Definition Rewrite—Shazammm

Children of the Stage

As someone who grew up performing in school plays, musicals, and choir concerts, it is impossible for me to imagine learning in an educational setting where the performing arts is absent. My high school’s drama club was the only thing that made me want to wake up in the morning and attend class, because it was the place where I could express myself the way I knew best: through acting, singing, and dancing. Calculus or gym class most certainly did not inspire me to come out of my shell, and I can say the same for many of my musically-inclined friends. The performing arts is my life. If my high school did not have a drama department, I would have lacked the creative outlet I depended on most to socially and academically thrive. In short, my mental health would have suffered immensely.

In the article “A symphony within: Frequent participation in performing arts predicts higher positive mental health in young adults,” Eryn Block, Mitchell Wong, Sheryl Kataoka, and Frederick Zimmerman writes, “During young adulthood, childhood passions often give way to higher education and career goals; yet these childhood passions, such as art, may be important to prioritize for mental health… Creative activities have been used for managing depression, anxiety, stress, and mental distress related to chronic illness and trauma, and for promoting positive emotions, social connection, and self-efficacy for people with mental illness.” Of course, not all young people utilize the arts for psychological purposes. However, for those who do, it is safe to say that taking away artistic opportunities from them would have detrimental effects. 

Fortunately, the public schools in my hometown are blessed with enough resources to put on plays, choral concerts, and other performances for “theatrically-inclined” students to participate in. But simultaneously, those events are outshined by the overemphasis of standardized testing and academic achievement. We can thank the No Child Left Behind Act for that. Passed by the U.S. Congress in 2001, the law required public schools to track their students’ academic progress through standardized tests. If they failed to meet certain goals, educators would lose their jobs. According to the Britannica article “No Child Left Behind,” Brian Duignan and  Jeannette L. Nolen writes, “Under the law, states were required to administer yearly tests of the reading and mathematics skills of public school students and to demonstrate adequate progress toward raising the scores of all students to a level defined as “proficient” or higher by 2014. Teachers were also required to meet higher standards for certification. Schools that failed to meet their goals would be subject to gradually increasing sanctions, eventually including replacement of staff or closure.” The act was put to an end in 2015. However, standardized testing is still an integral part of secondary education.  

Additionally, as a result of No Child Left Behind, many performing arts groups/committees became worried about the future of theater arts in schools. NCLB not only emphasized an importance in standardized testing, but it also stressed the significance of “scientifically based” research, which could mean budget cuts to educational activities that are not scientific-based. In the article No Subject Left Behind, the document states, “The law {NCLB} specifies that research should involve ‘the application of rigorous, systematic, and objective procedures to obtain reliable programs and valid knowledge relevant to education activities and programs.’ It further defines research with terms like ‘empirical,’ ‘rigorous data analyses,’ ‘valid and reliable data across observers,’ and ‘experimental or quasi-experimental designs.’ Detailed rules for the implementation of this standard show up in the What Works Database ‘Study Design and Implementation Device’ (DIAD). The definition is narrow to the point that scholars, administrators, teachers, and decision-makers in most curricular areas (including the arts) are likely to find that the data to support programs–even programs acclaimed as highly successful by all concerned–is difficult to come by.” Even though the NCLB Act is in the past, it is safe to say that theater programs are still at risk of getting cheated out, per say.  

Going back to standardized testing, readers may ask, “Despite the fact that schools were under pressure to meet certain expectations, what’s so bad about standardized testing for children? Isn’t it supposed to assess their academic needs?” It is, and it does to some extent. There is also nothing wrong with caring about academic achievement. Students and their guardians should! After all, the subject does dictate future career paths. However, it is the exaggerated importance of standardized testing and academic achievement that is the problem, for it is putting other pursuits in the shadows. 

I would like to call attention to “The Left-Behind Child.” My Composition II professor, David Hodges, brought this idea up to me while conducting my research. He defines the Left-Behind Child as “the child for whom school has no meaning, provides no inspiration, offers no hope is the child whose school ignores abilities and interests that aren’t measured by multiple-choice answers to tests.” In short, the Left-Behind Child is a hypernym used to describe children who excel in other subjects rather than academia. I resonated with this concept immensely. If my drama club friends and I didn’t have theater at our high school, we would have embodied the Left-Behind Child. Because as hardworking as we were in the classroom, we felt dead inside. The stage was where we felt most alive. 

At the same time, though, we desired to be recognized for our stage talents. But no matter how hard we tried to promote ourselves as artists, our teachers did not seem to care. Instead, they showed greater interest in school sports, our transcripts, our compliance in the classroom, and, most importantly, our test scores. We were merely numbers in their system. They did not see us as children, nonetheless children of the stage. And as a result of their carelessness, we felt almost invisible. No child should be made to feel like that. 

That is why educators must do everything in their power to keep activities like the arts alive in school systems. 

 References

Duignan, Brian, Jeanette, N.L., The Editors of Encyclopaedia Britannica. {2008, September}. No Child Left Behind. Britannica. https://www.britannica.com/topic/No-Child-Left-Behind-Act

Block, E.P., Wong, M.D., Kataoka, S.H., Zimmerman, F.J. {2022 January}. A symphony within: Frequent participation in performing arts predicts higher positive mental health in young adults. Elsevier. https://reader.elsevier.com/reader/sd/pii/S0277953621009473?token=40F400BA9F2CC4C36A1EE2533D3B7C418CFFB5F301D8FF87A2BFA7046FCF6A319AF709D75C3087B59A9A315C558818B7&originRegion=us-east-1&originCreation=20230306162421

Arts Education Partnership, American Arts Alliance, American Association of Museums, American Symphony Orchestra League, Americans for the Arts, Association of Art Museum Directors, Association of Performing Arts Presenters, Dance/USA, The John F. Kennedy Center for the Performing Arts/ Kennedy Center Alliance for Arts Education Network, MENC: The National Association for Music Education, National Assembly of State Arts Agencies, OPERA America, Theatre Communications Group, VSA arts. {29 August 2005}. No Subject Left Behind. Americans For The Arts. https://www.americansforthearts.org/sites/default/files/pdf/get_involved/advocacy/no_subject_left_behind.pdf

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About Samantha Szumloz

Samantha Szumloz is a Writing Arts student minoring in Creative Writing, concentrating in Publishing and Writing for the Public, and gaining a CUGS in Technical Writing at Rowan University. She has been published in places such as MORIA, Blue Marble Review, R U Joking?, Blood+Honey, Viridine Literary (forthcoming), Singularity Press, Halftone, and DisLit Youth Literary Magazine. Other than submitting to small publications, she serves as EIC of her literary and arts magazine Art-emis, posts religiously on social media, and obsesses over the latest Hunger Games novel. She resides in central New Jersey with her family. To get in touch with Samantha, her Instagram is @poemsbysammsy.
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12 Responses to Definition Rewrite—Shazammm

  1. Samantha Szumloz's avatar Shazammm says:

    I just put this assignment in the feedback please category. I know the word length is a little short. I was a little unsure about what else I should add or talk about in this piece. In your opinion, what else should I write about? What other things should I define? Did I start off this paper alright, or am I missing the mark? Thank you and have a good rest of your break.

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    • davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

      Try Defining “The Left-Behind Child,” Shazammm.

      Despite your claim that the “No Child Left Behind” act has benefitted students, the authors of “No Subject Left Behind” would certainly disagree. The use of standardized test scores as the sole measure of student success has NOT resulted in a broad expansion of programs to nurture every aspect of student instruction. Instead, it has compelled teachers to “teach to the standardized test” at the expense of almost everything else.

      If you read your last paragraph in this light, you’ll see that the authors of “No Subject Left Behind” are resisting attempts to ELIMINATE arts instruction. They believe “non-academic” or “non-basic-skills” elements of the curriculum are being eliminated because they haven’t been scientifically proven to contribute to those blessed test scores.

      Regardless of whether either side has a point here, YOU can concentrate on what you know to be true: that there is such a thing as the “Left-Behind Child” that isn’t measured by standardized test scores. The child for whom school has no meaning, provides no inspiration, offers no hope is the child whose school ignores abilities and interests that aren’t measured by multiple-choice answers to tests. The “Left-Behind Child” is the child you would have been if your school had not recognized the value of offering you a chance to develop your skills and interests.

      As a side benefit, it’s likely you did perform better on tests BECAUSE your school expressed interest in your “untestable” academic interests.

      As far as I know, nobody has yet provided a Definition of the sort of student who is UTTERLY DISMISSED by the “No Child Left Behind” program’s insistence on test scores as the only measure of achievement. You could provide that valuable service right here, in 1000 words.

      Helpful?

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  2. Samantha Szumloz's avatar Shazammm says:

    Hi professor, I know I need to work on this argument a bit more. But may I receive a grade on this assignment to let me know where I stand with this and my overall grade. Thank you very much!

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    • davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

      You have a strong writer’s voice and an authoritative tone, Shazammm. Readers will want to agree with you. Once you get your spend some time figuring out the REAL impact of NCLB, I’m sure you’ll write more persuasively about the danger it poses to ANYTHING other than measurable math and writing scores.

      The “three points” named in your source, “No Subject Left Behind,” far from being a commitment from the government, are the sounds of the arts community using a bullhorn to warn arts departments that they’re in danger.

      If you read page 10 of that source through a different lens, you can hear the authors warning faculty and administrators that their programs will havew to PROVE their value using “scientifically based research.”

      The authors are worried that:
      1) “Defining what constitutes acceptable ‘scientifically based’ research for the purposes of administering our educational system,” sounds responsible, but it really means a budget-cutter is in charge of judging the science.
      2) “Encouraging and instituting research in arts education activities and programs that meets the procedural definition of acceptable research” means staff will have to prove their value and effectiveness using a procedure nobody has yet identified.
      3) “Working to ensure that, as a practical matter, important information regarding the real-world growth and development of American children is not excluded from the decision-making process because it has not been collected or formulated in terms of “scientifically based research.” That’s the authors worrying that reports that show students show “real-world growth and development” could be ignored by local school boards if they can classify the evidence as “not scientifically-based.”

      Is that helpful?

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  3. Samantha Szumloz's avatar Shazammm says:

    Hi professor, I made numerous revisions to this argument. What are your thoughts and opinions? Did I meet the points you made? Did I make significant improvements?

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  4. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Oh, Shazammmm!
    I’ve been waiting for this breakthrough moment.
    Beautiful work.

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