Grammar Exercise — Shazammm

If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude {is abusive} toward their child{,} it increases the risk that {of} they’re {their} child {young one} will grow up {growing up} hostile towards others. And its not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse {aggression is not the only thing that results from child abuse}; a large amount {group} of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves {or practice self-harm}. The reason for this negative behavior is because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling lifes disappointments. {They do this because they have low self-esteem and poor coping skills.}If you aren’t raised with coping skills, {If they are not taught how to emotionally deal with complex situations when they are young,}your much to likely to act {they are much likely to act}‘inappropriately’ then if you have developed more reasonable approaches. {toward their peers}. The affect {effect} of poor parenting, as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, {Papers,”} is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

If a primary caretaker is abusive toward their child, it increases the risk of their young one growing up hostile toward others. And aggression is not the only thing that results from child abuse; a large group of children raised by abusive parents also practice self-harm. They do this because they have low self-esteem and poor coping skills. If they are not taught how to emotionally deal with complex situations when they are young, they are much likely to act ‘inappropriately’ toward their peers. The effect of poor parenting, as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers,” is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

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About Samantha Szumloz

Samantha Szumloz is a Writing Arts student minoring in Creative Writing, concentrating in Publishing and Writing for the Public, and gaining a CUGS in Technical Writing at Rowan University. She has been published in places such as MORIA, Blue Marble Review, R U Joking?, Blood+Honey, Viridine Literary (forthcoming), Singularity Press, Halftone, and DisLit Youth Literary Magazine. Other than submitting to small publications, she serves as EIC of her literary and arts magazine Art-emis, posts religiously on social media, and obsesses over the latest Hunger Games novel. She resides in central New Jersey with her family. To get in touch with Samantha, her Instagram is @poemsbysammsy.
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