Causal Rewrite- Fulcrum66

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People become motivated to start exercising for a copious amount of reasons. Some of us want to change what we look like or want to feel better overall healthwise. When a person chooses to go to the gym they must acknowledge the factors that will affect them in the long run. The level of workout intensity is one of the first things a person should consider. This is the level at which you will work with and will determine the following potential outcome. In a study conducted by Kate Stych and Gaynor Parfitt, they explain a intensity-affect-adherence chain which resulted from the study. The study was based on a group of adolescent females and males, and were tested on a range of intensities listed from above, at, and below using an aerobic bicycle. The basis of the test is what level of intensity will affect you differently and sway you to wanting to either not repeat it or repeat it. When looking into this subject this chain of events will allow you to make a personal decision on how you will start your exercise. 

The level of intensity will be the first decision a person will make when beginning their exercise. Levels can range from low, medium, or high and can be conducted with any physical activity and respectful duration. To begin a low intensity leveled workout should be something that is below a moderate paced workout. This could include a light cardio workout to light weight training. In Stych and Parfitt’s study they used light aerobic activity to stimulate low intensity movement. A moderate intensity workout would be considered your average workout. This level should be based on what you can do as an individual or where you’re at in your own physical fitness level. In the Stych and Parfitt study, the individuals were tested on a self selected intensity and it states, “ Select an intensity that you would be able to do for fifteen minutes and that you would consider doing regularly.”(Stych and Parfitt 2011) WE DON’T USE THESE PARENTHETICAL CITATION NOTES. The final intensity, high or above, would be considered pushing yourself to the limits in any physical activity. This level is above what you can do regularly and forces you to do so.  The individuals in the Stych and Parfitt study experienced a challenging resistance, with the level of resistance being above what the adolescents could regularly due. The intensity of the workout will determine the amount of effort you put into it and how hard you work yourself.

Not only will intensity determine your workout, but also your body’s recovery and how it will feel after whatever you put it through. The results of a low intensity workout will lead to a quicker recovery time. Author, Liam McAulife, who wrote the article, “Low Intensity Exercise: Health Benefits” explains how your body should feel post exercise. McAuliffe explains, “On a physiological level low-intensity exercises increase your aerobic capacity.”(McAuliffe 2022) WE DON’T USE THESE PARENTHETICAL CITATION NOTES With a light workout not only will your body recover faster, but your respiration endurance as well. This could possibly strengthen your body and be the basis for future higher intensity workouts. With a moderate intensity we see not as much of a faster recovery. This intensity is slightly challenging towards your body and with it being a little harder than a lower intensity there may be some muscle soreness and fatigue. Going back to the basis of this workout, it’s based on what you can do as an individual and so going above that will lead to an increase in the chance of injury or soreness. The best way to make sure you do not “overdo” the workout is to see how you feel going into it and only doing movements based on how you’re feeling in the present moment, and not exceeding this limit. A high intensity workout is the hardest intensity you will put on your body. You are pushing yourself farther from the normal routine, more so from the other intensities. When doing these exercises it is extremely important to consider your safety. First of all, a person who is seeking fitness for the first time should never start off with a high intensity workout. If done improperly, the workout will cause injury. When deciding your workout intensity it is very important to know who you are as an individual and your own personal fitness level to create a fitness plan perfect for you. 

Your adherence to working out is the final outcome that is determined by the intensity of your exercise. Adherence can be defined as the attachment or commitment to a person, cause, or belief. In the fitness domain we see adherence being a person’s decision to return to exercising and staying committed to improving themselves physically. Mental and physical barriers can affect one’s adherence and motivation to repeat a cycle of daily exercise. Looking back on the intensities, if it’s your first time going to a gym or athletic facility, beginning with a higher intensity instead of slowly advancing is not a good idea. Not only will you be at risk of injury, but it may give a negative mindset to not continue. By starting off with a light intensity workout a person may have a better mindset and understanding so they will be able to repeat a possible workout schedule. Having a good adherence to exercise by forming a proper schedule is the only way you will have the mindset to be committed to self improvement.

In conclusion exercise is a way for people to improve themselves on a physical level. Choosing the correct intensity will determine how your body feels after and your adherence to exercise. This is especially important for first timers so they can have the best gym experience possible and what to further their self improvement. A person’s mindset over all will be the greatest factor for exercise adherence, and based on the intensity and recovery of the workout they went through will determine their overall mindset for the long-run. 

References
(Centered, not Bold, for God’s sake)

Home. (n.d.). YouTube. Retrieved March 8, 2023, from https://web-p-ebscohost-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/ehost/pdfviewer/pdfviewer?vid=0&sid=e8999fb5-365f-4177-93bc-d0f147723a6f%40redis

McAuliffe, L. (2022, May 6). Low Intensity Exercises: Health Benefits and Types – Dr. Robert Kiltz. Doctor Kiltz. Retrieved March 8, 2023, from https://www.doctorkiltz.com/low-intensity-exercises/

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Casual – Fulcrum66

People become motivated to start exercising for a copious amount of reasons. Some of us want to change what we look like or want to feel better overall healthwise. When a person chooses to go to the gym they must acknowledge the factors that will affect them in the long run. The level of workout intensity is one of the first things a person should consider. This is the level at which you will work with and will determine the following potential outcome. In a study conducted by Kate Stych and Gaynor Parfitt, they explain a intensity-affect-adherence chain which resulted from the study. The study was based on a group of adolescent females and males, and were tested on a range of intensities listed from above, at, and below using an aerobic bicycle. The basis of the test is what level of intensity will affect you differently and sway you to wanting to either not repeat it or repeat it. When looking into this subject this chain of events will allow you to make a personal decision on how you will start your exercise. 

The level of intensity will be the first decision a person will make when beginning their exercise. Levels can range from low, medium, or high and can be conducted with any physical activity and respectful duration. To begin a low intensity leveled workout should be something that is below a moderate paced workout. This could include a light cardio workout to light weight training. In Stych and Parfitt’s study they used light aerobic activity to stimulate low intensity movement. A moderate intensity workout would be considered your average workout. This level should be based on what you can do as an individual or where you’re at in your own physical fitness level. In the Stych and Parfitt study, the individuals were tested on a self selected intensity and it states, “ Select an intensity that you would be able to do for fifteen minutes and that you would consider doing regularly.”(Stych and Parfitt 2011) The final intensity, high or above, would be considered pushing yourself to the limits in any physical activity. This level is above what you can do regularly and forces you to do so.  The individuals in the Stych and Parfitt study experienced a challenging resistance, with the level of resistance being above what the adolescents could regularly due. The intensity of the workout will determine the amount of effort you put into it and how hard you work yourself.

Not only will intensity determine your workout, but also your body’s recovery and how it will feel after whatever you put it through. The results of a low intensity workout will lead to a quicker recovery time. Author, Liam McAulife, who wrote the article, “Low Intensity Exercise: Health Benefits” explains how your body should feel post exercise. McAuliffe explains, “On a physiological level low-intensity exercises increase your aerobic capacity.”(McAuliffe 2022) With a light workout not only will your body recover faster, but your respiration endurance as well. This could possibly strengthen your body and be the basis for future higher intensity workouts. With a moderate intensity we see not as much of a faster recovery. This intensity is slightly challenging towards your body and with it being a little harder than a lower intensity there may be some muscle soreness and fatigue. Going back to the basis of this workout, it’s based on what you can do as an individual and so going above that will lead to an increase in the chance of injury or soreness. The best way to make sure you do not “overdo” the workout is to see how you feel going into it and only doing movements based on how you’re feeling in the present moment, and not exceeding this limit. A high intensity workout is the hardest intensity you will put on your body. You are pushing yourself farther from the normal routine, more so from the other intensities. When doing these exercises it is extremely important to consider your safety. First of all, a person who is seeking fitness for the first time should never start off with a high intensity workout. If done improperly, the workout will cause injury. When deciding your workout intensity it is very important to know who you are as an individual and your own personal fitness level to create a fitness plan perfect for you. 

Your adherence to working out is the final outcome that is determined by the intensity of your exercise. Adherence can be defined as the attachment or commitment to a person, cause, or belief. In the fitness domain we see adherence being a person’s decision to return to exercising and staying committed to improving themselves physically. Mental and physical barriers can affect one’s adherence and motivation to repeat a cycle of daily exercise. Looking back on the intensities, if it’s your first time going to a gym or athletic facility, beginning with a higher intensity instead of slowly advancing is not a good idea. Not only will you be at risk of injury, but it may give a negative mindset to not continue. By starting off with a light intensity workout a person may have a better mindset and understanding so they will be able to repeat a possible workout schedule. Having a good adherence to exercise by forming a proper schedule is the only way you will have the mindset to be committed to self improvement.

In conclusion exercise is a way for people to improve themselves on a physical level. Choosing the correct intensity will determine how your body feels after and your adherence to exercise. This is especially important for first timers so they can have the best gym experience possible and what to further their self improvement. A person’s mindset over all will be the greatest factor for exercise adherence, and based on the intensity and recovery of the workout they went through will determine their overall mindset for the long-run. 

References

Home. (n.d.). YouTube. Retrieved March 8, 2023, from https://web-p-ebscohost-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/ehost/pdfviewer/pdfviewer?vid=0&sid=e8999fb5-365f-4177-93bc-d0f147723a6f%40redis.

McAuliffe, L. (2022, May 6). Low Intensity Exercises: Health Benefits and Types – Dr. Robert Kiltz. Doctor Kiltz. Retrieved March 8, 2023, from https://www.doctorkiltz.com/low-intensity-exercises/

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Definition Rewrite – Anonymous123

The Power of Superstition

I’m sure that most of us have either played or watched a specific sport that we find interest in. Me specifically, i have played three sports throughout my life and they are hockey, baseball and football. Other than the sports I played, additionally I watch basketball and soccer on occasions. Now, when watching a sport you really don’t get to see the behind the scenes actions of your favorite players. What do they do before games? How often do they do those things? Do these activities help them prepare for the game? There are a lot of unanswered questions that regular people watching don’t really get to know. 

Another thing that die hard sports fans may have are superstitions. A superstition is something that you believe may alter the fate of your favorite player or team. Outside of sports it could be something as simple as saying you have a lucky shirt because of the luck that you cross paths with when wearing that shirt. Personally, my superstition is that wearing the jersey of my favorite team always leads to them losing because when I wear it they lose and when i dont they win most of the time. All of this is leading me to my main point, do some of the most prestigious players have superstitions on gameday that make them play better. Superstitions can also be compared to the term pre-game rituals. What do these athletes do pregame to try and better their performance? And, does it work? 

Pre-game rituals are anything that you may do before your game to focus yourself or just to stay in rhythm. Put yourself in the shoes of a player who is about to go take the field in the superbowl. Just imagine the amount of anxiety this player could be having which can ultimately affect their performance. There are many techniques that can help calm your anxiety and fear. These techniques would be classified as a pre-game ritual. Another term that is very important is performance anxiety. Performance anxiety is classified as a reduction in performance due to too much stress. Some of the techniques would be if you have a pre-game ritual or diet, you should always perform it before the game. Discuss tips and gameplan with teammates. As Well as even visualizing yourself, your game and your opponents. And just breathing are all some great ways to avoid performance anxiety. So if performance anxiety can reduce your production, and having a pre-game ritual can help lower the performance anxiety, wouldn’t that mean a pre-game ritual will overall increase your athletic performance. I don’t see why not.

Now, the use of prayer is another big thing that you see a lot of athletes doing as a part of their pre-game rituals. But how does it help? If you are religious you may find prayer useful for many things in your life. Prayer is the number one way to get closer to God or an object of worship. There are many benefits to prayer such as to calm their anxiety, to experience gratitude and thankfulness, hear from God and to bring about miracles. Prayer is used to cope with any uncertainty existent in sport. When athletes pray they are mainly praying for the provision of a miracle. Prayer also unites teammates as they all sit and pray to prepare to go into war against the Philadelphia Eagles in the super bowl. The goal of these prayers is to increase the probability of success. There are also players who may pray for god to help them make this 40 yard field goal, although this is not a genuine catholic prayer, it is meant to relieve stress in the player’s mind. God is also motivational for many athletes and motivation will help increase one’s confidence and ultimately lower their anxiety. 

For me, I never really used pre-game rituals but they were implemented in my team’s warmups. For football, our team’s ritual would start immediately after school by going to the field house and getting ready for some walk-throughs. Then after our walkthroughs we would meet with our specific position coaches as they would talk over the game plan and address any concerns about the game. After that, it would nearly be game time where we would take the field and do our warmups such as running routes and stretching. After all that we would finish it off with a punt and we all would run to where the ball lands and get hyped up for the game. Coaches would give their speeches and then it was game time. These warmups are meant to prepare us, motivate us and calm us for our game which I would classify as a team pre-game ritual. Other than all of that, certain players may have rituals of their own such as prayer, breathing exercises or anything I stated above. 

In conclusion to all of this I hope I have helped you identify what a pre game ritual is and how it affects a players performance in a positive way. Prayer is used to motivate, calm anxiety and cope with uncertainty. Pre-game rituals in general are all meant for players to calm their nerves so that they can focus on the task at hand, which may be as simple as just playing to your maximum potential. Performance anxiety is also proven to have negative effects on players performances so any help to remove the performance anxiety in the form of a pre-game ritual is helpful to a players performance. I hope that this has changed your mind if you believe that pre game rituals have nothing to do with performance because it has a large effect on athletes and if you are one then you should consider having one of your own if you get anxious before games.

Aicinena S. 2018. Implicit Religion and the Use of Prayer in Sport.

Ebrahim, Aadam, and S. I. N. F. Task. “Useful tips to avoid Performance Anxiety.”

Goodfellow T. 7 Benefits of Prayer

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Definition – Anonymous123

The Power of Superstition

I’m sure that most of us have either played or watched a specific sport that we find interest in. Me specifically, i have played three sports throughout my life and they are hockey, baseball and football. Other than the sports I played, additionally I watch basketball and soccer on occasions. Now, when watching a sport you really don’t get to see the behind the scenes actions of your favorite players. What do they do before games? How often do they do those things? Do these activities help them prepare for the game? There are a lot of unanswered questions that regular people watching don’t really get to know. 

Another thing that die hard sports fans may have are superstitions. A superstition is something that you believe may alter the fate of your favorite player or team. Outside of sports it could be something as simple as saying you have a lucky shirt because of the luck that you cross paths with when wearing that shirt. Personally, my superstition is that wearing the jersey of my favorite team always leads to them losing because when I wear it they lose and when i dont they win most of the time. All of this is leading me to my main point, do some of the most prestigious players have superstitions on gameday that make them play better. Superstitions can also be compared to the term pre-game rituals. What do these athletes do pregame to try and better their performance? And, does it work? 

Pre-game rituals are anything that you may do before your game to focus yourself or just to stay in rhythm. Put yourself in the shoes of a player who is about to go take the field in the superbowl. Just imagine the amount of anxiety this player could be having which can ultimately affect their performance. There are many techniques that can help calm your anxiety and fear. These techniques would be classified as a pre-game ritual. Another term that is very important is performance anxiety. Performance anxiety is classified as a reduction in performance due to too much stress. Some of the techniques would be if you have a pre-game ritual or diet, you should always perform it before the game. Discuss tips and gameplan with teammates. As Well as even visualizing yourself, your game and your opponents. And just breathing are all some great ways to avoid performance anxiety. So if performance anxiety can reduce your production, and having a pre-game ritual can help lower the performance anxiety, wouldn’t that mean a pre-game ritual will overall increase your athletic performance. I don’t see why not.

Now, the use of prayer is another big thing that you see a lot of athletes doing as a part of their pre-game rituals. But how does it help? If you are religious you may find prayer useful for many things in your life. Prayer is the number one way to get closer to God or an object of worship. There are many benefits to prayer such as to calm their anxiety, to experience gratitude and thankfulness, hear from God and to bring about miracles. Prayer is used to cope with any uncertainty existent in sport. When athletes pray they are mainly praying for the provision of a miracle. Prayer also unites teammates as they all sit and pray to prepare to go into war against the Philadelphia Eagles in the super bowl. The goal of these prayers is to increase the probability of success. There are also players who may pray for god to help them make this 40 yard field goal, although this is not a genuine catholic prayer, it is meant to relieve stress in the player’s mind. God is also motivational for many athletes and motivation will help increase one’s confidence and ultimately lower their anxiety. 

For me, I never really used pre-game rituals but they were implemented in my team’s warmups. For football, our team’s ritual would start immediately after school by going to the field house and getting ready for some walk-throughs. Then after our walkthroughs we would meet with our specific position coaches as they would talk over the game plan and address any concerns about the game. After that, it would nearly be game time where we would take the field and do our warmups such as running routes and stretching. After all that we would finish it off with a punt and we all would run to where the ball lands and get hyped up for the game. Coaches would give their speeches and then it was game time. These warmups are meant to prepare us, motivate us and calm us for our game which I would classify as a team pre-game ritual. Other than all of that, certain players may have rituals of their own such as prayer, breathing exercises or anything I stated above. 

In conclusion to all of this I hope I have helped you identify what a pre game ritual is and how it affects a players performance in a positive way. Prayer is used to motivate, calm anxiety and cope with uncertainty. Pre-game rituals in general are all meant for players to calm their nerves so that they can focus on the task at hand, which may be as simple as just playing to your maximum potential. Performance anxiety is also proven to have negative effects on players performances so any help to remove the performance anxiety in the form of a pre-game ritual is helpful to a players performance. I hope that this has changed your mind if you believe that pre game rituals have nothing to do with performance because it has a large effect on athletes and if you are one then you should consider having one of your own if you get anxious before games.

Aicinena S. 2018. Implicit Religion and the Use of Prayer in Sport.

Ebrahim, Aadam, and S. I. N. F. Task. “Useful tips to avoid Performance Anxiety.”

Goodfellow T. 7 Benefits of Prayer

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Definition Rewrite – TristanB50

Interstate Infinity

Living in an area without any form of public transport, riding another vehicle to get to the desired destination can feel like a novelty, a vestige of the time before cars took over. Riding a train, a ferry, a bike, a trolley, comes off more like a cultural experience rather than a sensible mode of transit, as if they’re only there because they didn’t manage to put up a bridge or a highway somewhere. But when cars slip into their usual disappointments like traffic jams or noise pollution, we’re quick to offer up more space for them, rather then questioning why we adopted them in the first place.

What other options do we have? The whole country is hooked on cars, it’s part of the world that we’re born into. When asked, a child will likely draw a city chances are they’ll start out with some sort of street grid pattern. Teenagers idolize reaching driving age, as they finally have the freedom to travel wherever they please. We naturally place value on cars because normally they’re the only option we’re given for transportation. This is a direct result from the longtime advances the auto industry has made to promote their products, resulting in 92% of Americans own cars, more than any other country. 

But these advancements aren’t just issues of the past, and in fact, are still gaining new ground every day. I’d like to take a dive into the state of American transportation, how we got to this point, and why it’s a problem. Through spacing apart our buildings and aggressive lobbying tactics, the automotive industry has essentially created their own monopoly on transportation. 

To better understand how cars have a monopoly on transportation, we have to look at how cars came to congest our cities. It’s become common knowledge that before cars, streets were shared between carriages and walkers. This changed after Queens’ World’s Fair in 1939, where GM showcased a mockup “future city” plan comprised of highways and skyscrapers at the popular planning convention. What the public didn’t know when they were viewing the model, was the auto industry had been lobbying to cut federal funding from public transit systems, and had bought up and dismantled many trolley lines. The New Yorkers weren’t viewing a proposal on an improvement they could decide on, they were viewing the fate of many great American neighborhoods.

Environmentalist Spencer R. Scott explains this in his Medium article, “A Grand Theft: Auto Industry Stole Our Streets and Our Future.” He quotes Peter Norton’s book, Fighting Traffic: The Dawn of the Motor Age in the American City. “When there were no more streetcars to ride and cities were replanned around motor transportation, city people rode buses or bought cars. Mass preferences were relatively unimportant.” Norton’s claim denounces the narrative that citizens came to a consensus on allowing car infrastructure to burrow around their homes. This makes sense considering some of the devastating effects the auto industry has had on peoples livelihoods. One horrifying example of this comes from the 1949 Highway Plan, where neighborhoods inhabited mainly by racial minorities were demolished to make room for highways without their consent. 

Thanks to the automotive industry’s past pressures on the local and federal government has, we are feeling their inefficiency every day we spend stuck in traffic. Nowadays, the governments general response to traffic seems to be widening lanes, under the false pretense that it will reduce congestion. However, it is becoming more apparent that over time, our roads are staying clogged up. New York Times author Eden Weingart explains this in her article, “Widening Highways Doesn’t Fix Traffic. So Why Do We Keep Doing It?” by breaking down an NBER study on traffic: “In a metropolitan area, when road capacity increases by 1 percent, the number of cars on the road after a few years also increases by 1 percent.” While it’s proven that widening highways can lead to short term drops in congestion, in the long run it becomes a cluttered mess again after people learn they can save time. These expansion projects are often marketed as an economic investment, which will bring prosperity to an area. However the only thing these projects ensure is a continued state of building and repairing.

As infrastructure grows exponentially, maintenance quickly grows faster. More areas need to be repaired more frequently, which is financed by constructing new highways. Similar to congestion, the economic motives behind constructing new highways provide short-term benefits, before quickly returning to the dangerous, chaotic state it was before. This leads to an industry focused on constantly growing and expanding, neglecting any need to challenge cars by reconfiguring any of our transport systems.

Limiting the expansion of our roads is a serious issue, as it leads to unnatural flooding, degradation in our water and soil. Paved roads water-resistant properties make them great for quickly drying after a storm. Their lack of permeability comes at a cost however, they prevent water from being absorbed into the soil. We should look at waters relationship with the Earth similar to how we look at our respiratory relationship with trees. Rainwater deposits chemicals in the soil, cleaning the water and feeding the soil. Roads prevent this from occurring, as well as contributing their own eroded asphalt, motor oil, or anything else that falls off cars to the soil and out waterways, causing many indirect impacts on human health.

Remember the neighborhoods from earlier that were destroyed for highway development? Well the neighborhoods that were spared from mass eviction were left with highways surrounding their homes, leading to asthma and lung cancer development for future generations, and has been criticized for environmental racism due to disproportionate health effects people of color feel to this day. 

Despite these injustices towards human health and the environment, the American auto industry has managed to dodge paying reparations for those affected. Their political power in our government cannot be overlooked, as they have both physically and metaphorically burrowed into our nations functionality by ridding themselves of the responsibility decades in the past.

While it may seem like the auto industry has sealed out fate by taking control of our transportation, there are ways we can fight it. Some proposed solutions to fighting development, such as seeking federal funding for public transport, encouraging mixed-used development to make cities more walkable, or flexible bus routes. California recently canceled the expansion of Route 710, and are considering transitioning some of their freight lines to passenger rail. While cars will always be hanging around, are dependance on them doesn’t have to be.

References

Norton, P. D. (2014). Fighting traffic the dawn of the Motor Age in the American city. MIT 

Press. 

Climate Town. (2021, April 8). How The Auto Industry Carjacked The American Dream | 

Climate Town [Video]. YouTube. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oOttvpjJvAo

Spencer R. Scott, P. D. (2021, February 17). A grand theft: Auto industry stole our streets and 

our future. Medium. Retrieved March 6, 2023, from https://spencerrscott.medium.com/a-grand-theft-auto-industry-stole-our-streets-and-our-future-a2145d6e10e2 

Weingart, E., & Schukar, A. (2023, January 6). Widening Highways Doesn’t Fix Traffic. So Why Do We Keep Doing It?The New York Times. Retrieved March 5, 2023, from https://www.nytimes.com/2023/01/06/us/widen-highways-traffic.html

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Definition – TristanB50

Interstate Infinity

If you live in an area without any form of public transport, riding another vehicle to get to your destination can feel like a novelty, a vestige of the time before cars took over. Riding a train, a ferry, a bike, a trolley, comes off more like a cultural experience rather than a sensible mode of transit, as if they’re only there because they didn’t manage to put up a bridge or a highway somewhere. But when cars slip into their usual disappointments like traffic jams or noise pollution, we’re quick to offer up more space for them, rather then questioning why we adopted them in the first place.

What other options do we have? The whole country is hooked on cars, it’s part of the world that we’re born into. If you ask a child to draw a city, chances are they’ll start out with some sort of street grid pattern. Teenagers idolize reaching driving age, as they finally have the freedom to travel wherever they please. We naturally place value on cars because normally they’re the only option we’re given for transportation. This is a direct result from the longtime advances the auto industry has made to promote their products, resulting in 92% of Americans own cars, more than any other country. 

But these advancements aren’t just issues of the past, and in fact, are still gaining new ground every day. I’d like to take a dive into the state of American transportation, how we got to this point, and why it’s a problem. Through spacing apart our buildings and aggressive lobbying tactics, the automotive industry has essentially created their own monopoly on transportation. 

To better understand how cars have a monopoly on transportation, we have to look at how cars came to congest our cities. It’s become common knowledge that before cars, streets were shared between carriages and walkers. This changed after Queens’ World’s Fair in 1939, where GM showcased a mockup “future city” plan comprised of highways and skyscrapers at the popular planning convention. What the public didn’t know when they were viewing the model, was the auto industry had been lobbying to cut federal funding from public transit systems, and had bought up and dismantled many trolley lines. The New Yorkers weren’t viewing a proposal on an improvement they could decide on, they were viewing the fate of many great American neighborhoods.

Environmentalist Spencer R. Scott explains this in his Medium article, “A Grand Theft: Auto Industry Stole Our Streets and Our Future.” He quotes Peter Norton’s book, Fighting Traffic: The Dawn of the Motor Age in the American City. “When there were no more streetcars to ride and cities were replanned around motor transportation, city people rode buses or bought cars. Mass preferences were relatively unimportant.” Norton’s claim denounces the narrative that citizens came to a consensus on allowing car infrastructure to burrow around their homes. This makes sense considering some of the devastating effects the auto industry has had on peoples livelihoods. One horrifying example of this comes from the 1949 Highway Plan, where neighborhoods inhabited mainly by racial minorities were demolished to make room for highways without their consent. 

Thanks to the automotive industry’s past pressures on the local and federal government has, we are feeling their inefficiency every day we spend stuck in traffic. Nowadays, the governments general response to traffic seems to be widening lanes, under the false pretense that it will reduce congestion. However, it is becoming more apparent that over time, our roads are staying clogged up. New York Times author Eden Weingart explains this in her article, “Widening Highways Doesn’t Fix Traffic. So Why Do We Keep Doing It?” by breaking down an NBER study on traffic: “In a metropolitan area, when road capacity increases by 1 percent, the number of cars on the road after a few years also increases by 1 percent.” While it’s proven that widening highways can lead to short term drops in congestion, in the long run it becomes a cluttered mess again after people learn they can save time. These expansion projects are often marketed as an economic investment, which will bring prosperity to an area. However the only thing these projects ensure is a continued state of building and repairing.

As infrastructure grows exponentially, maintenance quickly grows faster. More areas need to be repaired more frequently, which is financed by constructing new highways. Similar to congestion, the economic motives behind constructing new highways provide short-term benefits, before quickly returning to the dangerous, chaotic state it was before. This leads to an industry focused on constantly growing and expanding, neglecting any need to challenge cars by reconfiguring any of our transport systems.

Limiting the expansion of our roads is a serious issue, as it leads to unnatural flooding, degradation in our water and soil. Paved roads water-resistant properties make them great for quickly drying after a storm. Their lack of permeability comes at a cost however, they prevent water from being absorbed into the soil. We should look at waters relationship with the Earth similar to how we look at our respiratory relationship with trees. Rainwater deposits chemicals in the soil, cleaning the water and feeding the soil. Roads prevent this from occurring, as well as contributing their own eroded asphalt, motor oil, or anything else that falls off cars to the soil and out waterways, causing many indirect impacts on human health.

Remember the neighborhoods from earlier that were destroyed for highway development? Well the neighborhoods that were spared from mass eviction were left with highways surrounding their homes, leading to asthma and lung cancer development for future generations, and has been criticized for environmental racism due to disproportionate health effects people of color feel to this day. 

Despite these injustices towards human health and the environment, the American auto industry has managed to dodge paying reparations for those affected. Their political power in our government cannot be overlooked, as they have both physically and metaphorically burrowed into our nations functionality by ridding themselves of the responsibility decades in the past.

While it may seem like the auto industry has sealed out fate by taking control of our transportation, there are ways we can fight it. Some proposed solutions to fighting development, such as seeking federal funding for public transport, encouraging mixed-used development to make cities more walkable, or flexible bus routes. California recently canceled the expansion of Route 710, and are considering transitioning some of their freight lines to passenger rail. While cars will always be hanging around, are dependance on them doesn’t have to be.

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Definition Rewrite—Giants19

Seatbelts Are Unsafe

Introduction

Seatbelts are widely considered a great thing for society that save many lives every year, and I wouldn’t argue that they definitely do save a lot of people when used correctly. That being said, while some people believe that they are safe and can save lives in the event of an accident, others argue that they can cause serious injuries and even death in certain cases. When thought is put into it in an abstract way, one will come to understand that seatbelts often times lower peoples inhibitions and makes them less prepared for collision. For this reason, it is not a completely absurd idea to suggest that seatbelts really no not do all that much to prevent risk, and risk often results in danger. Additionally, seatbelts cause people to drive more erratically and pose more of a danger to themselves and others. This whole argument really boils down to how somebody would define the word “risk”, as some people have different definitions than others. For that reason, for the sake of this argument I believe it is important that we understand and potentially reconsider what risk means for most people.

Definition

Risk is generally defined as a chance or possibility of danger, loss, or injury. Typically, risk is bad. Risk is something that somebody want to avoid as much as they possibly can when driving; which is exactly why seatbelts are dangerous. Once one feels safe, they lose their regard for their own safety, and therefore, are at a larger risk for danger. A drivers job is obviously to get from point A to point B with as little risk of danger as possible to themself and their passengers. In doing so, the driver wouldn’t want anything that would make them lose their sense of protection or to lower their ability to react. Humans are intrinsically protective of themselves when they are vulnerable. Taking this vulnerability away causes many people to become less focused, more easily distracted, and most importantly, more at risk. At the end of the day, risk is something that most people go out of their way to avoid, but the truth is that there are a lot of hidden risks in this world. Nobody would assume at first glance that wearing a seatbelt may pose more of a risk to somebody than driving without one, but the correct answer is not always the first one that appears. That being said, while risk is not always avoidable, I would prefer to always have the best chance instinctually to make the decisions or the maneuvers to keep myself and my passengers safe. When we break down what risk is, by its definition, we see that seatbelts cause drivers of vehicles a greater deal of risk than not having one because they give drivers a false sense of security.

Body

A study was recently conducted in Kuwait testing what exactly it was that resulted in collisions on the road, it was found that a vast majority of the accidents were a result of human error, which can be attributed to losing ones sense of safety and becoming distracted. “The relationship between factors that contribute to human error and road transport accident also determined. Data were collected from 80 respondents. Plus, observational technique was conducted at two roads chosen in Pahang and Terengganu. The questionnaire results concluded that there had association between factors that contribute to human error and road transport accident.” (Adibah) This study shows us that human nature will always triumph over human invention. At the end of the day, that is what this argument boils down to. Those that are more willing to place their faith in their intrinsic human instincts than a man made machine will agree that wearing a seatbelt can present somebody with a greater risk than not wearing one.

Body

In one instance, a 49-year old man with no underlying medical illness was killed when he got into an accident and his seatbelt compressed against his neck. The ironic thing about it is that if that man lived, he would probably be so very grateful that he wore that seatbelt. Who wouldn’t be initially? At first glance, it is the seatbelt that saved them. At a closer glance, however, one can see that wearing the seatbelt caused them a much greater deal of risk than if they were without one. This is not even just seen in collisions of lower power/damage, as the man who was killed by his seatbelt when he would have otherwise been perfectly fine without one, was driving 110 kilometers per hour. Getting in a crash at 110 kilometers per hour was not enough to kill him, but the unpredictability and uncertain risk of his seatbelt certainly was. The one true way to truly mitigate day-by-day risk would be to begin driving without a seatbelt. In my opinion, if we limit our risk, we increase our safety, and as I have explained, not wearing a seatbelt is the ultimate way to limit risk while driving. Following that process, the safest way for somebody to get from point A to point B would be without a seatbelt, rather than with one.

Another thing to note is how much somebodies risk of dying or getting injured in a crash decreases when the speed decreases. When do people drive faster, with a seatbelt, or without one? Assuming most people drive slower without their seatbelts on, this fact alone probably saves thousands of people a year. Without the fear of the potential repercussions that may arise from getting into a collision without a seatbelt on, the likelihood of getting into one significantly increases. At the end of the day, we just have to decide that it is more worth it to lower our risk of getting into an accident at all than increasing our risk by preparing for the accident. In wearing a seatbelt, it is almost as if somebody is welcoming a collision. People do something that will make getting in an accident more common, but they do it in order to mitigate the damages of said accidents. That is one of the most counter-intuitive things imaginable, even more so than neglecting to wear a seatbelt for the purpose of increasing safety.

References

Syarah Adibah, J., Mohd Najib, Y. (2022). Contributing Factors Towards Human Errors on Road Transport Safety Among Commercial Vehicle Drivers. In: , et al. Human-Centered Technology for a Better Tomorrow. Lecture Notes in Mechanical Engineering. Springer, Singapore. https://doi.org/10.1007/978-981-16-4115-2_19

Najari F, Alimohammadi AM. An Immediate Death by Seat Belt Compression; a Forensic Medicine Report. Emerg (Tehran). 2015 Fall;3(4):165-7. PMID: 26495409; PMCID: PMC4608342.

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Definition – Giants19

Are Seatbelts Safe?

Introduction

Seatbelts have been a subject of controversy for many years. While some people believe that they are safe and can save lives in the event of an accident, others argue that they can cause serious injuries and even death. When you think of it in an abstract way, and understand that seatbelts often times lower peoples inhibitions and makes them less prepared for collision, it is not a completely absurd idea to suggest that seatbelts really no not do all that much to prevent risk, and risk often results in danger. Not to mention, seatbelts cause people to drive more erratically and pose more of a danger to themselves and others. This whole argument really boils down to how you define the word “risk”, as some people have different definitions than others. For that reason, I will spend this argument paper doing my best to do just that.

Definition

Oxford English Dictionary defines risk as “chance or possibility of danger, loss, or injury etc.” In general, risk is bad. Risk is something that you want to avoid as much as you possibly can when driving; which is exactly why seatbelts are dangerous. Once you feel safe, you lose your regard for your own safety, and therefore, are at a larger risk for danger. If you are driving, obviously your job is to get from point A to point B with as little risk of danger as possible to yourself and your passengers. In doing so, you wouldn’t want anything that would make you lose your sense of protection or to lower your ability to react. Humans are intrinsically protective of themselves when they are vulnerable. Taking this vulnerability away causes many people to become less focused, more easily distracted, and most importantly, more at risk. At the end of the day, risk is something that most people go out of their way to avoid, but the truth is that there are a lot of hidden risks in this world. Nobody would assume at first glance that wearing your seatbelt may pose more of a risk to somebody than driving without one, but the correct answer is not always the first one that appears. That being said, while risk is not always avoidable, I would prefer to always have the best chance instinctually to make the decisions or the maneuvers to keep myself and my passengers safe. When we break down what risk is, by its definition, we see that seatbelts cause drivers of vehicles a greater deal of risk than not having one because they give drivers a false sense of security.

Body

A study was recently conducted in Kuwait testing what exactly it was that resulted in collisions on the road, it was found that a vast majority of the accidents were a result of human error, which can be attributed to losing ones sense of safety and becoming distracted. “The relationship between factors that contribute to human error and road transport accident also determined. Data were collected from 80 respondents. Plus, observational technique was conducted at two roads chosen in Pahang and Terengganu. The questionnaire results concluded that there had association between factors that contribute to human error and road transport accident.” (Adibah) This study shows us that human nature will always triumph over human invention. At the end of the day, that is what this argument boils down to. Those that are more willing to place their faith in their intrinsic human instincts than a man made machine will agree that wearing a seatbelt can present somebody with a greater risk than not wearing one.

Body

In one instance, a 49-year old man with no underlying medical illness was killed when he got into an accident and his seatbelt compressed against his neck. The ironic thing about it is that if that man lived, he would probably be so very grateful that he wore that seatbelt. Who wouldn’t be initially? At first glance, it is the seatbelt that saved you. If you look closer, however, you can see that wearing the seatbelt caused you a much greater deal of risk than if you were without one. This is not even just seen in collisions of lower power/damage, as the man who was killed by his seatbelt when he would have otherwise been perfectly fine without one, was driving 110 kilometers per hour. Getting in a crash at 110 kilometers per hour was not enough to kill him, but the unpredictability and uncertain risk of his seatbelt certainly was. The one true way to truly mitigate day-by-day risk would be to begin driving without a seatbelt. In my opinion, if you limit your risk, you increase your safety, and as I have explained, not wearing a seatbelt is the ultimate way to limit your risk while driving. Following that process, the safest way for somebody to get from point A to point B would be without a seatbelt, rather than with one.

Another thing to note is how much somebodies risk of dying or getting injured in a crash decreases when the speed decreases. When do you drive faster, with a seatbelt, or without one? Assuming most people drive slower without their seatbelts on, this fact alone probably saves thousands of people a year. Without the fear of the potential repercussions that may arise from getting into a collision without a seatbelt on, your likelihood of getting into one significantly increases. At the end of the day, you just have to decide that it is more worth it to lower your risk of getting into an accident at all than increasing your risk by preparing for the accident. In wearing a seatbelt, it is almost as if you are welcoming a collision. You do something that will make getting in an accident more common, but you do it in order to mitigate the damages of said accidents. That is one of the most counter-intuitive things imaginable, even more so than neglecting to wear a seatbelt for the purpose of increasing safety.

References

Syarah Adibah, J., Mohd Najib, Y. (2022). Contributing Factors Towards Human Errors on Road Transport Safety Among Commercial Vehicle Drivers. In: , et al. Human-Centered Technology for a Better Tomorrow. Lecture Notes in Mechanical Engineering. Springer, Singapore. https://doi.org/10.1007/978-981-16-4115-2_19

Najari F, Alimohammadi AM. An Immediate Death by Seat Belt Compression; a Forensic Medicine Report. Emerg (Tehran). 2015 Fall;3(4):165-7. PMID: 26495409; PMCID: PMC4608342.

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Definition Rewrite – Gracchus Babeuf

Niccolò  Machiavelli: A Bad Machiavellian?

An unscrupulous character, wheeling and dealing in the halls of power with no concern for feeble-minded “morality”. The acquisition and wielding of power his only concern. Perhaps, such a character is dressed in dark colors and a sharp, evil-looking suit. This swamp creature is the archetypical “Machiavellian” figure: unscrupulous, immoral, and single-minded in pursuit of power. Whether named as such or not, this scheming, contemptible creature is present in plenty of modern media. One such creature who populated many home television sets in recent memory was Frank Underwood on Netflix’s House of Cards, a clever but immoral politician played too convincingly by the now-disgraced Kevin Spacey. For those in the know about “Machiavellian” characters, Frank and other scheming politicians form an American cultural memory of what these disciples of Machiavelli’s “book of dark rituals”, Il Principe, look and behave like.

Machiavelli, then, should be the archetypal example of these immoral men. The progenitor from whom all these evil-hearted politicians take their cues. Unfortunately for aspiring dramatists, Machiavelli himself is a far-cry from the politicians, both real and fictional, who critics often describe as “Machiavellian”. As is often the case, reality is less flashy and provocative than fiction.

What exactly is a “Machiavellian”? At its most simple reading, a Machiavellian is simply a person who behaves in the manner of Machiavelli. This, of course, is insufficient to understand the label. It would be akin to defining a modern Christian using only the idea that they are followers of Jesus Christ. While true, it is not enough to unpack all the meaning in the word for a contemporary reader. All the other nuances and intricacies that had been read into that word over the last two-thousand years are critically important. The same is true of the concept of a “Machiavellian”.

Born in 15th century Florence the third son of an attorney, Machiavelli was neither born of great status or total obscurity. As the son of a man of letters, Machiavelli was afforded an education, an incredible privilege even in the relatively literate world of the Italian city states. For Machiavelli’s early life, the nominally republican Florence was dominated by the Medici family, who had de facto dynastic control over the city. In 1494, the citizenry of Florence, lead by the firebrand Dominican Girolamo Savonarola, overthrew the Medici family and restored the Florentine republic. Savonarola, an intense critic of excesses in the catholic church, was responsible for the burning of the vanities in which books and art were destroyed. Such religious fanaticism would see him driven from power and executed, though the republic he helped restore would last until 1512.

Following Savonarola execution and the religious moderation of the republic’s government, Machiavelli received his first posting in government. Until the defeat of the republic in 1512 by Giovanni de’ Medici (Pope Leo X), Machiavelli served as a diplomat and bureaucrat within the republic’s government. Following the Medici reconquest of the city, Machiavelli, like many of his comrades, was exiled from the city to the hinterlands. From exile and reflecting on his decade and half on the inside of European politics, Machiavelli wrote The Prince in an attempt to win favor with a member of the Medici family. While its unclear if the Medici’s ever took his work seriously (they did not commute his sentence), the work has proved an enduring foundational text of European theory. In determining the definition of a “Machiavellian” person, it is always The Prince which is scrutinized for answers.

Should we take the most shallow and ill-researched reading of The Prince, it is easy to decide that Machiavelli truly is the master “Machiavellian” that his critics have slandered him as for some five centuries. After all, Machiavelli does not shy away from recommending acts of terror, violence, and deceit should it be the best course of action for a “Prince”.

A quick definitional aside within the larger definition argument: A prince, notably, is not exclusively a dynastic title in Machiavelli’s writing. It is better understood as a Sovereign, like that described in Hobbes’ Leviathan. A prince could be an elected ruler or a dynastic one, but they ultimately hold the authority from which the law originates.

Returning to the shocking acts advised within the Prince, it is not sufficient to read Machiavelli counciling a prince to execute political opposition as an endorsement of such behavior. Detractors of Machiavelli are quick to determine that his diagnosis of what is politically necessary is, in fact, his own satanic political morality. Nothing could be further from the truth. Yes, it is not unreasonable to consider Machiavelli to be a cynic. While his apologists, like the author of this paper, would prefer the term “realist”, Machiavelli has a distinctly dismal view of the nature of politics. As professor Narasingha Prosad Sil expertly described,

“Even if we concede that Machiavelli is a cynic, his cynicism cannot be the the testament of a heartless misanthrope. It is the confession of a conscientious man who would like to live under the reign of virtue but cannot find it among people

A Machiavellian is a cynic (or a realist), but they are not “immoral”. When an immoral action is politically necessary, it is only advised because the alternative is worse. For instance, should the citizens of Florence not have risen up against their social betters, the Medici’s, and strived to rule themselves simply because they might need to break a few eggs? The infantile political philosopher will wring their hands about abrogations of justice and the misdeeds that an upstart regime like the Florentine republic undoubtedly perpetrated. Yet, what goes unremarked upon is the cost of the status quo, of permitting an ancien regime to persist. It is not as if the Medici’s themselves did not perpetrate countless injustices to attain and maintain their de facto hereditary control over Florence. Therefore, it is unreasonable to profess horror that the Machiavellian political actor is willing to do what is politically necessary instead of simply rolling over. A critic can object to Machiavelli’s proposal that “the ends justify the means”, but cannot deny that the same ruthlessness is perpetrated by an ancien regime against their opposition. Power politics is a zero-sum game, and the Machiavellian plays to win, content that their crimes will be justified by the good outcomes they ensure. Whether the ends truly did justify the means is for history to decide.

Machiavelli does not fit the archetype of an unscrupulous immoral schemer. He is a man who wishes for the “reign of virtue”, but cannot find it. Therefore, he develops a system of analysis which teaches not how to be immoral, but how to combat those who are. The good, chivalrous prince, as Machiavelli describes, is one who finds themself dead or exiled. Should we be naive and believe only in the good hearts of men, the truly dark figures, the modern “Machiavellians”, will take power. The princes of past and present ignore Machiavelli’s warning at their peril and that of their subjects.

References

Colish, Marcia L. “Republicanism, Religion, and Machiavelli’s Savonarolan Moment.Journal of the History of Ideas 60, no. 4 (1999): 597–616.

Sil, Narasingha Prosad. “POLITICAL MORALITY vs. POLITICAL NECESSITY: KAUṬILYA AND MACHIAVELLI REVISITED.” Journal of Asian History 19, no. 2 (1985): 101–42.

Soll, Jacob. “The Reception of The Prince 1513–1700, or Why We Understand Machiavelli the Way We Do.” Social Research 81, no. 1 (2014): 31–60.

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Definition – GracchusBabeuf

Niccolò  Machiavelli : A Bad Machiavellian?

An unscrupulous character, wheeling and dealing in the halls of power with no concern for feeble-minded “morality”. The acquisition and wielding of power his only concern. Perhaps, such a character is dressed in dark colors and a sharp, evil-looking suit. This swamp creature is, to the modern audience, the archetypical “Machiavellian” figure: unscrupulous, immoral, and single-minded in pursuit of power. Whether named as such or not, this scheming, contemptible creature is present in plenty of modern media. One such creature who populated many home television sets in recent memory was Frank Underwood on Netflix’s House of Cards, a clever but immoral politician played too convincingly by the now-disgraced Kevin Spacey. For those in the know about “Machiavellian” characters, Frank and other scheming politicians form an American cultural memory of what these disciples of Machiavelli’s book of dark rituals, Il Principe, look and behave like.

Machiavelli, then, should be the arch-fiend of these immoral men. The progenitor from whom all these evil-hearted politicians take their cues. Unfortunately for aspiring dramatists, Machiavelli himself is a far-cry from the politicians, both real and fictional, who we often describe as “Machiavellian”. As is often the case, reality is less flashy and provocative than fiction.

What exactly is a “Machiavellian”? At its most simple reading, a Machiavellian is simply a person who behaves in the manner of Machiavelli. This, of course, is insufficient to understand the label. It would be like trying to define a modern christian using only the idea that they are followers of Jesus Christ. While true, it is not enough to unpack all the meaning in the word for a contemporary reader. All the other nuances and intricacies that had been read into that word over the last two-thousand years are critically important. The same is true of the concept of a Machiavellian.

Born in 15th century Florence the third son of an attorney, Machiavelli was neither born of great status or total obscurity. As the son of a man of letters, Machiavelli was afforded an education, an incredible privilege even in the relatively literate world of the Italian city states. It should be noted that this relative literacy is only in comparison to the almost entirely illiterate societies of the day, as opposed to the mostly illiterate Italian republic. For Machiavelli’s early life, the nominally republican Florence was dominated by the Medici family, who had de facto dynastic control over the city. In 1494, the citizenry of Florence, lead by the firebrand Dominican Girolamo Savonarola, overthrew the Medici family and restored the Florentine republic. Savonarola, an intense critic of excesses in the catholic church, was responsible for the burning of the vanities in which books and art were destroyed. Such religious fanaticism would see him driven from power and executed, though the republic he helped restore would last until 1512.

Following Savonarola execution and the religious moderation of the republic’s government, Machiavelli received his first posting in government. Until the defeat of the republic in 1512 by Giovanni de’ Medici (Pope Leo X), Machiavelli served as a diplomat and bureaucrat within the republic’s government. Following the Medici reconquest of the city, Machiavelli, like many of his comrades, was exiled from the city to the hinterlands. From exile and reflecting on his decade and half on the inside of European politics, Machiavelli wrote The Prince in an attempt to win favor with a member of the Medici family. While its unclear if the Medici’s ever took his work seriously (they did not commute his sentence), the work has proved an enduring foundational text of European theory. In determining the definition of a “Machiavellian” person, it is always The Prince which is scrutinized for answers.

Should we take the most shallow and ill-researched reading of The Prince, it is easy to decide that Machiavelli truly is the master “Machiavellian” that his critics have slandered him as for some five centuries. After all, Machiavelli does not shy away from reccomending acts of terror, violence, and deceit should it be the best course of action for a “Prince”.

A quick definitional aside within the larger definition argument: A prince, notably, is not exclusively a dynastic title in Machiavelli’s writing. It is better understood as a Sovereign, like that described in Hobbes’ Leviathan. A prince could be an elected ruler or a dynastic one, but they ultimately hold the authority from which the law originates.

Returning to the shocking acts advised within the Prince, it is not sufficient to read Machiavelli counciling a prince to execute political opposition as an endorsement of such behavior. Detractors of Machiavelli are quick to determine that hid diagnosis of what is politically necessary is, in. fact, his own satanic political morality. Nothing could be further from the truth. Yes, it is not unreasonable to consider Machiavelli to be a cynic. While his apologists, like the author of this paper, would prefer the term “realist”, Machiavelli has a distinctly dismal view of the nature of politics. As professor Narasingha Prosad Sil expertly described,

“Even if we concede that Machiavelli is a cynic, his cynicism cannot be the the testament of a heartless misanthrope. It is the confession of a conscientious man who would like to live under the reign of virtue but cannot find it among people

A Machiavellian is a cynic (or a realist), but they are not “immoral”. When an immoral action is politically necessary, it is only advised because they alternative is worse. For instance, should the citizens of Florence not risen up against their social betters, the Medici’s, and strived to rule themselves simply because they might need to break a few eggs? The infantile political philosopher will wring their hands about abrogations of justice and the misdeeds that an upstart regime like the Florentine republic undoubtedly perpetrated. Yet, what goes unremarked upon is the cost of the status quo. It is not as if the Medici’s themselves did not perpetrate countless injustices to attain their de facto hereditary control over Florence.

Machiavelli does not fit the archtype of an unscrupulous immoral schemer. He is a man who wishes for the “reign of virtue”, but cannot find it. Therefore, he develops a system of analysis which teaches not how to be immoral, but how to combat those who are. The good, chivalrous prince, as Machiavelli describes, is one who finds themself dead or exiled. Should we be naive and believe only in the good hearts of men, the truly dark figures, the modern “Machiavellians”, will take power. The princes of past and present ignore Machiavelli’s warning at their peril and that of their subjects.

References

Colish, Marcia L. “Republicanism, Religion, and Machiavelli’s Savonarolan Moment.Journal of the History of Ideas 60, no. 4 (1999): 597–616.

Sil, Narasingha Prosad. “POLITICAL MORALITY vs. POLITICAL NECESSITY: KAUṬILYA AND MACHIAVELLI REVISITED.” Journal of Asian History 19, no. 2 (1985): 101–42.

Soll, Jacob. “The Reception of The Prince 1513–1700, or Why We Understand Machiavelli the Way We Do.” Social Research 81, no. 1 (2014): 31–60.

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