E10: Editing Exercise – bj112295

Edited Post:

Money seems to have a big role in our society; without it not much can be done.  Money is valuable in different ways, even when the physical body of it is not obtained. In today’s society the faith is left in the government and banking system. We trust that our money is being handled in the proper manner, if not then all of us would be hiding all of money under mattress’s, or around our houses. Not really having a clue of what happens in the banks, nor how they take care of money, I always just thought money was quite simple; we either have some or we don’t. However, by being introduced to this assignment and having it compare the Yap Fei with the US and France gold trade in 1933, and the Brazilian cruzeros everything to me seemed somewhat similar. No one actually sees their money being transferred. When being paid, we do not receive a check or get paid even in cash, it’s all directly transferred to our bank accounts, and trusted in the idea that our money is safely in our accounts.

Original Copy:

Money seems to have a big role in our society; you can’t do much or get far if you don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when you don’t see it physically. In today’s society you must have faith in the government, in the banking system, that your money is being handled with in the proper manner, if not then you would be hiding all of your money under your mattress, or around your house. I never really have a clue what happens in the banks, and how they take care of your money. I always just thought money was quite simple; you either have some or you don’t, that’s it. However, by being introduced to this assignment and having it compare the Yap Fei with the US and France gold trade in 1933, and the Brazilian cruzeros all seemed somewhat similar. No one actually sees their money being transferred. When you get paid, you don’t get a check or get paid even in cash, it’s all directly transferred to your bank account, and that you just have to trust that you got more money.

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E10- ifurreadingthisits2l8

Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when it can’t be seen physically. In today’s society we must have faith in the government, in the banking system, that our money is being handled with in the proper manner, if not then we would be hiding all of our money under the mattress, or around the house. I never really have a clue what happens in the banks, and how they take care of money. I always just thought money was quite simple; we either have some or we don’t, that’s it. However, by being introduced to this assignment and having it compare the Yap Fei with the US and France gold trade in 1933, and the Brazilian cruzeros all seemed somewhat similar. Money isn’t seen when it’s transferred. When it’s payday, cash and checks are rarley seen, it’s usually all directly transferred into a personal bank account. We have to trust that the money was added to our bank account.

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E10-wildcuttlefish

Money has a big impact in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when we don’t see it physically. In today’s society we must have faith in the government, in the banking system, that our money is being handled with in the proper manner, if not then we would be hiding all of our money under our mattress, or around our house. Often times we are not aware of what happens in the banks, and how our money is handled. We may think that the idea of money seems simple; we either have some or we don’t, that’s it. However, the money system in Yap, the US and France gold trade in 1933, and the Brazilian cruzeros all seemed somewhat similar, since no one actually sees their money being transferred. When we get paid, we don’t get a check or get paid even in cash, it’s all directly transferred to our bank account; we just have to trust that we got more money.

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E10- Haveanelephantasticday

Original Post:

Money seems to have a big role in our society; you can’t do much or get far if you don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when you don’t see it physically. In today’s society you must have faith in the government, in the banking system, that your money is being handled with in the proper manner, if not then you would be hiding all of your money under your mattress, or around your house. I never really have a clue what happens in the banks, and how they take care of your money. I always just thought money was quite simple; you either have some or you don’t, that’s it. However, by being introduced to this assignment and having it compare the Yap Fei with the US and France gold trade in 1933, and the Brazilian cruzeros all seemed somewhat similar. No one actually sees their money being transferred. When you get paid, you don’t get a check or get paid even in cash, it’s all directly transferred to your bank account, and that you just have to trust that you got more money.

New Post:

Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when it’s not physically present. Without faith in the government and banking system, we would be hiding our money under mattresses in our homes. It has always been unclear how banks handle money. Comparing our money to the Yap fei, the US and France’s gold trade in 1933, and Brazilian Cruzeros is a prime example of not actually having physical money. In the banks, money is not physically transferred, when depositing checks, numbers are just moved around in the computer. This requires trust in the banking system that money ends up where it belongs.

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E10-Palal24

Revised:

Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when we don’t see it physically. We must have faith in the government and in the banking system in today’s society because if we believed our money was being handled with in an improper manner, then we would be hiding our money under our mattresses or around our houses. I never understood what happens in banks or how they take care of our money. I always thought money was quite simple; we either have some or we don’t, that’s it. However, by being introduced to this assignment and having compared Yap Fei with the Us and France gold trade in 1933 and the Brazilian cruzeros, it all seemed somewhat similar. We don’t actually see our money being transferred. When we get paid, we don’t get a check or get paid even in cash. It’s all directly transferred to our bank accounts and we have to just trust that we got more money.

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E10-Bigfoot9

Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when we don’t see it physically. In today’s society we must have faith in the government, in the banking system, that the money is being handled with the proper manner, if not then we would be hiding all of the money under a mattress, or around the house. I never really have a clue what happens in the banks, and how they take care of all the money. I always just thought money was quite simple; one either has some or one doesn’t, that’s it. However, by being introduced to this assignment and having it compare the Yap Fei with the US and France gold trade in 1933, and the Brazilian cruzeros all seemed somewhat similar. One actually does not see the money being transferred. When we get paid, we don’t get a check or get paid even in cash, it’s all directly transferred to a bank account, and that we just have to trust that we got more money.

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Agenda FRI OCT 23, 2015

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Scale of the Universe

Try to wrap your head around these measurements. And while you’re at it, try to find the measure of your head in this video that charts the relative sizes and distances of everything.

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Visual Rhetoric Example

A Recent Semester’s Static Visual

A couple of semesters back, my Comp II students examined and analyzed a static graphic before they “graduated” to critiquing their Moving Visuals.

cropped-bushobamamorphheader2Their reactions were various, eventually. For a while, they stumbled and couldn’t say much of anything at all. They tried these approaches:

  1. I personally believe that this morph was created because they wanted to show America that regardless of who we elect as president, were going to be disappointed in some way. Even though Bush did some great things during his presidency, we only remember the bad. The country had such high hopes for Obama, and now from what I hear in my home, he is not succeeding either. Will America ever be satisfied?
  2. My first reaction to the George Bush and Barack Obama face morph was merely on a surface level because I, admittedly, am not very politically invested. I do not frequently watch the news or read newspapers, which is why I believe I had a difficult time coming up with a deeper interpretation for this piece of art. At first, I simply thought it was fascinating how these two different presidents looked so much alike. Due to my lack of political knowledge, I struggled for a while to determine any other type of meaning this morph had. I honestly thought it to be just aesthetic artwork.
  3. The header graphic shows the transition between the two political leaders. It represents how their political views maybe different on some issues, while they may have similar view points. The last picture most likely symbolizes how society has been accepting to other ethnic groups to become president. The transitions between the colors background may represent how the government is becoming more powerful. After president Brush was president of the country he was going through an economic recession, and during the Obama presidency the economy eventually become stronger.

Support in the form of more questions

After a few days of reading early drafts, I posted a “Support” piece that contained two more images and some leading questions (in blue).

While you’re working out your reactions to the Bush-Obama Morph image, allow me to either clarify or muddy the water here, depending on your reaction to these new manipulations.

Finally

Old Boss New Boss

Of the two, which seems the more reasonable interpretation? Is it clearer now which message the creator intended? Or can the image be used equally well to convey both messages? What does this tell you about the power of images? What does it say about the power of language to frame how we experience what we see?

An Invitation to Chat

If you have questions about the power of art, words, or the combination of art and text to provoke thought and shape opinions, ask them in a Reply below. Just talking about an assignment is usually the best way to discover how to approach it.

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Agenda: WED OCT 21, 2015

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