800s and 1900s was also stated in my work to understand the adverse effects/affects on the betterment and rate at which the NFL moves their sport. I also put a lot of detail into my work explaining helmets, pants, shoes, facemasks, and shoulderpads. I had a detailed explanation of the evolution of the sport and where the trends are going to go furthermore. Which i believe will help prevent further injuries and keep players from arguments and beable to have more fun on the field.

Core Value 3. My work demonstrates that I rhetorically analyzed the purpose, audience, and contexts of my own writing and other texts and visual arguments.

Most of my writing that wasn’t having a particular website pulled from also was able to be traced back to sal pals book how football explains America. Which in my opinion is one the best well-defined writers, spokesman, sports commentator, and reporter. The purpose I learned not in one day because I believed most of my writings were just going to be about helmets which in result helped me figure out more common issues in the sport and how they can be differentiated from theoretically being fixed and financially understood. Its important to me that my audience was understanding the purpose was to show the sports complexity and how injuries have all sorts of development processes and speed/rate of recovery . I was very well organized and all my points were straight to the point as well.

Core Value 4: My work demonstrates that I have met the expectations of academic writing by locating, evaluating, and incorporating illustrations and evidence to support my own ideas and interpretations.

I belive that the writings ive done in your course professor were very accessed and the graphs I also had about injuries had fine detail. Not all of my writings had images but I also enjoyed this compclass very much because this website was very resourceful and made writing more fun than other writing courses I took in the past. Not being the most profound writer I was still able to well evaluate throughout the semester because the fine detail I went into and research I was able to accomplish. I had more detail of explanations than evidence about particular people in the NFL. My approach was to accomplish a meaningful text to explain to readers that the sport of football has developed very much and can very well be still improved. This is because the field is evermore still growing and the sport of the NFL and football has grown to know concussions is one of the most brutal injuries to the sport. Which does not get taken lightly like years before. Also the type of protocols taken to help heal these players. This also helps understand the fine detail of how to prevent further injuries and keep athletes making more money and loving the sport they’ve worked their whole life towards. Which is a very complex understanding but my research helped the reader understand how important this sport is.

Core Value 5. My work demonstrates that I respect my ethical responsibility to represent complex ideas fairly and to the sources of my information with appropriate citation. 

The overall wellbeing of national football league athletes is extremely important to me . The complexity is very versatile which in return creates a lot on citations I had to help describe how complex the sport can actually be . I broke down all of my work very concisely and didn’t make any of it sound redundant . The omniscient or hyperboles I used werent really expressed. But my work was very literal and not too much colorful words were used. Most of my work could of been more in detail but Im happy with the way that my work was put together. The complexity of athletes and detail of explaining how the functioning of the sport I broke down fairly well to express injuries, history, goals, and improvement of the sport. My writing was very complex because the rate at which the NFL improved and cures injuries is very beneficial to describing the course of action this career moves at. The different levels of the sport make many room to improve and create less tension for other generations to change the style of the game. In return to the best of my knowledge, preperation and research my paper was very informing and understood. In conclusion My topic for this course helped my papers be well on topic and have room for progression.

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Researched Persuasive Argument – mossmacabre

The “Based on a True Story” horror genre is one of the most popular among avid movie-goers in this day and age. James Wan’s The Conjuring films (a well-known series within this genre) have made a collective sum of $843,300,000 in the last ten years. These films portray gruesome and horrifying stories that are backed up by real events, and that’s what draws in audiences. There is a new layer of excitement when the supernatural elements have some grounding in reality, it becomes easier for the audience to immerse themselves. Movies in this genre often have an antagonist who becomes “possessed” by demons or has some kind of severe mental illness or degenerative mental disorder. Unfortunately, these films are almost never genuinely accurate to the events that actually happened, nor are they respectful and financially beneficial for the real-life people that experienced them. Horror films in this style generally perpetuate negative stereotypes and stigma towards people that suffer from mental illness, which makes it dangerous for them to go about their daily lives. It is an immoral and unethical way to make money in Hollywood that needs to come to an end.

    Director James Wan’s popular Conjuring series covers several cases from the files of Ed and Lorraine Warren, self-proclaimed Catholic “demonologist” and psychic medium. Before Wan’s film series, the Warrens were best known for their work with the Lutz family on the highly publicized Amityville Haunting in Long Island, New York. On November 13, 1974, Ronald Defeo Jr. murdered his parents and four young siblings with a shotgun while they were sleeping in their beds. When on trial, Defeo Jr. stated, “the voices from the house made him do it.” In the year following, George and Kathy Lutz moved into Defeo’s old family home only to move out after a very brief twenty-eight days. George and Kathy claimed they were experiencing supernatural phenomena, such as hearing strange noises, waking up in the middle of the night for seemingly no reason, and a green-black slime dripping from the walls and ceiling onto their living room carpet. The Warrens got involved to assist with their supernatural issues, and the Lutz instantly became minor celebrities. The house inspired a series of books by Jay Ansen called The Amityville Horror, which was used as the basis for Stuart Rosenberg’s iconic 1979 film adaptation of the same name, as well as its many sequels and spin-offs. While there are a few remaining adamant believers, the Amityville Haunting has long since been debunked and proved as a hoax. The Lutz’s own attorney, William Weber, has since said that the story was something the three of them had come up with one night after a few bottles of wine. When asked if he believed any of their story was true, Weber said, “Absolutely not. Because they were making a commercial venture.” The Amityville films, of which there are currently nine in total, have made a collective profit of $220,971236 in the box office. The Lutz family is still benefitting financially from this story (a rare occurrence in the world of “Based on a True Story” movies), but the Defeo family will never rise to reap the benefits of a made-up story. The crime committed by Ronald Defeo Jr. against his innocent family is nothing short of horrific. It resulted in the deaths of four children, from ages nine to eighteen. For the Lutz family to continue to use a vicious, mindless crime for financial gain is distasteful, unethical, and disrespectful. 

    The Amityville Haunting is not the only case that Ed and Lorraine Warren were able to benefit from. In 2013, James Wan’s The Conjuring was released. It was a story based on the 1971 “demonic possession” of the Perrons, a family from Rhode Island. James Wan and associates claimed they did extensive research and interviews with Lorraine Warren (Ed had passed on in 2006), who can be quoted as saying she “didn’t let the directors take any more creative license than was necessary.” The film was a smash hit and made twenty million dollars at the box office. Once again, those that were involved were thrust into the spotlight, specifically the owners of the house that the film was based on, Norma Sutcliffe and Gerald Helfrich. They had bought the house together in 1987, only 18 years after the Perrons had lived there, and lived in peace until the popular film came out in 2013. Not long after the release, their house began to get vandalized and broken into. “Satanists” began sacrificing animals on their property, inside and outside. They ultimately were forced to sell the house they had peacefully lived in for almost thirty years. Before selling, Sutcliffe and Helfrich filed a lawsuit against James Wan, Warner Brothers, and other involved producers, but the results of the lawsuit were never revealed to the public.

In 2013, James Wan’s The Conjuring was released, and the Warrens instantly became a household name. It was a story based on the 1971 “demonic possession” of the Perrons, a family from Rhode Island. James Wan and associates claimed they did extensive research and conducted many interviews with Lorraine Warren (Ed had passed on in 2006), who can be quoted saying she “didn’t let the directors take any more creative license than necessary.” The film was a smash hit and made more than twenty million dollars at the box office. While Wan and Warren were celebrating, a new nightmare was just beginning for the owners of the house the popular film was based on, Norma Sutcliffe and Gerald Helfrish. They had bought the house together in 1987, only 18 years after the Perrons had lived there, and lived in peace until 2013. Not long after The Conjuring’s release, their house began to get vandalized and broken into. Satanists began sacrificing animals on their property, inside and outside of the house. Sutcliffe and Helfrish ultimately were forced to sell the house they had lived in without issue for almost thirty years, after being pushed into the public eye without their consent. Before selling, the couple filed a lawsuit against James Wan, Warner Brothers, and other involved producers, but the results of the lawsuit were never revealed to the public.

The Conjuring had two successful sequels following this, The Conjuring 2: The Enfield Case (2016) and The Conjuring 3: The Devil Made Me Do It (2021). The Enfield of Case is not of too much interest, as nobody was harmed in the making and the case was proved to be a hoax in the year it occurred, made up by a single mother and her four children to attract journalists and book deals. But The Conjuring 3 is based on the real trial of Arne Cheyenne Johnson, who claimed in court that he was possessed by a demon that forced him to stab his landlord to death. As the story goes, Johnson became possessed by a demon that had previously been inhabiting his girlfriend’s (Debbie Glatzel) eleven-year-old brother, David Glatzel. During an exorcism performed by Ed and Lorraine Warren, the “demon” that had been possessing David exited his body and entered Johnson’s body instead. Not long after, Johnson was picked up by police walking along the road and covered in blood. He was arrested for murdering his and Debbie’s landlord, Alan Bono, in a violent frenzy. It was the first unlawful killing in the history of their hometown, Brookfield, Connecticut. The media swarmed the story, pushed heavily by the Warren’s agent, who promised a book and movie deal was in the works. Johnson’s defense was a complete failure, as no one could prove that he had actually been possessed by a demon at the time the crime was committed. He was sentenced to 10-20 years in prison (though he was let out of prison after five years on good behavior). After Johnson’s sentencing, the media continued to hound the Glatzel family. A book was published with the help of the Warrens, and while the Glatzels originally received $2000 of the profits, they sued upon its republication in 2006, claiming that the author and publishers were violating their privacy, spreading libel, and were intentionally inflicting emotional distress. David Glatzel and his brother, Carl, claimed that the possession was a hoax concocted by the Warrens, who promised the Glatzels that they would be millionaires if they took part. Both men have since stated that David suffered from severe mental illness as a child and had found the path to recovery in his adulthood. They have also expressed how struggling the case has made life for them since then, stating that they lost childhood friends, had to drop out of school, and have missed out on important job opportunities due to the media’s focus on them and their family. Carl Glatzel has made comments to the media many times asking them to stop trudging up their family trauma for profit, especially during the release of The Conjuring 3 in 2021.

The Warrens and James Wan are far from being the only people using film to profit off of the tragedy of others. Scott Derrickson’s 2005 film The Exorcism of Emily Rose re-tells the events leading up to the real-life tragic death of Annelise Michel. Annelise Michel was a deeply religious 23-year-old student from West Germany. She was very sheltered, and had a long history of intense mental illness, having been diagnosed with psychosis caused by temporal lobe epilepsy at 16 years old. Despite her medications, she continued to worsen into her adulthood, reportedly hearing voices, having suicidal tendencies, and becoming intolerant to religious paraphernalia. After five long years of struggling, Michel and her family finally became convinced that she must be possessed by a demon. The family got permission to have an exorcism performed by the Catholic Church, and two priests came to their home and began working on Michel. In her brief final year, sixty-seven Catholic exorcism rites were performed on Michel. At the hands of her parents and two priests, she was starved and dehydrated to the point of severe malnutrition. She suffered constant broken knees due to being forced to perform regular genuflections (the act of kneeling in worship). At the time of her death, she weighed only sixty-six pounds and was unable to move without assistance. She ultimately died of malnutrition, and both her parents and the priest were charged with negligent homicide. Derrickson’s film retells this tragic story, but in such a way that is untruthful, exploitative, and disrespectful. Annelise Michel was a young woman who was taken advantage of by the Catholic Church. She suffered greatly and died a more painful death than most could imagine. The film The Exorcism of Emily Rose follows this story, but only to a degree. The narrative follows the trial after “Emily’s” death but suggests that Emily was, in fact, possessed by a demon rather than enabled, starved, and abused by the people she trusted most. By the end of the trial, the judge is convinced that there was some supernatural influence that killed her and lets the priest off the hook. To the audience, this says a number of things. It suggests that seeking medical care for severe mental illness is a waste of time, that schizophrenic delusions and seizures are a result of demonic possession, that the church should get away with abusing a sick girl for a year based on a claim that has no believable evidence. Turning to religion instead of to a doctor is what ended Annelise’s short life. Derrickson took the story of negligent abuse that resulted in the death of a very sick girl, and turned it into his million-dollar horror show. 

    In the scenario that someone living would be negatively impacted by a film inspired by their suffering, there is little to no legal protection for them to be found. There are no existing laws to protect vulnerable people from Hollywood producers who want to exploit their tragedy for money. Historical events, no matter how seemingly personal or specific, cannot be copyrighted. This is especially true when the director makes small changes in the story, such as name or setting. A producer or director seeking out these stories will not find much pushback in their way, and the First Amendment generally protects them from any kind of legal action pursued by the exploited people in question. While there may be some who may argue that these movies are a form of harmless, perfectly legal entertainment for avid movie-goers, this is not the case. Among horror fans, there is a high demand for these types of films and they tend to be extremely successful in the box office. Horror, as a genre, has helped our society explore deep-seated fear and confusion from a safe distance from the dawn of its existence. Most commonly, especially in the modern day, this comes down to the human brain and the things that plague it. Through this exploration, negative stereotypes have been perpetuated about mental illnesses and diseases such as Schizophrenia, Antisocial Personality Disorder (most commonly known as “sociopathy” or “psychopathy”), Psychosis, Bipolar Disorder, Dementia, and many others. Mental illness is a deeply misunderstood subject among the common man, which is what has created this drive to create movies like the ones mentioned. A poll taken for a scientific study shows that up to 60% United States citizens believe that someone with schizophrenia is more likely to physically harm another human being. This study, called the MacArthur Violence Risk Assessment Study, found that violent crimes are more likely to be committed against the mentally ill, not the other way around. Audiences crave stories about “deranged” or sick people committing horrible, violent atrocities because they misunderstand mental illness and how it affects those it afflicts. If there were access to a more comprehensive education concerting topics like mental health, dangerous and negative stereotypes would no longer be understood as fact, and the stigma would start to disappear.

    Big Hollywood producers exploiting innocent people to make a few million is a tale as old as time. There is a long history of horror-genred media using mentally ill antagonists to stir and frighten their audience. This is a tool that not only encourages negative stereotypes, but perpetuates violence and fear towards mentally ill people. While Hollywood is not wholly responsible for the stigma towards mental health, it is in fact a symptom of a bigger issue. If better healthcare and education began to be implemented in the United States, there would be a significant cultural shift in the media we consume and how we understand it. With every coming year, there is more light shed on the symptoms of mental illness and how it can affect the individual and those that they surround themselves with. Those people deserve to live in a safe world, without stigma or hatred towards them. There is a way to handle these sensitive topics in a way that is not disrespectful to the audience members that actually suffer from these things in the real world. Perhaps one day in the near future, this idea will extend to the Hollywood community, horror fans, directors, and producers alike. 

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Reflective – Kilotoon

Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development.

I believe I demonstrated my perseverance and my openness when developing my ideas and writing during the semester by, for example, being open to adjusting my thesis after spending time doing research and learning more about the topic. 

I utilized all of my resources effectively as a means of not only using them as evidence but learning from them as well to become more knowledgeable on my topic to create a better essay. All in all, I always believed I was a decent writer and was always sure it was my strong point in school. I believe this class really helped me improve my writing and I am confident I have made significant progress in this class. 

Core Value 2. My work demonstrates that I read critically, and that I placed texts into conversation with one another to create meaning by synthesizing ideas from various discourse communities. 

Not one source was read by me without me making sure I understood the main points of it enough to utilize them effectively in my writing. I have learned in this class to start looking at every topic we did in class in a counterintuitive point of view. By doing this, I started to become more creative as a writer and a thinker. For example, up until I took this class, my perspective was locked into seeing money as the most valuable thing I could have, and that it will forever be that way no matter what. I remember many weeks ago, my professor mentioned that the only reason that that is, is due to everybody believing it is worth something. I remember the example that related this currency to how boulders were used as currency in other nations. Once people lost belief in the value of those rocks, they were seen as just rocks. It taught me that as soon as people lose belief in the value of these pieces of paper, it will just be seen as paper. I strongly believe that this will be the case in the next decade, especially with cryptocurrency becoming more mainstream. 

Core Value 3. My work demonstrates that I rhetorically analyzed the purpose, audience, and contexts of my own writing and other texts and visual arguments.

To start off, I believe that these three things are key to having a good paper. It is crucial to always have the purpose of your paper in mind as you write, as it keeps you from steering off topic and into a tangent. It is clear in my papers that I keep my purpose at the forefront of my mind at all times, as I always make sure to restate my main points throughout my paper so as to not let my reader lose attention to my thesis. Knowing the audience you will have is very important, as using different language and strategies can help steer the readers to be more intrigued. For example, if I am aware that my audience is curious about powerlifting and is skeptical about the safety of it, I would be sure to highlight every benefit and show how they outweigh the risks. If my audience is a soccer player and is against lifting weights, I would show how not only is soccer more dangerous and has less benefits, but they can even use powerlifting and its training to become a better soccer player.

Core Value 4: My work demonstrates that I have met the expectations of academic writing by locating, evaluating, and incorporating illustrations and evidence to support my own ideas and interpretations.

Throughout this course, we have been given numerous assignments that required us to think critically about and complete using our original research and thinking. For example, the rebuttal argument assignment required me to locate and evaluate sources that supported the opposing argument of mine and prove using evidence I found from other sources that my thesis statement was correct and stronger than the opposing ones. For example, one of the opposing arguments I had presented in my papers was that lifting weights is bad for children. After I had spent a lot of time researching and evaluating other sources, I proved that not only is lifting weights not bad for kids, but it is more beneficial to start lifting weights at a young age. 

Core Value 5. My work demonstrates that I respect my ethical responsibility to represent complex ideas fairly and to the sources of my information with appropriate citation. 

Throughout this course, there has not been a single time I have plagiarized. It is against my morals to steal work from others without giving credit, along with it leading to myself not learning the material. Without me learning the material, there is no purpose to even be in school in the first place. I make it one of my main priorities to always cite my sources correctly and make my citations easy to follow and understand. It was made clear in our first class that academic integrity is mandatory and strictly enforced. All of my writing is original to myself, and it all was written with my own thoughts, emotions, and knowledge.

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Bibliography – Kilotoon

https://papers.ssrn.com/sol3/papers.cfm?abstract_id=2997081

What use did this source provide me with?

This source helped me understand the effect of powerlifting activity on the development of boys’ motor abilities. It helped me understand the recommended training schemes that should be used to introduce this sport to younger athletes, and how training loads should be steadily increased over time whilst other parts of training remain almost constant.

What use did this source provide me with?

This was one of the most valuable sources I came across. It educated me on the benefits of strength training, especially when starting out at a younger age. This source assisted me through many assignments and named many individual potential benefits that regularly appear when athletes train for strength.

https://www.bmj.com/content/2/6154/1759

What use did this source provide me with?

This source provided me with statistics on the injury rate in rugby. It gave me details on a study that was done that proved that, during the studied games, there were certain repetitive injuries and gave percentages on how often certain injuries were and percentages on how often any injury occurred to the players.

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5532191/

What use did this source provide me with?

This source provided me with a large amount of information on the benefits on resistance training as well. It also gave me an insight on the risks within this type of training. This source helped me with many of my assignments as well, as it was one of my go-to sources in my arsenal.

https://iopscience.iop.org/article/10.1088/1361-6404/aaa90e/meta

What use did this source provide me with?

This article was one of the very different ones to the majority I have used. This article is backed by lots of science and clear images that display what muscle each lift works with diagrams and descriptions. I used this source mainly to help me explain how most injuries in powerlifting present themselves.

https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s40279-013-0061-x

What use did this source provide me with?

This source was mainly used to educate myself on soccer, and the benefits and risks and competing in it. I used this information for an example to compare to powerlifting, along with American football, dancing, rugby, and swimming.

https://thegrovefitness.com/blog/view/should-kids-lift-weights

What use did this source provide me with?

This source provided me with an insight into many of the myths connected to lifting weights at a young age. Although it was used in a few of my essays, it was mainly used in my research assignment, as it helped me a lot to debunk myths and eliminate counter arguments to strengthen my own.

https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0091743501909090

What use did this source provide me with?

This source was extremely useful in my final research assignment. It educated me and provided me with evidence on numerous benefits that resistance training gave to people who trained it. It gave me evidence on how much it decreases many factors that contribute to overall health, such as decreasing body fat and decreases many of the factors that contribute to heart disease and diabetes.

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/exercise

What use did this source provide me with?

This source was simply used to help me create my opening paragraph in one of my 1,000 word essays to describe the word exercise and relate it to choosing the most efficient form of it.

https://www.karger.com/Article/Abstract/85394

What use did this source provide me with?

This source provided me with endless statistics on rugby, the injury rate, and the reoccuring causes for injury that is consistent throughout many studies. I used these statistics in some of my work to show that a more popular sport that powerlifting has a higher injury rate along with less potential benefits to its athletes.

https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1076/icsp.9.1.25.3324

What use did this source provide me with?

This source, similarly to one of the earlier ones, was used to simply provide more evidence on the sport of soccer being more dangerous than powerlifting, along with providing much less benefits for the athletes. I used this source numerous times throughout the semester and it was one of my go-to sources as well. I took evidence that showed the injury rate of soccer, most popular cause for injury, popularity of the sport, and the concussion rate due to heading the ball in the game.

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Reflective – chickendinner

Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development.

I improved upon my definition/categorical essay using advice and commentary I received.

Core Value 2. My work demonstrates that I read critically, and that I placed texts into conversation with one another to create meaning by synthesizing ideas from various discourse communities. 

In my definition essay I synthesized an article about the definition and history of money with an article explaining crypto to explain its relation to other kinds of money.

Core Value 3. My work demonstrates that I rhetorically analyzed the purpose, audience, and contexts of my own writing and other texts and visual arguments.

I don’t think I did this one.

Core Value 4: My work demonstrates that I have met the expectations of academic writing by locating, evaluating, and incorporating illustrations and evidence to support my own ideas and interpretations.

I looked for evidence to build and develop my ideas in my attempt to form an argument.

Core Value 5. My work demonstrates that I respect my ethical responsibility to represent complex ideas fairly and to the sources of my information with appropriate citation. 

I cited every source I relied upon for information while writing my essays, and never misrepresented their words or took them out of context.

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Annotated Bibliography – chickendinner

Asmundson, I. Oner, C. 2012. What Is Money? Finance and Development, Vol. 49, No. 3, https://www.imf.org/external/pubs/ft/fandd/2012/09/basics.htm

Background: A concise but informative exploration of the history and defintion of money.

How I Used It: Reinforce my pre-existing knowledge about the history of money, and provide a useful explanation I could build on.

Sergeenkov, A. 2021. What is Cryptocurrency. CoinDesk. https://www.coindesk.com/learn/what-is-cryptocurrency/

Background: A brief explanation of what cryptocurrencies are, how they work, and their advantages in regard to fiat currency.

How I Used It: This article helped me explain what distinguishes cryptocurrency from fiat currency, in addition to defining “blockchain,” a word I’d heard before but not known what it means.

Laughton-Scott, A. Butterfill, J. Institutional Crypto Adoption: Three Factors to Watch, CoinShares, https://coinshares.com/research/institutional-crypto-adoption-three-factors-watch

Background: An exploration of three factors in the likelyhood of cryptocurrency being institutionally adopted in the near future.

How I Used It: I researched this article for information about the growth of cryptocurrency.

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Visual Rewrite – spooky

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